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Corvorane's Cave
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-24 03:36 PM
Deja-vu can't be helped. It's an olde skool plot that kinda follows a predictable formula. I tried to punch it up with the mad prisoners and Threll the thief, but it's mainly meant to be a well-done classic dungeon. Go to Comment
The Shadow...Swollen
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-18 06:33 PM
Gotta second CP on that. I'll wait to vote until he gets some more detail. Go to Comment
The Swollen Shadow
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-18 03:10 PM
A full-fledged campaign, and an interesting one at that. Old school action, terrible beasts, side quests, detailed storyline... A very excellent quest. You are to be commended. Go to Comment
Convict Collar
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-19 11:27 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Greiges' Killer Shrews
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2006-09-16 09:29 AM
Heh, reminds me of Princess Bride's R.O.U.S.'s. The wizardry thing is a nice touch. Go to Comment
Space Combat - Weapons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-13 08:08 PM
RS-947 "Hitman" sniper rifle

Sniping can be a problem when the target is in an enclosed location with no point of entry. Not so with the RS-947 rifle. Rather than crudely firing a round through a barrel and the air, requiring the sniper to find a "clean" shot, the RS-947 teleports the round as soon as it is fired. A sniper simply has to set the coordinates--easy with the attached X-ray scope--and pull the trigger. The round is teleported directly in front of the target, allowing the sniper to fire from any position in range. Note that the RS-947's teleportation device is made to transport only matter; energy ordinance is not compatible with this rifle.

Adapted from the Star Trek: Deep Space 9 episode Field of Fire.
http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/series/DS9/episode/104571.html Go to Comment
Space Combat - Weapons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-13 08:08 PM
Woo, sci-fi! Go to Comment
Space Combat - Weapons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-13 11:04 PM
Chemical Agent µ-5793R, a.k.a. "Demon's Blood"

The most corrosive substance known to humanity, Demon's Blood was first discovered in crystalized form. It was found in the burnt out hyperdrive core of a ghost ship, apparently formed when the core suffered a meltdown. The crystals melt at a mere 400°F, making a liquid corrosive which no known substance can stop. Researchers were able to recreate the conditions the crystals formed, and the military quickly found application. Demon's Blood crystals can be carried by troops into enemy territory. A crystal is attached to a thermal grenade and thrown. Upon detenation, the crystal melts and the chemical is splattered, burning through anything in its path. Demon's Blood is also useful for space combat, burning holes through an enemy hull and causing vacuum leaks. While no material substance known can stop Demon's Blood, a magnetic or energy shield repels it fairly easily. Go to Comment
Space Combat - Weapons
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-18 12:31 AM
VTT-666 "Hell Tank"

A ground vehicle designed for the various volcanic worlds in the Human Empire, the aptly-named Hell Tank can go where few other armored vehicles can. Half meter thick duranium armor protects the tank from lava, magma, even low-grade plasma. Like most tanks, the VTT-666 is propelled by hover treads, but these can be retracted and four duranium treads - two dorsal, two ventral - extend, allowing the tank to crawl over the harshest terrain. A plasma drill allows the tank to even burrow beneath molten rock if necessary.

The Hell Tank is powered by a Mk. IX "Envy" fusion engine. Armaments vary by field usage, but the standard VTT-666 is equipped with an M-79 "Wrath" repeater turret, two forward-mounted TS-49 "Pride" plasma cannons, and an LR-987h "Avarice" artillery system. The pressurized cabin houses up to two pilots and one gunner; all crew are required to wear heat-resistant pressure suits while operating in volcanic terrain.

Inspired by a FlashChat, I believe between Scrasamax and myself. Go to Comment
The Silenced Ones
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-12 03:03 PM
Very good, and very creepy. I get a great visual of a Silenced One over a terrified traveller, its eyes expressing its desparation and unholy need to tell their tale as it tears off his ears. I love it. Go to Comment
The Mad Prophet Aldiel
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-09 11:16 PM
A good color character. Go to Comment
Cestus Etherium
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-03 11:28 PM
The cestus is all too often overlooked as a weapon. This is a nice, practical use of one. Go to Comment
Knight Templar of Alaithor
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-03 11:19 PM
Good background, interesting details. A nice modification of the classic paladinic order. Go to Comment
The Stories of Sama
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2006-07-03 11:22 PM
A very authentic-sounding creation story. Go to Comment
Sekkitan blood diamonds
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-29 08:05 PM
Thanks for the format advice, Muro. It has been implemented.

Glad you like the Last Wish hook. If you or anyone else can think of more hooks, feel free to share. ;) Go to Comment
Caern of the Steam Bringers
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-29 06:35 PM
A unique little dungeon. Perhaps as another hook, a paladin or cleric in the party senses dark, cursed presence and attempts to find and purify the source. This leads the party to the cleft, and the paladin insits they go and cleanse the darkness. Go to Comment
Dragon Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-28 10:59 AM
Pretty detailed, for essentially being a really big crossbow. Now that you mention it, why aren't there more elephants in fantasy? Go to Comment
The Noil Ruins
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Style)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-01 07:19 AM
Excellent. It has a very subtle, creepy feel to it. Great details, good variety. Could have possibly used more combat, but I'll excuse that in favor of the amount of details and uniqueness. Job well done. Go to Comment
Jul-Ghose the Prophet
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-13 11:25 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Coward's Lot, the Bow of Caldwell
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2014-04-02 08:29 AM
Love the accompanying ballad. This is a good reinvention of the old idea. Go to Comment
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