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The Other Side
Plots  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Drackler's comment on 2013-03-26 02:26 PM
This is a well thought-out, well planned scenario. I like that you've made it adaptable to fit around other adventures and events, or to be use solely. The gods presented are both familiar and interesting.
The bonuses applied would have to be changed based on the game you're using, but giving them to us as guidelines helps.

Overall, I like it quite a lot. Go to Comment
Lwausf's Intra Continental Sling Shot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Drackler's comment on 2013-03-26 12:10 PM
This is an entire campaign. The character start in a tiny village, approximately 200 miles away from the dwarven or goblin lands. A stray bearachute lands in their town hall, causing havoc. Investigating what happened leads them on a course of political intrigue, vampire-lycan parley, sailing, fighting, and (mostly) bears. Go to Comment
The Athlran
Lifeforms  (Character)   (Citadel Help)
Drackler's comment on 2013-03-26 12:01 PM
It's a fairly complete amount of information, and it's obvious that you've put quite a bit of work and creativity into it. I did notice the grammatical errors, which don't detract from the concept, but make it harder to read. The whole submission is formatted rather well, with a good eye toward structuring the information.
However, there are some points that could use some fleshing out. For instance, when describing the Athlran High Council lots of names are given, but not much to attach to those names.
I would also like to see some plot hooks or similar- some ideas on where to start if we wanted to introduce the Athlran into our games.

Overall, a good, usable submission, with a couple rough edges. Go to Comment
Plague Dragons of Tameltyne
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Drackler's comment on 2012-08-29 01:35 PM
I like it. But I have a few questions. First and foremost, what do they look like? Generic-dragon-number-seven? Typical scales and wings and claws? When I read "Plague Dragons" I envisioned something decaying or at least with some physical mimicry of death.
And that brings me to my second question: Why are they called "Plague Dragons"? I'm kind of assuming that it's more of a "plague of dragons", but I'm still not sure.
And one more question. What or where is Tameltyne? The name is what drew me in, and then the sub didn't really deliver or explain the name.

But, with all that said, I really like the idea of it. It gives lots of opportunities to throw it in somewhere (including male Plague Dragons that didn't make the cut the last time, and are now trying to gather up enough power for a second chance with the new batch of queens).
The one-year period is full of chances for adventure, battle, and glory. You could even have a whole campaign made of hunting down these dragons and killing as many as possible- either to save the kingdom or to help out one of the queens that hired the party. Power-scale would be easy, since the dragons would be growing all the time, as would the party's power-level. Go to Comment
Daggers of Torxes
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
Drackler's comment on 2007-04-06 05:52 PM
When the king heard of what had happened he was shocked and because he placed such trust in the high mage he agreed with
him that he should be exiled from the city of his birth.
his heart and mind consumed with fury, he turned to darkness.

In these two sentances I see a few to many pronouns. A good submission nonetheless. Go to Comment
30 Flies
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Drackler's comment on 2012-02-24 11:57 PM


 A good mix of flavour and use, with the occasional plot-idea thrown in. I especially like the USOG, though I don't know what setting to use them with, either.


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falling empires
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Drackler's comment on 2008-05-12 09:38 PM
You're going to need to check spelling and grammar again, and a few details added would be nice. The basic idea is intriguing, but this seems more of a setting in which to create a plot, rather than a plot unto itself. Welcome to the Citadel, Brutus. Go to Comment
Tihewgoe
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Drackler's comment on 2011-08-01 07:03 PM
Not purposefully, no. Go to Comment
The Perils of Envy
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Mini-Campaign)
Drackler's comment on 2011-07-20 11:56 PM


 I like it, though I do agree with others about the plot. It's not bad, but I think more of it would do better. Perhaps it was just the way the post was written, but it felt like the beginning and end lasted forever, while the middle flew by too fast to notice.



 Perhaps something in the beginning that required the players to dig up the information, instead of getting it from the Seer (being so close to death might blind him more than his disease). Others have pointed out some good ideas.



 However, I did like it immensely. My attention was kept by the whole thing and it made sense. It would benefit from being fleshed out, maybe given more complexity, but it's good and useful how it is.


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My Favorite Characters
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Drackler's comment on 2007-06-05 04:42 PM
That's because you wouldn't have your hard earned gold dumped in a hole somewhere. Go to Comment
My Favorite Characters
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Drackler's comment on 2009-03-03 03:00 PM
My favorite character was... Is Alduous Chalbringer. Alduous was a witchhunter in a homebrew game that I played once and then never again. He's your stereotipical gun-slinging guy in a duster and with a dark look in his eyes. Yes, quite a bit cliched, but I like it. Although I have actually played very little with him, I have transfered Alduous into a couple different game systems (including Call of Cthulhu) in the hopes that I will someday be able to adventure further as Alduous Chalbringer. Go to Comment
The Blood Beast
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Other)
Drackler's comment on 2008-05-27 10:39 AM
This is a good beginning. You address many thing that we need to know to be able to use this creature, but you might want to go into more detail. For instance, ranged weapons have little effect on Blood Beasts, but you don't say how. Do the projectiles pass right through them? As a liquid creature, can it just move it's body out of the way so quickly?

Also, in the background, you might want to add some descriptive flair.

But, once he had enchanted the foul beast, it rose up and engulfed him.

Something like that, maybe. Just one more thing, you might want to put in some plot suggestions. You know, a way for us to introduce these beasts in our games. Something like what Shadoweagle said, or a murder where the body has been dragged to the edge of town. Only the observant can see that the victim has no blood left in him, and that the trail actually leads away from the body, towards town! Go to Comment
Zombies in the House!
Articles  (At Table)   (Gaming - Genre)
Drackler's comment on 2011-02-27 10:13 AM
I just looked up that game, and now I think I need to find myself a copy. To be sure, an already existing map would be easier to use than drawing all your own by hand for ZitH! You could even use city street maps for larger-scale games. Go to Comment
Croc-a-Pult
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Drackler's comment on 2011-02-25 08:12 PM


 You could always add in the further information on the end, in case somebody wanted to read it.


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Skrelleth Demons
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Drackler's comment on 2011-02-25 08:18 PM


 It's good, it's usable, and I liked the narrative introduction. I especially liked the image of the demons warming themselves on Sean's hatred.


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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Drackler's comment on 2011-02-27 10:44 AM


66. Perfect for creating paranoia in pirate captains. Simply feed your croc his hand, and you'll never have to worry about it again.


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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Drackler's comment on 2011-02-27 10:45 AM


I only added one, but I hope it helps you reach 101.


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Spies of Lindor
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
Drackler's comment on 2008-03-06 09:25 PM
A little short, it would be nice if you fleshed out the backstory a little more, also, it would be extremely interesting if you could describe the two factions in more detail. Go to Comment
Painted Minotaur Room
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Drackler's comment on 2010-08-09 05:46 PM
I never can get enough rooms and puzzles. This one has the simplicity that it needs to work, but I can see the heroes getting caught up for a long time, trying to get past the puzzle all the wrong ways.
I am curious: Did anyone in particular create this puzzle? Is it usually found in labyrinths, hence the minotaurs? Do the other painted minotaurs have any sort of abilities, or are they just for decoration?

Good job on your first submission, Cressida, and welcome again to the Citadel! Go to Comment
The Demon-Stick
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
Drackler's comment on 2010-08-06 08:17 PM
I like it. You did a good job of giving us a good item to use, as well as some good tips on using it. The whole thing feels just a bit tongue-in-cheek, but in a serious way (that doesn't make sense, but don't mind.) Good job, Pieh. Go to Comment
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