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Grassbiter
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-09 02:58 PM
Based on a real predator: http://www.sheddaquarium.org/sea/fact_sheets.cfm?id=66

I actually think the real animal is a bit cooler than my fictional one, but I wanted a land-dwelling variant. Go to Comment
il-Armor of Wrath's Avenger
Items  (Armor)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-08 03:14 PM
Quite well written, good background. But it is rather cliche and, as Manfred mentioned, there doesn't appear to be a downside. It's good, but I think it could have been better. Go to Comment
Markus the Black
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-03 01:30 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Knuckle Roller
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-03 01:25 PM
Fun stuff, and practical too. Go to Comment
Fountain of Goats
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-30 11:08 PM
FOUNTAIN OF GOATS! Go to Comment
Children of Glass
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-28 11:36 AM
I absolutely love it. The visuals themselves are stunning, and the culture and belief system just adds to the glory of it all. Very well done.

Was the "Staff of Axtrami" a true divine event, a meteor of happenstance, or somewhere in between? Go to Comment
Children of Glass
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-10-04 06:00 PM
A suggestion: add this to the "Ouqzuin Dremorix" freetext for easier browsing. :) Go to Comment
Wonders of Africa
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-27 02:50 PM
It'd be a nice li'l series of idea seeds, but I'm afraid it's not really an article. Go to Comment
The RJD2 CyberVirus
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Cyberspace)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-26 02:33 PM
Sweet, a sci-fi twist on that thing. Go to Comment
The Mountain of Boats
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-29 03:01 PM
Water-Giver constantly bleeds water. Anytime a stray spark pops up, he sends his servants to wash it up. Go to Comment
The Mountain of Boats
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-25 11:41 PM
1 for the sheer work put into it, and 4 for the creativity and greatness. Well done, Cap'n. Go to Comment
Crawlers of the Dark
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-26 12:22 PM
Spectacular! Go to Comment
Trireme of the Dammed
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-17 11:13 AM
You must finish this one! I'm still a big fan of the idea. Go to Comment
Mugama, The Gold That Is Not
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Ecology)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-01 08:22 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Mechnician's Tool
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-12 03:23 PM
How versatile and inventive. A great illustration of your mechinician concept. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-20 01:39 AM
Updated: Adjusted a few measurements and corrected a grammatical error. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-20 12:45 PM
Yes, we certainly can. Go to Comment
Corvorane's Cave
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-24 04:36 PM
Deja-vu can't be helped. It's an olde skool plot that kinda follows a predictable formula. I tried to punch it up with the mad prisoners and Threll the thief, but it's mainly meant to be a well-done classic dungeon. Go to Comment
The Shadow...Swollen
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-18 07:33 PM
Gotta second CP on that. I'll wait to vote until he gets some more detail. Go to Comment
The Swollen Shadow
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-18 04:10 PM
A full-fledged campaign, and an interesting one at that. Old school action, terrible beasts, side quests, detailed storyline... A very excellent quest. You are to be commended. Go to Comment
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