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Tooky Bird
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Drackler's comment on 2008-05-11 06:05 PM
It is a fairly good idea, but it is also a little brief. A few more details would be nice, such as where they usually nest. A good first sub, and welcome to the Citadel. Go to Comment
Creeping Wax
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
Drackler's comment on 2008-05-10 05:50 PM
As you said, Valadaar, this item should be used sparingly. The backstory is intriguing, and the item itself is interesting. Go to Comment
Silver Oak
Locations  (City)   (Any)
Drackler's comment on 2008-04-29 09:23 PM
Exretemely well written and fleshed out. Welcome to the Citadel, Silveressa. Go to Comment
Amplifier Stud
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Drackler's comment on 2008-04-14 08:39 PM
A nice piece to use for a specific objective. Could the players cause one of themselves to become farsighted, just so that they can see farther for a while.
Good Job, Pieh. Go to Comment
The One Night Game
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Drackler's comment on 2008-06-10 01:26 PM
Have you ever read the Enchanted Forest series of books? True they were written for kids, but they put an interesting new aspect on the old fairytales. Go to Comment
The Undertaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Drackler's comment on 2008-03-17 03:07 PM
Colorfully creepy in a a melodramatic sense...
Or, whatever.

A good plot-backed NPC. Go to Comment
Disentegrating Necklace
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
Drackler's comment on 2008-03-06 10:32 PM
A good idea, but short. the backstory could probably use some work. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Swamp)
Drackler's comment on 2008-02-24 05:53 PM
I have to agree with Valadaar, this one should be put in the "In Work" section. Go to Comment
Dugfar's Drastic Dirt Displacement Device
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Drackler's comment on 2008-02-24 05:49 PM
Short, but sweet. Go to Comment
Emerald of Character
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Drackler's comment on 2008-02-24 05:46 PM
I noticed a few spelling and grammatical problems, it's also a bit short. But, as others have said, it shows definite promise. Go to Comment
Simidon the Brave
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
Drackler's comment on 2008-02-18 10:42 PM
As manfred said, somewhat disturbing, but altogether good. Go to Comment
Sanguine Dagger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Drackler's comment on 2008-02-17 08:21 PM
Not a major, plot-defining item, but enjoyable nonetheless. Your vocabulary is exhilarating and your creation is definatly useful. Go to Comment
Icevein Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Drackler's comment on 2008-02-22 05:23 PM
Short sweet and useful. Go to Comment
Glacier's Sigh
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Drackler's comment on 2008-02-17 08:39 PM
Simple and sweet. I have but one question, if the flower melts at the touch of warm-blooded creatures, then how do alchemists extract the essence? Go to Comment
Wishful Thinking
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Drackler's comment on 2008-01-25 05:01 PM
The possibilities are hilarious. I'll definitely use it in a future adventure. Go to Comment
Find the Flower
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Drackler's comment on 2008-01-09 09:56 PM
A good, quick plot, however, although possibilities 1 and 2 vaguely allude to some sort of "sacrifice" to be made to the shrub, it is never given thought by the rest of the submission. Go to Comment
Arctic Spire
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Drackler's comment on 2007-12-25 10:13 PM
Simple and brief. Go to Comment
Old Crynog
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Natural)
Drackler's comment on 2007-12-24 12:08 PM
He reminds me of The Grinch as well. A nice NPC for every winter adventure. Go to Comment
The Hightower Skirmishers
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Drackler's comment on 2007-12-25 10:23 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tombstone Brook
Locations  (Other)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Drackler's comment on 2007-12-23 09:02 PM
Gravestones, spooky.

The idea and description are great, but it is a little brief. Personally, I would like to see some sort of explanation, even a short one. Then, if someone didn't like it, they could just think up their own. Go to Comment
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