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30 Mages
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-25 11:50 PM
Really great archetypes. I like that you've drawn from history, but instead of lifting wholesale wizards we're familiar with, you've molded famous personages into unique mages. Well done. Go to Comment
Ye Olde English, the Archaic Word Challenge
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-24 10:46 AM
Scratch that, I'm gonna do the screevers. Go to Comment
A Multitude of Mountaineers
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 11:46 AM
Make it a 30! :-D It might be easier to write. Go to Comment
30 Priests
NPCs  (Extras)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-20 01:42 PM
I think the trick is to remember that priests are people, too. To make them one dimensional - purely good, or evil, or what have you - is to weaken their character too much.

I post this with full realization that my 30 is essentially a list of one-dimensional characteristics, perhaps two. But I see these as archetypal seeds to plant a full-fledged character with flaws and virtues like anyone else.

I think any of these clergy have the potential to be good or bad. To wit: the Pardoner, though corrupt in his desires, can provide hope to the hopeless by appealing to the benefits of the afterlife. Maybe he even cuts his prices to peasants who have seen particularly bad times. Conversely, the Merciful might blindly protect some trickster criminal or worse, inadvertently providing his church's sanctuary to a villain and making capture by the PCs all the more difficult. Go to Comment
30 Priests
NPCs  (Extras)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-11 11:11 AM
The Prophecy of Mourngrymn has come true!
Creating Generators from 30s Go to Comment
The Hands of the Master
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-22 07:07 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
30+ Kings
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2007-01-23 09:58 PM
Updated: Good idea, CM. Go to Comment
30+ Kings
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2007-01-29 08:27 PM
The Khufu
This life is simply preparation for the next. A large percentage of the kingdom's resources are dedicated to building an enormous monument and tomb for when this king eventually passes. He is a decent ruler, but his reign will not stand out in the minds of the people; he will be remembered only by his tomb.

The Cleopatra
In order to keep the kingdom free, this monarch is willing to do anything - and I do mean anything. She freely offers her body to powerful men in order that she too might gain influence. The common people, of course, know nothing of this, though the nobles are well aware and have mixed feelings on the matter.

The Constantine
The gods of old are pushed aside at the command of this newly-converted monotheistic king. As temples are torn down or rededicated to the new deity, many convert either out of reverent zeal or desire to save their rank in the kindgom. Other, however, stubbornly resist and outright ignore the king's will. Go to Comment
The 30
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-22 09:22 PM
What can I say? I love the 30s. It's a great resource for whenever you need a variety of some background character. Fun to write, too. Great idea, Moon. Go to Comment
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-16 05:56 PM
Neat idea. Go to Comment
Pathkeepers of the Eternal Pattern
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-11 12:24 AM
An excellent system. I like the creation story, reminds me of The Silmarillion in some ways, but is distinctly unique. A well thought out pantheon that covers pretty much everything to boot. Very good work. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-09 02:58 PM
Based on a real predator:

I actually think the real animal is a bit cooler than my fictional one, but I wanted a land-dwelling variant. Go to Comment
il-Armor of Wrath's Avenger
Items  (Armor)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-08 03:14 PM
Quite well written, good background. But it is rather cliche and, as Manfred mentioned, there doesn't appear to be a downside. It's good, but I think it could have been better. Go to Comment
Markus the Black
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-03 01:30 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Knuckle Roller
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-03 01:25 PM
Fun stuff, and practical too. Go to Comment
Fountain of Goats
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-30 11:08 PM
Children of Glass
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-28 11:36 AM
I absolutely love it. The visuals themselves are stunning, and the culture and belief system just adds to the glory of it all. Very well done.

Was the "Staff of Axtrami" a true divine event, a meteor of happenstance, or somewhere in between? Go to Comment
Children of Glass
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-10-04 06:00 PM
A suggestion: add this to the "Ouqzuin Dremorix" freetext for easier browsing. :) Go to Comment
Wonders of Africa
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-27 02:50 PM
It'd be a nice li'l series of idea seeds, but I'm afraid it's not really an article. Go to Comment
The RJD2 CyberVirus
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Cyberspace)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-26 02:33 PM
Sweet, a sci-fi twist on that thing. Go to Comment
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