Alright, I'm not exactly the best poster, but I can see some problems with this one. Namely:
1)His race, what is it?
2)As Moon said, the platinum knight thing. Go to Comment
It is a lttle hard to read the post when there are thing$s in@ th&e middle of everything, and you don't tell anyone who the guy is, or how to reach the end. Go to Comment
NPCs (Major) (Travelers)