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The Nempori
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Space)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-29 06:02 PM
A detailed twist on the old "hideous space monster thinks everyone else is hideous" gag. The details distance it from the old gag with pleasing results. Go to Comment
The Warcraft of Worlds
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-29 05:57 PM
Makes a heck of a lot of sense. A good reference. Go to Comment
30 Mercenaries
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2007-04-25 02:16 PM
Don't know why I missed this before. Go to Comment
Warship Classes
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-26 05:18 PM
Very thorough, certainly useful to anyone in a modern or sci-fi game. Go to Comment
The 'Elite' Goblin Cavalry of Terkuss Tahkhan
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-26 05:16 PM
HA! The best goblin sub ever! Such detail, such authentic goblinry!

A+ Go to Comment
The 'Elite' Goblin Cavalry of Terkuss Tahkhan
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-07 05:55 AM
An HoH bump for this classic goblin sub. Go to Comment
The 'Elite' Goblin Cavalry of Terkuss Tahkhan
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-05 12:18 PM
With all do respect to Scras' forerunner of a goblin sub, I like Terkuss' Kobelyn Calvary better. Go to Comment
Terramax Cruiser
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-26 05:10 PM
Very nice. The details are what really make this. It also feels like an authentic progression of history and Western military somehow. Can't quite put my finger on it... Maybe that the ships are named after admirals? Dunno, but I definately like it. Go to Comment
The Mortuary Hotline
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-26 05:05 PM
Very cool! Sounds like an authentic urban legend, like one they'd base one of those terrible horror movies on.

But much better, of course. :D Go to Comment
Game Cliches
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-26 05:02 PM
Heh, some excellent points and things to think about.

On the "To Hell with Altruism" comment: http://www.penny-arcade.com/comic/2005/01/14 Go to Comment
Scorpio-01, Marcos Mecina
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-26 04:50 PM
Agree with the above thoughts. Personally, he just seems like RoboCop in a bug outfit right now. Some more details would make him unique.

Also: in the title, you call him Marcos Mecina. The sub lists him as Marcos Medicina. Not sure which you intended him to be called. :) Go to Comment
Baiting the Trap
Plots  (Hired)   (Encounter)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-26 04:46 PM
A divine twist on a classic plot. Go to Comment
The Truth War
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 08:26 PM
Seems like a very classic "Religious zeal turns to violent crusade" plot. There's a lot of detail, but I'm not getting a "feel" for these characters. Maybe that was part of your point, that in war there's no individuals just factions. There's certainly an interesting feel to this whole war, though. Go to Comment
30 Imps
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 08:15 PM
My new favorite 30. :) Go to Comment
Elena "Bloodwind" Tyr
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 08:14 AM
Excellent stuff. This kind of technology lies somewhere between sci-fi, fantasy, and horror. Picturing her is genuinely creepy, and thinking about it more so. Very impressive. Go to Comment
Plants of the Garden-Fortress
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-23 11:41 PM
A nice assortment of unique foliage. This kind of stuff is the real meaty flavor of a good campaign. Go to Comment
Trailbane Pine
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-23 11:43 PM
A unique and useful tree. Go to Comment
The Isle of Dragos
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-23 11:45 PM
Everyone needs a secret underwater hideout. May as well make it a resort as well. Go to Comment
Of divine Life and Death
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-23 11:39 PM
It definately has a lot going for it, very interesting concepts on race and religion. It just seems to be lacking something, though...

It's like you've got a skeleton and musculature, but there needs to be a little skin. The sub itself is a little hard to follow with the formatting. I feel like there should be a few more details about these factions as well.

Overall, a 4.0 You've definately got something, it just needs a bit more to make it great. Go to Comment
X-Jacks
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-14 04:13 PM
I think the word I'm looking for is "awesome". Go to Comment
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