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Short and Sweet
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-21 09:02 PM
Renegade Rebellions
of revolutionaries:
tergiversation! Go to Comment
Short and Sweet
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-22 07:27 PM
Now we must move to limericks! Go to Comment
The Eolian Reel
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-21 09:55 PM
The Sonorous belled bracelets of Quokul
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-22 09:27 AM
Useful and quite interesting! A good backstory, too.

That's what we call a real solid sub, Eclipse! Huzzah for your first entry! Go to Comment
Thoron, the Crystal Ones
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-17 09:14 PM
Awesomeness! A very unique lifeform indeed. Silicate life is far too often overlooked in sci-fi.

The hive mind and symbiotic aspects remind me of sci-fi insectoid life (Starcraft's Zerg, Halo's the Flood, etc.), but they're so far removed from those similiarites that they're truly unique. Also, they're not evil like other hive minds, but in fact peaceful and curious. I love 'em! Go to Comment
The Silver Corp
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-16 12:05 AM
Very nice! Seems to be a combination and twist on several classics, but you've made it distinctly your own. I definately like the detail in their history, how they came to be who they are. I would have liked a little more detail on their structure, operation, etc., but the detail you've given is what some space traveller coming across them might expect to know. An excellent first submission, Corinth! Go to Comment
Plunger’s Poorly Placed Potatoes
Plots  (Travel)   (Side-Quest)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-04 06:13 AM
Quite bizzare and amusing. Now I can add "Potato Zombies" to the list of things that I shouldn't like, but do. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-02 06:55 PM
Very unique indeed. I do have one question: with such a bizzare and monstrous appearance - even with their masks - who would trade with these creatures? And what do they have worth trading? Go to Comment
Bellissa's plea
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Mini-Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-02 06:47 PM
I, too, have a softspot for dragons. This is a nice and simple sub that is adaptable to pretty much any situation. An excellent first sub, DD. :)

You might could complicate things by throwing in a monk of the Tagma Drakontas. The monk might assist the PCs, or walk in at just the wrong moment: when Bellissa breathes her last and the PCs are standing over her. The zealous monk jumps to conclusions and a standoff is made. Go to Comment
Dwarven War Chariot
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-02 06:42 PM
It's exactly what it should be: a "dwarfed" version of a war chariot. Go to Comment
The Order of Dalraaen
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-01 12:12 PM
Happy to surprise you. :)

I really wanted to cast them as a religion dedicated to order of all kinds: natural, social, personal, etc. Law logically followed order, hence it is somewhat legacentric (my own coined term). But their real aim is to bring the universe to order, not govern it through red tape. Go to Comment
The Sisterhood of the Pelagic Queen
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-14 04:58 PM
The Sisters care little for the affairs of land-dwelling men. Smuggling and piracy only bother them in that it troubles the waters of their goddess. If troublemakers get too close, the Sisters will make swift work of them as with any other vessel, eliminating the men and taking in the women.

Most pirates are superstitious and avoid the women, thinking them a bed omen. A few enterprising smugglers have learned the routes their floating cloisters wander, which even naval forces steer clear of. They follow far enough (they hope) to avoid detection by the Sisters, but using paths they know are under-guarded. Go to Comment
The Cultus of Vautu
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-11 09:05 AM
The soul of the new Paragon's host will remain in that body until death. They will have no autonomy and be completely subject to the Paragon's will, but for the rest of their (probably brief) life they have the honor of sharing a body with the original Paragon. Go to Comment
The Sectarian Wars - A History
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-30 12:23 AM
Finally up! The last faction should be added in the next few days. I just wanted to make sure the main sub got up for the quest deadline. Go to Comment
The Sectarian Wars - A History
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-30 06:03 AM
I added the Zephyrous Icon to the Sectarian Wars freetext. St. Vedast himself will get his own sub in due time. Go to Comment
The Sectarian Wars - A History
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-30 10:25 PM
In a way, the Paragon chooses its own successor; free will for the Paragon's assassin is somewhat doubtful. There is a hint of infernal intervention.

It's a bit like the Chinese Mandate of Heaven concept. If the Paragon's host becomes weak, another will arise and take its place. And the Paragon's soul, being effectively immortal until Vautu arises, takes precedence over other life. Go to Comment
The Field of 10,000 Skulls
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-29 07:08 PM
That's a lot of skulls!

Seriously, quite eerie and definately interesting. Very good work. Go to Comment
Mastwood Island
Locations  (Area)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-29 07:06 PM
Not bad. As you said, basically it is a well hidden and defended tree farm. Definately functional and useful. Go to Comment
The Nempori
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Space)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-29 07:02 PM
A detailed twist on the old "hideous space monster thinks everyone else is hideous" gag. The details distance it from the old gag with pleasing results. Go to Comment
The Warcraft of Worlds
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-29 06:57 PM
Makes a heck of a lot of sense. A good reference. Go to Comment
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