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The Flute of Hlatar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 09:36 AM
It is a bit powerful, but I don't mind such things when power comes at a price. Here you've got a guy who creates a race of killing machines and his only way to control them was to trust a djinn. See how well that turned out.

I also like the idea that a simple musical instrument can control an unstoppable army with a few toots. Like if the Pied Piper had dire rats. Nice work. Go to Comment
Petra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2013-01-02 01:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Jermayan
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-25 08:27 AM


I like this take on the "awakening ancient powers" plot.


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Knooble Glitio
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-04 09:24 AM
I'm glad Ramhir said what he said. Waz hasn't logged on since shortly after this sub, and I wonder if comments like those drove some of our new Citadellians away.

That said, this sub definitely needed work. It was a very basic, if well-written, gnome inventor/pilot guy. Something to set him apart would be nice. Go to Comment
The Sands of Fury
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-05 08:57 PM
I love the description, and the overall idea. It would be nice to have some background to fill it out. Go to Comment
Anrathi
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Dozus's comment on 2012-12-12 06:41 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lenses of Llorn
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-25 11:00 AM
Interestingly subtle magic here. Go to Comment
Bromine Lake
Locations  (Regional)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 10:37 PM
Neat! I kept expecting a natural solution for the lake's warmth, and in a way we got one. The leaves of mortal doings always have an impact in the world - it would make sense for a magic item to do the same. Go to Comment
Doomsday Item
Items  (Jewelry)   (Campaign Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-05-24 07:17 PM
That crab is quite possibly the best idea for an NPC villain I've ever heard ever. Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 10:13 AM
One of my favorite goblin subs. Go to Comment
By the law they froze
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-08 01:13 PM
A simple but well-outlined plot that's almost universally useful. Bravo, an HoH for you. Go to Comment
Twig
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-05 02:19 PM
This is a solid elf weapon. The "elf into a tree" is a nice touch. Go to Comment
Boots Too Fine for the Earth
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-12 07:10 PM
Why haven't I voted on this before? It's a beautiful story, and a fine item. Go to Comment
Strike Down Mother Earth
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-13 10:48 PM
The names are neat, though the item seems disconnected somehow. Effects are neat, if a tad overpowered. Go to Comment
The Jester's Loot
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 03:49 PM
I found the name "Binky" distracting, kind of took me out of the post. Is that a nitpick? It feels like a nitpick.

That aside, this is a somewhat amusing item. There are a number of spelling errors and typos, and there does seem to be some inconsistency, or at least ambiguity about what will inflate and what won't. I'd like to see it reworked a bit for clarity, maybe a few plot hooks thrown in. Go to Comment
Coat of Teeth
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-22 11:10 AM
I love the image of this armor, and its practical uses even more. Go to Comment
Sadist Dagger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-05 01:44 PM
I like the mild horror factor. For some reason I have minor trouble accepting that the rage of a cobbler who eventually killed his wife could make such a curse as this one, but such is the way of magic. Go to Comment
Flask of Many Liquids
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-22 08:26 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Box That Cannot Be Opened
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2009-03-09 05:48 PM
Whenever offered the choice of a thousand wonders or a mysterious closed box, always go with the box. Go to Comment
Canteen Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-11 11:20 AM
Part of me wants to vote this lower because of length, but it's such a good, solid, usable item I can't. I'd probably give it more if some plot points were thrown in, but I can't fault its utility. Go to Comment
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