Why hasn't this gotten an HoH yet? Go to Comment

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A decent structural laying out of this guild, but like Scras said, I'd like to see something to make it come alive. Go to Comment

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'Nuff said. Go to Comment

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The clathrates are a neat idea, and I like the place you've built for one to live here. Go to Comment

It's nice to have a back story for the standard "+1" items. As an individual sub, well, it's not a lot to look at.

Someone should do a 30 of these: 30 Backgrounds to Everyday Magical Items. Go to Comment

Great advice, Nobody. Why not make this a codex/scroll? That way, we could add suggestions to limiting things of power, while adding submission of our own that follow the ideas presented. Go to Comment

What a lovely little town. The little stories and oddities of Qacha's Neck make it so realistic and enchanting. Go to Comment

I like a good Western fantasy now and then.

I like how these guns don't kill, just wound. Something seems to be lacking in their making... Can't quite put my finger on it. But good job, though. Go to Comment

Excellent work. I like how you involved so many aspects of the Shards: the Storm Queen, the Desert of Divine Despair, the Shards themselves. Well done. Go to Comment

Thanks for the HoH submissions, guys. I'm glad you liked the item.

Brother Hural's position is debated by the faithful. Some see him as a martyr, but others believe his end was the wrath of Saint Vedast punishing the monk for some offense. So while some see him as a hero who died honoring his patron, others view Hural as a fallen man who did not heed the saint. Go to Comment

A nice overview of the region. Can we look forward to individual submissions on the Kovu, the Karnak, and Accad Doman? Go to Comment

Great addition to Manfred's plot, and a great submission on its own. It's interesting to see a dragon who doesn't spend most of his time torching heroes. Go to Comment

Updated: Added "Ve'laan" category, added paragraph about S'krae breeding, added info about S'krae religion (or rather lack thereof). Go to Comment

Tan'S'krae is used in any formal situation. Weddings and mating ceremonies would probably be included, along with negotiating an offense to honor.

I have added a paragraph under "Society" to answer your questions regarding S'krae young.

I also added a few sentences about their lack of religion. In sum, it is a cultural thing, stemming from their ancestors' loss of faith following the great drought that killed most of their population. Go to Comment

Erm... 'Cause I'm a lousy biologist. :-D

Point taken on the gills. In accordance with the laws of science, and since they're not exactly vital to the submission anyway, I've removed the gills. Go to Comment

Hm, interesting. A torture guild.

I think we could use a little more background. While a mysterious origin sounds cool, it doesn't give much content. I'd like to hear more about the organization's background. Who founded it? Why? Is there any motivation for torture beyond money?

It's a good, solid start, but some more would be nice. Go to Comment