It is awfully short. A sound idea but with very little real use, it might be interesting if you could also summon things, or people, that are in the general area. Go to Comment

Short but sweet. A nice gift for your friendly neighborhood vampire hunter. Go to Comment

An interesting sword with an odd property. Go to Comment

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The odd succession rules are actually quite inventive. For instance, now the players will have an ally in the third house, since they probably didn't kill the king. Go to Comment

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Anything with spiders automatically is great, usually. The fact that you need to encounter both substances is ingenious. Go to Comment

You have a great idea here, but it would be nice to have a little more information. for example, how did them coming from the moon give them their appetite? Go to Comment

I also would like to see a more fleshed out backstory, and it does seem more productive to have it be an ingested or contact poison instead of injected. Go to Comment

Updated: The realm of Gaertanem will become it's own sub mission soon. Go to Comment

A few minute spelling mistakes, but an excellently fleshed out submission. Go to Comment

I think that this is a great idea for any campaign setting. By the way, in plot ideas, it's "Imperial" not "Emperial". Go to Comment

I am a big fan of mysteries and murders in the game. A great piece! Go to Comment

I know that I'm not really one to talk, but one thing I would like to see is a name for the clan of dark elves. Go to Comment

Just remember to have all your traps effect an area about ten feet before them. Go to Comment

Long, yes, but very detailed. Go to Comment

Alright, the knights of the Red Blade are an elite order that serve King Demitrius. They usually, but not always wield blades of flame. Actually Eldearth implies any time before the fall of Demitrius. I am going to submit Tluin's story a little later. Go to Comment

I do need to improve I see. Fell-Kin will appear shortly, also, Fyranteth is a Fell-Kin of NO little importance. He will also be appearing. Go to Comment

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Great mythology and easy to plug in. It gives a big "Aztec" (to use a specific as a catch-all) feeling.

 

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