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30+ Kings
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2007-01-23 09:58 PM
Updated: Good idea, CM. Go to Comment
30+ Kings
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2007-01-29 08:27 PM
The Khufu
This life is simply preparation for the next. A large percentage of the kingdom's resources are dedicated to building an enormous monument and tomb for when this king eventually passes. He is a decent ruler, but his reign will not stand out in the minds of the people; he will be remembered only by his tomb.

The Cleopatra
In order to keep the kingdom free, this monarch is willing to do anything - and I do mean anything. She freely offers her body to powerful men in order that she too might gain influence. The common people, of course, know nothing of this, though the nobles are well aware and have mixed feelings on the matter.

The Constantine
The gods of old are pushed aside at the command of this newly-converted monotheistic king. As temples are torn down or rededicated to the new deity, many convert either out of reverent zeal or desire to save their rank in the kindgom. Other, however, stubbornly resist and outright ignore the king's will. Go to Comment
The 30
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-22 09:22 PM
What can I say? I love the 30s. It's a great resource for whenever you need a variety of some background character. Fun to write, too. Great idea, Moon. Go to Comment
Time-Wine
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-16 05:56 PM
Neat idea. Go to Comment
Pathkeepers of the Eternal Pattern
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-11 12:24 AM
An excellent system. I like the creation story, reminds me of The Silmarillion in some ways, but is distinctly unique. A well thought out pantheon that covers pretty much everything to boot. Very good work. Go to Comment
Grassbiter
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-09 02:58 PM
Based on a real predator: http://www.sheddaquarium.org/sea/fact_sheets.cfm?id=66

I actually think the real animal is a bit cooler than my fictional one, but I wanted a land-dwelling variant. Go to Comment
il-Armor of Wrath's Avenger
Items  (Armor)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-08 03:14 PM
Quite well written, good background. But it is rather cliche and, as Manfred mentioned, there doesn't appear to be a downside. It's good, but I think it could have been better. Go to Comment
Markus the Black
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-03 01:30 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Knuckle Roller
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-03 01:25 PM
Fun stuff, and practical too. Go to Comment
Fountain of Goats
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-30 11:08 PM
FOUNTAIN OF GOATS! Go to Comment
Children of Glass
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-28 11:36 AM
I absolutely love it. The visuals themselves are stunning, and the culture and belief system just adds to the glory of it all. Very well done.

Was the "Staff of Axtrami" a true divine event, a meteor of happenstance, or somewhere in between? Go to Comment
Children of Glass
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-10-04 06:00 PM
A suggestion: add this to the "Ouqzuin Dremorix" freetext for easier browsing. :) Go to Comment
Wonders of Africa
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-27 02:50 PM
It'd be a nice li'l series of idea seeds, but I'm afraid it's not really an article. Go to Comment
The RJD2 CyberVirus
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Cyberspace)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-26 02:33 PM
Sweet, a sci-fi twist on that thing. Go to Comment
The Mountain of Boats
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-29 03:01 PM
Water-Giver constantly bleeds water. Anytime a stray spark pops up, he sends his servants to wash it up. Go to Comment
The Mountain of Boats
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-25 11:41 PM
1 for the sheer work put into it, and 4 for the creativity and greatness. Well done, Cap'n. Go to Comment
Crawlers of the Dark
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-26 12:22 PM
Spectacular! Go to Comment
Trireme of the Dammed
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-17 11:13 AM
You must finish this one! I'm still a big fan of the idea. Go to Comment
Mugama, The Gold That Is Not
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Ecology)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-01 08:22 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Mechnician's Tool
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-12 03:23 PM
How versatile and inventive. A great illustration of your mechinician concept. Go to Comment
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