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The Lonesome Village
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (City)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-06-16 04:21 AM
In a fantasy world, there are so many things that can drive you mad ... you think napalm is bad? Have a dragon incinerate your village. You thing being violated in a back street is horrible? Have a demon do it. Family problems are already enough to unhinge a mind - now try and imagine knowing that one of the quarrelsome family members is possessed/a doppleganger, and find out which - they all behave irrationally already!

*shudder*

It does not take much to reduce one to a gibbering wreck!
5/5 Go to Comment
Lizardfolk Gold
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-05-25 02:35 PM
Heh, the adventurers who wear it care! I(magine that adamantine was pink, mithral turqouise and meteoric iron orange! It would severely limit your choice of equipment, unless of course you INTENDED to look like a circus tent. Go to Comment
Bianca la Fiere
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-06-20 11:57 AM
A teacher. An avenger against a unsavoury party. A great story hook, or a way to show the mighty warrior that no-one is invincible.
Say, fifteen years later, a young lad/lass could appear at courst, desiring to be the duellist, much against the mother's wishes.
If Bianca found some latent magical abilites, she could fully compensate for her lack of sight - like a fortuneteller in a book of TerryPratchett, who trained her precognition to work on the present. Go to Comment
Mona
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-05-28 03:39 PM
Tragic. Tortured. Tremendous potential.
Trust me on this - tend to this teen in the tales I tell I shall. Go to Comment
Pouch of many (un) usefull things
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-01-06 04:30 PM
Heh, much unlike a guy I played with once... He put down some adversary, and I explained: "All that is left of him is but a hollow scream..." and he answered: "Great! I pick up the scream. Now I got my own scream!" Go to Comment
Umbral Clot
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-05-25 02:46 PM
Nice! Like Pratchett's flowing light and dehydrated water ... Go to Comment
Emperor Zal-Ghombvis
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-06-20 11:43 AM
Well, and? What happened to the novels? Were they published, stayed unfinished, or are lying in a dusty drawer somewhere? Go to Comment
Yuna Holystone
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-11 04:09 PM
Well she IS a Yuna ripoff... someone wanted a cute goody-good character, he (she) made it. An avatar of an idealized self. Go to Comment
The king
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-06-09 12:49 PM
Just try writing more than 5 lines... Go to Comment
Xoct's Sauce
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-06-19 07:19 AM
This is one cool item, better than all the "Swords of the Infallible Gods" and "Legendary Kick-Ass Wrist Blades of Nobody-Can-Use-Us-Except-True-Masters"

Believable and amusing, witrh campaign potential. 5/5 Go to Comment
Xoct's Sauce
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-06-19 07:21 AM
There could be others, like Bilukka, a tasty spicy sauce that enhances fertility, or that really exquisite ChocBanaKiwiMint fruit that you can't get enough of, but that gives you a 5% chance of fumbling up any spell. Go to Comment
Egg Cup of Summoning
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-05-25 02:54 PM
Most delightful! That is how magic is to be done - not with the wink of a hand, familar, come to me, be my slave, but with tradition, ritual, song and incantation!

Makes the familiar feel special, too... Go to Comment
Bra of Holding
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-10-20 02:39 AM
Also, a nice way for amazons not to have to cut off a breast...
Just keep them out of the way until action is over... Go to Comment
Lady Shadow
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-12-21 02:52 AM
Okay, I must postulate that I HATE (HATE HATE HATE) anonymous comments. I do. Go to Comment
Lady Shadow
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-12-21 05:02 AM
what the... it is possible to rate anonymously? That feature should be disabled. Go to Comment
Lady Shadow
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-12-21 04:04 PM
Well, as for the character, she needs some serious re-working to be consideredat least marginally interesting. Go to Comment
Alia SunSoar
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-06-20 11:46 AM
So, a ripped-off Fremen, aye? Without background. But svelte and cute. So be it 3/5 Go to Comment
Four Arms
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-05-27 06:16 AM
This is actually nice, most nice.
And as for your worries - it will never get weird enough! Just keep getting weirder! The players will love unique opponents.

I agree with the suggestion that, while he is a positive character, Four-Arms should be an antagonist for the weak men hiding behind the false shelter of civilization, forfeiting individual power for the might of the masses...
Tremble, spoilt weaklings, at the fury of nature unleashed (down, bad dog, nooo!) Go to Comment
Cauldron of Hatred
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-05-28 03:10 AM
Don't be dismayed Captain, you have posted much better items, you will again.
About the item:
It is just like with nuclear weapons - if it is there, some fool might just use it, and if its ONLY danger is that it might kill the user inside an inferno it released, taking the whole surroundings with him, and it has no limits on activation (one does not need that much to set off a working nuclear warhead) it WILL be used too often - I suppose the cauldron is not consumed by its own rage, right? A reusable nuclear weapon? Imagine what certain folks, say, in Palestina, Iraq, Ireland or Basque would give for this...their very souls, and their grandma as a bonus.

Duh, I don't like nukes that much, except when dropping them at the Zerg... 3/5 Go to Comment
Yoshimuro-no-Bakemono
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-25 05:58 AM
Actually interesting, if a little short. I'm surprised that the Capt'n would ever use such a term as 'neutral good' ;) Perhaps you could edit him a bit and flesh him out? Still, I like it. Go to Comment
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