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Button's, magic buttons
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-22 02:05 PM
Very cool! It's like a bag of minor enchanted items that might crop up on various masterwork or looted garments. I bet you could make a table of these and randomly attach a button to a garment found in a dungeon or treasure trove. Can't wait to see more like these from you, Eclipse! Go to Comment
The Abomination of Yirn Monastary
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-22 09:36 AM
Bizzaro. It definately has a melancholy feel to it which gives it lots of character. Well done!

One question: you said it's made of yak parts and has glass eyes. Is the head a yak skull, or just a pile of disjointed bones put together to resemble a human skull? Or is it something entirely different? Any selection would be pretty interesting, actually. Go to Comment
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Sentient)
Dozus's comment on 2017-05-31 09:54 AM
Neat! Very alien. I really like the picture of this huge thing just slowly drifting, purposeful, through the cosmos. Go to Comment
Short and Sweet
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-21 01:57 PM
Prince Lor
Bold, wise, full of charm,
Youthful into his old age.
Secretly? A lich. Go to Comment
Short and Sweet
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-21 05:16 PM
Certainly lots of fun. :D A good challenge, with some quality mini-subs. Go to Comment
Short and Sweet
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-21 09:02 PM
Renegade Rebellions
of revolutionaries:
tergiversation! Go to Comment
Short and Sweet
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-22 07:27 PM
Now we must move to limericks! Go to Comment
The Eolian Reel
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-21 09:55 PM
The Sonorous belled bracelets of Quokul
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-22 09:27 AM
Useful and quite interesting! A good backstory, too.

That's what we call a real solid sub, Eclipse! Huzzah for your first entry! Go to Comment
Thoron, the Crystal Ones
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-17 09:14 PM
Awesomeness! A very unique lifeform indeed. Silicate life is far too often overlooked in sci-fi.

The hive mind and symbiotic aspects remind me of sci-fi insectoid life (Starcraft's Zerg, Halo's the Flood, etc.), but they're so far removed from those similiarites that they're truly unique. Also, they're not evil like other hive minds, but in fact peaceful and curious. I love 'em! Go to Comment
The Silver Corp
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-16 12:05 AM
Very nice! Seems to be a combination and twist on several classics, but you've made it distinctly your own. I definately like the detail in their history, how they came to be who they are. I would have liked a little more detail on their structure, operation, etc., but the detail you've given is what some space traveller coming across them might expect to know. An excellent first submission, Corinth! Go to Comment
Plunger’s Poorly Placed Potatoes
Plots  (Travel)   (Side-Quest)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-04 06:13 AM
Quite bizzare and amusing. Now I can add "Potato Zombies" to the list of things that I shouldn't like, but do. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-02 06:55 PM
Very unique indeed. I do have one question: with such a bizzare and monstrous appearance - even with their masks - who would trade with these creatures? And what do they have worth trading? Go to Comment
Bellissa's plea
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Mini-Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-02 06:47 PM
I, too, have a softspot for dragons. This is a nice and simple sub that is adaptable to pretty much any situation. An excellent first sub, DD. :)

You might could complicate things by throwing in a monk of the Tagma Drakontas. The monk might assist the PCs, or walk in at just the wrong moment: when Bellissa breathes her last and the PCs are standing over her. The zealous monk jumps to conclusions and a standoff is made. Go to Comment
Dwarven War Chariot
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-02 06:42 PM
It's exactly what it should be: a "dwarfed" version of a war chariot. Go to Comment
The Order of Dalraaen
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-01 12:12 PM
Happy to surprise you. :)

I really wanted to cast them as a religion dedicated to order of all kinds: natural, social, personal, etc. Law logically followed order, hence it is somewhat legacentric (my own coined term). But their real aim is to bring the universe to order, not govern it through red tape. Go to Comment
The Sisterhood of the Pelagic Queen
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-14 04:58 PM
The Sisters care little for the affairs of land-dwelling men. Smuggling and piracy only bother them in that it troubles the waters of their goddess. If troublemakers get too close, the Sisters will make swift work of them as with any other vessel, eliminating the men and taking in the women.

Most pirates are superstitious and avoid the women, thinking them a bed omen. A few enterprising smugglers have learned the routes their floating cloisters wander, which even naval forces steer clear of. They follow far enough (they hope) to avoid detection by the Sisters, but using paths they know are under-guarded. Go to Comment
The Cultus of Vautu
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-11 09:05 AM
The soul of the new Paragon's host will remain in that body until death. They will have no autonomy and be completely subject to the Paragon's will, but for the rest of their (probably brief) life they have the honor of sharing a body with the original Paragon. Go to Comment
The Sectarian Wars - A History
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-30 12:23 AM
Finally up! The last faction should be added in the next few days. I just wanted to make sure the main sub got up for the quest deadline. Go to Comment
The Sectarian Wars - A History
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-30 06:03 AM
I added the Zephyrous Icon to the Sectarian Wars freetext. St. Vedast himself will get his own sub in due time. Go to Comment
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