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Larvae of the Outer Gods
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-27 03:20 PM
Great categorization. Ranking and organizing unfathomable monsters seems an attempt to tame them with our words, no matter how feeble that attempt may be. Go to Comment
The Guild Game
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-24 05:17 PM
Two dozens PCs, disappearing royals, and a talking postal panda? This sounds awesome. Go to Comment
Barathra
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-06 09:05 AM
Wow. There's so much here, and the presentation is lovely.

I'd love to see a write up on Devourers. What happens when they die? Do they go into Congeria as well?

The whole cycle - life in Atheus, to afterlife in Barathra, to magic in Congeria - is wonderful. It's like the Law of Conservation of Energy, but with souls.

Excellent work. Go to Comment
Redux Tantibus
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2015-02-02 08:54 AM
Kind of reminds me of Ghostbusters, when Gozer created the giant Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man.

I feel like an experienced adventurer would know better than to read an ancient dungeon inscription aloud, but it makes sense as a trigger. Go to Comment
Fort Hard
Locations  (Fortification)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-04 06:53 AM
This is an interesting little trap (get it?). If one exits through the trap door, are they restored to their proper size, or do they remain tiny? Go to Comment
What Is A Dwarf
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 04:32 PM
Great atmospheric piece. I'd love to see more like it. Go to Comment
The Needwain
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 08:34 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Key, Quill, and Seal
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 11:32 AM
I like the sense of mythos you have with these items. They seem like something Sir Gawain might hear about on a quest, or stories that were passed down through the ages.

I'd love to see some more plothooks here, but it binds well to your Ahkti myth. Go to Comment
Fena, the Demon Goddess
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 02:08 PM
A very interesting progression. I like the duality here, and the idea of binding evil to do good. Excellent work. Go to Comment
Ahkti: The Great Ancestor
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 11:28 AM
The evolution of Ahkti is great, showing the changes over the eras. I agree with Val re: religious practice. The basic theology of Ahkti is here, but I wonder what rites and rituals were carried through the ages, or how they were changed over time as well. Still, it's a very fine base. Go to Comment
The Prophet John
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 06:12 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Kingmakers: Final Update/Autopsy
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-05 02:13 PM
Sorry to hear Kingmakers go. But it is good to be so self-reflective on what happened. Go to Comment
Lunism
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 06:00 PM
As others said, this is a thoroughly believable faith with naturalistic sources. Well thought out, too. Go to Comment
30 Items You Need
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-03-04 01:45 PM
Extremely practical, yet also descriptive and creative. Well done. Go to Comment
Skeletrons
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2015-03-26 12:37 PM
Skeletrons. Go to Comment
Lazarus Lightward
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2014-10-14 09:22 AM
Excellent Go to Comment
The Helmet Of BEES!
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 04:35 PM
This is great! It's just ridiculous enough to work. Go to Comment
W
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2013-04-19 08:50 AM
Sort of feels like the setup of one of those cerebral Twilight Zone episodes that stay in a single shot until the final scene when something crazy happens. I'm curious as to how they all ended up in jail, particularly the clergy (harboring criminals in sanctuary? religion persecuted?). Go to Comment
Npc Generator Pirates
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Dozus's comment on 2014-09-08 04:49 PM
So cool. And useful. And rad. And pirates! Go to Comment
Npc History Generator
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2013-04-17 03:27 PM
43. Kidnapped by rivals
44. Converted to a different faith
45. Became patron of scientific works
46. Married a political rival's relative
47. Banished significant ethnic group from territory
48. Scandalized by false accusations
49. Foiled assassination attempted
50. Divorced from spouse
51. Produced illegitimate children
52. Crushed popular rebellion
53. Seized control of rival territory Go to Comment
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