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But they're only minions...
Articles  (Character)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-20 11:40 AM
In that case, a "Gaming the System" penalty might be instituted. It would certainly negatively impact experience or at least alignment, in being so inconsistent in character. Go to Comment
But they're only minions...
Articles  (Character)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-21 10:45 AM
Your comment makes me think of the game roguelike game Dwarf Fortress. The game populates the world with thousands of individuals, each who have names, parents, lovers, lives, and deaths. When you come across a camp of bandits or goblins, they're not nameless nobodies, and when they are killed, you can go back and look at their personal histories to see who exactly they were.

Conversely, there's a glitch that will sometimes randomly spawn a castle with no name, populated by dozens of nameless opponents who have no skills, weapons, or equipment. They just randomly attack you and they fall by the wayside meaninglessly.

More of the former and less of the latter should be a rule of thumb. Go to Comment
But they're only minions...
Articles  (Character)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-25 09:05 AM
My (completely unsolicited!) advice on sub editing:

Read the comments and weigh them against your own thoughts. If you both agree and think it relevant, edit. If you don't, don't. Take everyone's opinions in the highest respect, but don't let other's comments dictate what you post.

/unsolicited advice Go to Comment
Farons, the Voidwalkers
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-18 11:45 AM
The mythology bit about Imsir's creation and the writing of the Book of Knowledge was quite interesting.

It seems Farons have no weakness. Is this true? If they're totally invincible with their Runix armor, have an army with fantastic weapons, and know everything there is to know about anything - how are they to be interacted with? What could possibly defeat them, or even gain anything of use from them? Go to Comment
The Players Cult
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 07:02 AM
Not much else to say that hasn't been said. Really cool idea with a great execution. Go to Comment
Oekaki Writing
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Citadel Help)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-11 01:02 PM
Challenge accepted. Go to Comment
Specialst Damien Snow
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-11 07:47 AM
Interesting. Aside from the general "modern" and "war" attributes, what kind of setting are you putting him into? Go to Comment
Specialst Damien Snow
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-11 08:33 AM
I think my question is unclear because I'm not entirely certain what I'm asking myself.

I guess I'm curious about what kind of setting he's in. Is he just a 21st century NATO operative in a 3rd world military operation? Is he a rogue operative on a quest to track down his father's killer? What context should I understand him in?

I think I'm trying to get how he'd react in the setting. I know I'm being terribly vague in my questioning, for which I apologize. But right now, I feel like my understanding of Specialist Snow is tenuous, with a list of attributes, a motivation, and nowhere to go.

Would quotes help maybe? An example of how he's trying to track down his patricidal adversary?

Is anything I'm saying making sense, or am I rambling without a foreseeable direction? Go to Comment
Ashantar, the Beacon of Hope
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-06 06:08 AM
Wow, there's a lot of neat elements in here. I like that first bit about the warriors seeing visions of their fallen ancestors and family members to drive them forward on the battle field.

Am I correct in guessing that English isn't your first language? There's a number of grammatical errors and word mis-usage, but it doesn't affect the reading too much.

You're building an interesting world here. I look forward to seeing where it goes. Go to Comment
Taqukaq's Trading Post
Locations  (Establishment)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 02:28 PM
Update: Any suggestions before putting this one to print? Go to Comment
Fo Derarer Agger
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 06:29 AM
Welcome to the Citadel, Darkonyx! Glad to see you making your first submission.

A few suggestions on this sub. First, while giving the item some background is great, it might help to put it more into context. We don't really know who Emperor Sarth III is, nor anything about the Ashatar Empire or the tonuges of Vuderan. Help us a little more with context and tell us more about these guys.

Secondly, while the stats are a big help, realize that Citadellians use a wide variety of systems. Maybe add some more context about what benefits the armor provides in game. It obviously adds a lot to health: why? How? Provide not just the mechanics, but more in-context explanation (ex.: the blacksmith was also a powerful sorcerer, and imbued the heart of the Ashatar Warrior God in the fires of his forge).

Also, it helps to add some visual details when explaining items. What makes this armor unique, aside from its magical properties? What does it look like?

Lastly, tell us how to use it in a campaign. Who possess the armor now? How could it be acquired? Does it have any dangers associated with it or its possession? These things make it a practical, usable campaign item.

This article provides some more suggestions for your first entry: http://strolen.com/viewing/New_to_Strolens_Citadel

You look like you have some interesting ideas behind this sub, and I can't wait to read more from you, Darkonyx. Welcome, and thanks for writing with us! Go to Comment
Fo Derarer Agger
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 06:30 AM
Here's another very useful article by MoonHunter: http://strolen.com/viewing/Five_Best_Tips_for_Posting_on_Strolens_and_Other_Places

And I meant DarkoRnyx. :) Sorry for the typo. Go to Comment
The Dog Pit Public House
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-02 12:47 PM
Update: Hey, I figured out how to add pictures. Go to Comment
The Dog Pit Public House
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-02 03:01 PM
Not really. The worst injuries the Pit deals with are broken limbs, concussions, etc. And "deal with" here means "dump unconscious fighters in the back alley." Discarded limbs and piles of entrails would lead to too many questions. Go to Comment
The Dog Pit Public House
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-03 03:08 PM
An honor! I look forward to reading about it in a future Kingmakers installment. Go to Comment
The Dog Pit Public House
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-03 03:09 PM
The gambling is only referenced off-hand. I'll think on and put something substantial up there. Go to Comment
Atheus
Locations  (Continent)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-04 06:44 AM
Not bad. Gives us a nice overview of the setting. I look forward to seeing how all these peoples and places interact to provide a unique setting. Go to Comment
SR/L-1 Ostrich
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-27 11:23 AM
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is the first time we've seen Africa mentioned in the Cosmic Era. What's the political layout there, if I may ask? New New Imperialism, the rise of a Pan-African state, ethnic- and language-based state divisions? Go to Comment
Is Anybody Out There?
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-19 01:20 PM
A nice article dealing with the Fermi Paradox: "Where is everybody?"

I'd like to see it deal more directly with how a RP setting might be built out of this. With no aliens to fight (and, if we're being as realistic, only nigh-to-light rather than faster-than-light engines), what conflicts - if any - would arise? Are there resource wars after we build Dyson spheres across our solar region? Who, if anyone, governs a pan-galactic society?

At any rate, it's nice work charting the territory of the fateful answer to Fermi's question. Go to Comment
Is Anybody Out There?
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-01 06:32 AM
"In an informal discussion in 1950, the physicist Enrico Fermi questioned why, if a multitude of advanced extraterrestrial civilizations exists in the Milky Way galaxy, evidence such as spacecraft or probes is not seen. A more detailed examination of the implications of the topic began with a paper by Michael H. Hart in 1975, and it is sometimes referred to as the Fermi–Hart paradox." Go to Comment
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