It is a fairly good idea, but it is also a little brief. A few more details would be nice, such as where they usually nest. A good first sub, and welcome to the Citadel. Go to Comment

As you said, Valadaar, this item should be used sparingly. The backstory is intriguing, and the item itself is interesting. Go to Comment

Exretemely well written and fleshed out. Welcome to the Citadel, Silveressa. Go to Comment

A nice piece to use for a specific objective. Could the players cause one of themselves to become farsighted, just so that they can see farther for a while.
Good Job, Pieh. Go to Comment

Have you ever read the Enchanted Forest series of books? True they were written for kids, but they put an interesting new aspect on the old fairytales. Go to Comment

Colorfully creepy in a a melodramatic sense...
Or, whatever.

A good plot-backed NPC. Go to Comment

A good idea, but short. the backstory could probably use some work. Go to Comment

I have to agree with Valadaar, this one should be put in the "In Work" section. Go to Comment

Short, but sweet. Go to Comment

I noticed a few spelling and grammatical problems, it's also a bit short. But, as others have said, it shows definite promise. Go to Comment

As manfred said, somewhat disturbing, but altogether good. Go to Comment

Not a major, plot-defining item, but enjoyable nonetheless. Your vocabulary is exhilarating and your creation is definatly useful. Go to Comment

Short sweet and useful. Go to Comment

Simple and sweet. I have but one question, if the flower melts at the touch of warm-blooded creatures, then how do alchemists extract the essence? Go to Comment

The possibilities are hilarious. I'll definitely use it in a future adventure. Go to Comment

A good, quick plot, however, although possibilities 1 and 2 vaguely allude to some sort of "sacrifice" to be made to the shrub, it is never given thought by the rest of the submission. Go to Comment

Simple and brief. Go to Comment

He reminds me of The Grinch as well. A nice NPC for every winter adventure. Go to Comment

Only voted Go to Comment

Gravestones, spooky.

The idea and description are great, but it is a little brief. Personally, I would like to see some sort of explanation, even a short one. Then, if someone didn't like it, they could just think up their own. Go to Comment