Strolen\s Citadel content. 
Grolen - A type of Winged Gargoyles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2014-04-02 09:49 AM
The description is great. I'd love to hear more about them. Go to Comment
The Slurg
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-31 02:38 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Guild of Anawaith
Society/ Organizations  (Natural)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-05 02:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 10:46 PM
Great detail. I like feeling like I've read about a historical entity than a purely fictional place. The little bits of knowledge in there really give it a homey feel. Go to Comment
Maternity Blossom
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-10 09:26 AM
I'm curious about the nature of the stone. Is it an actual rock, or like a kidney stone, or what? Go to Comment
The Tabards of Nhil-Haress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-19 02:20 PM
Very subtle, just enough to make a player wonder. Go to Comment
Ring of Stonekin
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-02 09:22 AM

Reminds me of some classic comic book tropes, the idea of some technology or item eventually corrupting the user, turning them into something they didn't intend (Doc Ock, for example). I can see the same idea functioniong for any fantasy race.

Go to Comment
Danrick's Sword
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-27 10:06 PM
I like it, a useful item for cursing. Would the wielder need to know the staff is cursed and use it in a particular way, or would simply touching the staff cause the curse to spread? Maybe it's the sort of thing where one must seek vengeance to enact it. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-13 03:52 PM
Best Magic Name of the Year:
"The enourmpus awake the greatest demon spell"

That is solid gold. Go to Comment
The Flute of Hlatar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 09:36 AM
It is a bit powerful, but I don't mind such things when power comes at a price. Here you've got a guy who creates a race of killing machines and his only way to control them was to trust a djinn. See how well that turned out.

I also like the idea that a simple musical instrument can control an unstoppable army with a few toots. Like if the Pied Piper had dire rats. Nice work. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2013-01-02 01:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-25 08:27 AM

I like this take on the "awakening ancient powers" plot.

Go to Comment
Knooble Glitio
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-04 09:24 AM
I'm glad Ramhir said what he said. Waz hasn't logged on since shortly after this sub, and I wonder if comments like those drove some of our new Citadellians away.

That said, this sub definitely needed work. It was a very basic, if well-written, gnome inventor/pilot guy. Something to set him apart would be nice. Go to Comment
The Sands of Fury
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-05 08:57 PM
I love the description, and the overall idea. It would be nice to have some background to fill it out. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Dozus's comment on 2012-12-12 06:41 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lenses of Llorn
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-25 11:00 AM
Interestingly subtle magic here. Go to Comment
Bromine Lake
Locations  (Regional)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 10:37 PM
Neat! I kept expecting a natural solution for the lake's warmth, and in a way we got one. The leaves of mortal doings always have an impact in the world - it would make sense for a magic item to do the same. Go to Comment
Doomsday Item
Items  (Jewelry)   (Campaign Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-05-24 07:17 PM
That crab is quite possibly the best idea for an NPC villain I've ever heard ever. Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 10:13 AM
One of my favorite goblin subs. Go to Comment
By the law they froze
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-08 01:13 PM
A simple but well-outlined plot that's almost universally useful. Bravo, an HoH for you. Go to Comment
Total Comments:

Join Now!!

Fatal error: Call to undefined function top_menu() in /home/strolen/public_html/lockmor/application/views/citadel/vfooter.php on line 2