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Memory Moths
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-15 02:12 PM


Most evil and devious; my only objection are the names of existing Nordic gods - or rather, a raven in once case, a goddess in the other.


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The Starspawn
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-09 04:39 AM


Well, I like the back-story - though the telepathy thing takes a lot away from the possibilities. What if it had to resort to human senses to find out the murderous scum? Stalking, observing, judging, analyzing, before deciding to move away or in for the kill.



It could even improve its effectivity by instructing others to follow its path, a cult leader of sorts, or the founder of a philosophy...



Lots of potential, but much of it untapped.


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NAS Autopsy Report 14
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Water)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-12-07 04:57 AM


Well, a nest of them seems to be worth the nuke, a single one, as written, appears in the flamethrower-plasma grenade-HEAP missile range;



Unless the demon part inside gives it more resilience and strength than anatomy would suggest, and as it appears to be able to hide in sewers, hence, is not huge, I'd place it as a threat like, for example, the Starcraft Hydralisk: can rip up an armored car, a tank will shoot it to bits.


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Gauntlets of Strength: A detailed analysis
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-04 03:12 AM


Echo likes. Now think up a similar item for other attributes!


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Romantic Love
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-02 07:41 AM


It is good that you brought the topic up, but generally, I found applying dice modifiers to love unnecessary - players who care about the characters and NPCs enough to be bothered by the concept of love will act it out - and sometimes deliberately fail rolls; likewise will they succeed without rolling against fear and the like when their loved ones are in danger; often these scenes will be entirely roleplay and no system.



So, good idea, but approach it from a different angle.


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Romantic Love
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-02 09:19 AM
Ah, makes sense now.
Thus, perchance a more powerful, confronting wording may be in place!
"What can challenge the boldest knight whom a dragon's claw cannot touch?..."
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Blast Cane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-25 08:24 AM
Why? Do you often encounter the need to turn people into mush? Go to Comment
Blast Cane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-25 08:25 AM


A decent sub, simple and useful.


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-25 02:11 AM
We'll be like the 30-Brigade, Cheka, piling up useful 30-whatevers in the Citadel. Get working on those 30 elvish gifts! Go to Comment
30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-27 01:04 PM
As long as the personality is pleasing to your senses, it can be all kinds of scrumptious. Go to Comment
Glowing Idol of Gnashtooth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-22 02:05 AM
Actually, just enchanting random rocks means that a human simply cannot sneak past goblins, as a precise ring of blue will flare up around his position.
Improving this spell, it could release flashes of light when humans approach, dulling their eyes to the presence of goblins in the dark.

Withholding vote, this could be so much better. Go to Comment
Glowing Idol of Gnashtooth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-22 07:35 AM
Oh. You have not seen "biting" yet :D
But: always glad to be of service. Go to Comment
Telportia
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-05 04:50 AM
A decent kernel of an idea, plainly written though, and needing some work - presentation, detail, verisimilitude. Also, the name is as if you named London "Imperial Capital 47", and Constantinople "Big City on the Bosporus". Go to Comment
30 Halfling Gifts (For Services Rendered)
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-06 06:50 AM
"The hero of Canton is... Jayne!" Go to Comment
30 Halfling Gifts (For Services Rendered)
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-06 06:50 AM
We shall mine this win for all it is worth! Go to Comment
30 Campaign Starters
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Encounter)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-30 02:41 AM
Echo likes. Echo votes. Echo will use some of them. Echo will expand once inspiration hits. Go to Comment
30 Campaign Starters
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Encounter)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-01 02:23 AM
As for the "same race" issue - if the GM and players make characters together, then often, they will be more compatible than the 'every man for himself' approach, where every player makes a PC and then try to fit them together. Likewise, then the approach 'you are all dwarves from the hold of Kazak Pwn' is viable.

Also, why would the PCs in #5 have to be of the same race? They could be from a town with a 50/50 human/gnome ratio, an elven enclave and a dwarven craftsman. Solved.
#10, nobility? An empire the size of Rome will have scores of races within its borders, and the nobility will represent it if it is egalitarian. Humans and elves already have no trouble marrying anyway, and with the wonders of magic, many weird unions become possible.
Along the same lines, #18 can see an extended family with a tiefling, half-elf, aasimar and half-dragon... and Harmandur the dwarf is adopted.

Where there is a will, there is a way.

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Pocket Army
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-28 03:22 AM
Echo likes.
So, how exactly can they become free? Go to Comment
Courageous Shield
Items  (Armor)   (Sentient)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-20 07:51 AM
*An origin story! How did it become the way it is?
*Previous users and inventive non-standard uses?
*How does the shield survive the punishment it draws to itself?

^
Suggestions. Wink wink. Go to Comment
Courageous Shield
Items  (Armor)   (Sentient)
EchoMirage's comment on 2010-09-20 03:59 PM
Try some power metal songs. Inherently ostentatively heroic and kinda annoying. Go to Comment
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