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Denizens of the Chill Squall
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Everclear's comment on 2010-11-26 01:30 PM


I like this!



Don't let the others curtail your creative flare, the intro is good.



As the others above have pointed out, I think you should portray the spiders as an equally plausible solution rather than the correct explanation.



A metaphysical malevolent creature always seems to go down a treat on these pages; and the first explanation is rather interesting, perhaps that's why the spider explanation (though clever) doesn't have the same impact when it comes after the living storm idea. 



Keep up the good work.


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       By: manfred

The Black Forest- actually a part of another forest, is said to be cursed by the presence of some horrific monster, which burns the very earth with its body!
No one has yet seen it and lived to tell, so be warned!(see NPC Aurelius Blackfoot for details)

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