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The Candles of God
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-15 05:29 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Watch Out for that... ouch...
Dungeons  (Any)   (Traps)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-26 09:48 AM
Neat as a stub, but it would be nice to see it built into a larger submission. Go to Comment
Frieze Door Trap
Dungeons  (Other)   (Doors)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-29 02:19 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Red Hand
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-05 02:54 PM
A start, but I'd love to see more of it. Go to Comment
Guild of Messengers aka Red Caps
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 03:26 PM
I like it. But I don't get why they're forbidden to be literate in any other tongue. If it's to keep messages secret, why allow them to memorize messages? Furthermore, how does one enforce illiteracy? That aside, I like these postmen and their hats. Go to Comment
The Brotherhood of Larfu
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2012-12-12 07:40 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
An ecological dungeon
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Ecology)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-31 02:47 PM
A noteworthy and useful scroll/codex. Anything that makes you really think about your worlds and how they operate is valuable, and this one does a great job as spurring that discussion. Go to Comment
Culture and Food
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2006-10-13 03:10 PM
In Chinese culture, there is a concept of wok hei, which literally translated is "breath of the wok." Hei is another form of the word ki, which is that classic Oriental monk spiritual source of power. Foods that have good wok hei are said to be better for one's spirit (and of course better in taste) than those that lack it. Perhaps a whole school of magic could exist that deals with the preparation and consumption of food. Go to Comment
The End of the World
Systems  (Geological/ Geographical)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2012-12-22 03:11 PM
Neat discussion! A timely HoH bump. Go to Comment
Grolen - A type of Winged Gargoyles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2014-04-02 10:49 AM
The description is great. I'd love to hear more about them. Go to Comment
The Slurg
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-31 03:38 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Guild of Anawaith
Society/ Organizations  (Natural)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-05 03:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 11:46 PM
Great detail. I like feeling like I've read about a historical entity than a purely fictional place. The little bits of knowledge in there really give it a homey feel. Go to Comment
Maternity Blossom
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-10 10:26 AM
I'm curious about the nature of the stone. Is it an actual rock, or like a kidney stone, or what? Go to Comment
The Tabards of Nhil-Haress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-19 03:20 PM
Very subtle, just enough to make a player wonder. Go to Comment
Ring of Stonekin
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-02 10:22 AM

Reminds me of some classic comic book tropes, the idea of some technology or item eventually corrupting the user, turning them into something they didn't intend (Doc Ock, for example). I can see the same idea functioniong for any fantasy race.

Go to Comment
Danrick's Sword
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-27 11:06 PM
I like it, a useful item for cursing. Would the wielder need to know the staff is cursed and use it in a particular way, or would simply touching the staff cause the curse to spread? Maybe it's the sort of thing where one must seek vengeance to enact it. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-13 04:52 PM
Best Magic Name of the Year:
"The enourmpus awake the greatest demon spell"

That is solid gold. Go to Comment
The Flute of Hlatar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 10:36 AM
It is a bit powerful, but I don't mind such things when power comes at a price. Here you've got a guy who creates a race of killing machines and his only way to control them was to trust a djinn. See how well that turned out.

I also like the idea that a simple musical instrument can control an unstoppable army with a few toots. Like if the Pied Piper had dire rats. Nice work. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2013-01-02 02:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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