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Sword of the Ocean
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2016-12-03 08:18 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Coinlenders Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 02:01 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Thick As Thieves
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2007-10-30 09:38 AM
'Nuff said. Go to Comment
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2016-10-31 09:50 AM
This one made me laugh, but more than that it's a clever concept. One can imagine a group of adventurers stumbling into Awan, hearing the distant "a-wan"ing and cocking eyebrows at the afflicted villagers. This one's a real beaut. Go to Comment
The Kamuinji Sabre
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-22 02:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Auchinduin Deep Iron Mine
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-29 09:08 AM
The clathrates are a neat idea, and I like the place you've built for one to live here. Go to Comment
Troll Gloves
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-29 12:21 PM
It's nice to have a back story for the standard "+1" items. As an individual sub, well, it's not a lot to look at.

Someone should do a 30 of these: 30 Backgrounds to Everyday Magical Items. Go to Comment
E'Scatonia's Little Chest
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2016-12-02 11:49 AM
This is so great. I was captivated the whole time. The writing style was sharp and scandalous, and the item's effects thoroughly unique. Excellent work.

Also, what's a zorse? Go to Comment
PC's and Artifacts of Legend
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-15 02:24 PM
Great advice, Nobody. Why not make this a codex/scroll? That way, we could add suggestions to limiting things of power, while adding submission of our own that follow the ideas presented. Go to Comment
Qacha's Neck
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-05 05:50 AM
What a lovely little town. The little stories and oddities of Qacha's Neck make it so realistic and enchanting. Go to Comment
Silvered Irons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Heroic)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-10 09:25 AM
I like a good Western fantasy now and then.

I like how these guns don't kill, just wound. Something seems to be lacking in their making... Can't quite put my finger on it. But good job, though. Go to Comment
Silvered Irons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Heroic)
Dozus's comment on 2016-11-30 12:30 PM
Magic + Guns = Neat Go to Comment
Book of the Storm
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-08 09:17 AM
Excellent work. I like how you involved so many aspects of the Shards: the Storm Queen, the Desert of Divine Despair, the Shards themselves. Well done. Go to Comment
Saint Vedast's Zephyrous Icon
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-07 10:43 PM
Thanks for the HoH submissions, guys. I'm glad you liked the item.

Brother Hural's position is debated by the faithful. Some see him as a martyr, but others believe his end was the wrath of Saint Vedast punishing the monk for some offense. So while some see him as a hero who died honoring his patron, others view Hural as a fallen man who did not heed the saint. Go to Comment
Locations  (Regional)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-07 12:28 AM
A nice overview of the region. Can we look forward to individual submissions on the Kovu, the Karnak, and Accad Doman? Go to Comment
Vychan the Flamespewer
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-06 10:42 PM
Great addition to Manfred's plot, and a great submission on its own. It's interesting to see a dragon who doesn't spend most of his time torching heroes. Go to Comment
The S'krae
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-06 10:12 PM
Updated: Added "Ve'laan" category, added paragraph about S'krae breeding, added info about S'krae religion (or rather lack thereof). Go to Comment
The S'krae
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-06 10:16 PM
Tan'S'krae is used in any formal situation. Weddings and mating ceremonies would probably be included, along with negotiating an offense to honor.

I have added a paragraph under "Society" to answer your questions regarding S'krae young.

I also added a few sentences about their lack of religion. In sum, it is a cultural thing, stemming from their ancestors' loss of faith following the great drought that killed most of their population. Go to Comment
The S'krae
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-08 11:20 PM
Erm... 'Cause I'm a lousy biologist. :-D

Point taken on the gills. In accordance with the laws of science, and since they're not exactly vital to the submission anyway, I've removed the gills. Go to Comment
The Society of Nightmares
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2006-02-05 01:50 AM
Hm, interesting. A torture guild.

I think we could use a little more background. While a mysterious origin sounds cool, it doesn't give much content. I'd like to hear more about the organization's background. Who founded it? Why? Is there any motivation for torture beyond money?

It's a good, solid start, but some more would be nice. Go to Comment
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       By: Umberle

All spell casters gain their abilities through a form of demon possession. So in order to gain magical abilites, PCs must track down and trap demons. Of course there are some pretty powerful demons, if the demon is stronger than the PC, the PC could find themselves subjugated to the Demon's will.

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