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The Gudhuhl Tribe
Society/ Organizations  (Agricultural)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-02 07:22 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Glacier's Fist
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-10 10:50 PM
If the Gavel inspired this, then I'm glad I submitted the Gavel. I like the backstory a lot, and though I agree that it's tough to fit this into a non-Kuramen setting, I don't think that's necessarily a detractor; some items, NPCs, and other elements are made to fit their setting and needn't be anywhere else. I do reflect Scras's thought that there should be another penalty or two from wielding it, perhaps something that could be a side effect of being "consecrated" with the essence of cold. One so consecrated might become eternally reliant on miserable cold to survive, or they would lose passion and ferocity forever from their minds, for example. Overall, though, I think it an intriguing piece. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-15 09:02 AM
I've not quite seen an elemental like this before. It's extremely well done, Scras, kudos. Go to Comment
The Beekeeper's Hat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-03 10:21 PM
A good explanation and background for a fairly simple enchanted device. Nice work, Stephie. :) Go to Comment
30 Swords
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-03 12:53 AM
Yay original magic swords! Go to Comment
Temple of the Stillborn
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-31 08:59 AM
Good idea. Hopefully, this will become an adoption agency for abandoned subs.

For the price of a cup of coffee a day, you can help save these poor subs. Make your pledge today! Go to Comment
Capt. Corrine 'Rings' d'Albertine
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-26 01:42 PM
Then here it is, submitted for your approval! Go to Comment
Terrain Features
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-20 04:55 PM
156* The ground seems to end suddenly in a great escarpment to the ground hundreds of meters below. You can see a waterfall some distance away, flowing down the sheer cliff face.

157* An enormous hole in the ground that has clearly been dug out by shovels. It used to be a diamond mine, but has long since been abandoned.

158* A group of caravan traders stopped by the side of the road. They nod politely as you pass, sitting in a circle and smoking a hookah.

159* A finely carved wooden bridge that goes over a small creek. One could cross the creek without it, so it's probably just for show.

160* A series of small, grass-covered "hills" surrounding the road. Hundreds of years ago, this was a primitive village with earthen structures, but they've long since eroded away.

161* A walking stick laying beside the rode. It is intricately carved, wrapped with a leather handle, and unfortunately cracked in half.

162* Traveling in winter, a family of snowmen has been built by the side of the road. One of them is headless.

163* Little gusts of wind form tiny cyclones, blowing leaves and debris into a spiral before scattering them above your head.

164* A tall totem shrine carved out of wood. It appears to represent a shark, and is decorated with some shells.

165* This desert steppe is bitter cold. Pure white snow blows across sandy dunes in an odd contrast. Go to Comment
Terrain Features
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2016-11-30 12:34 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2016-11-08 08:03 PM
Spear of Light
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-17 02:42 PM
I don't know why no one's voted on it, I thought it was quite good. It has a nice Paleolithic, haunted touch to it. It vaguely reminds me of Sekkitan blood diamonds in its accursedness. The extensive backstory gives it a nice flavor as well. Kudos to you.

My only question: how does one become an owner of the spear without it hating them? Does a true wielder need to be a tribesman, or is there a way to get it and not be cursed? Go to Comment
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-14 03:59 PM
Neat. Useful for adding cultural depth to any campaign. Go to Comment
Locations  (World)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-12 08:23 AM
I'm already a big fan. The setting is so fantastical you can't help but be intrigued. Go to Comment
Locations  (World)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-12 10:40 AM
This setting was a lot of fun. An HoH bump. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-12 10:58 AM
Updated: A bit more polished and expanded. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-13 10:49 AM
Not terribly. Usually if provoked, they'll run off, and they're not very territorial either. But if one were to rile an aerophin up enough, it could fight back and cause some nasty bites. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-04 09:29 PM
I just glanced over this comment and read the last line as "dolphin meat." Made me think what might happen if you ate a lot of aerophin. Would the consumed pantarbe build up in one's system, perhaps even to the point where they too can fly or at least float? Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2016-12-06 10:00 AM
In retrospect, I agree with Axle. "Several evolutions" sounds a bit silly. I've edited it out. But the discussion was great! Go to Comment
Yau Calabi Fold Engine
Systems  (Transportation)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-07 10:47 PM
A nice, relatively simple sci-fi FTL drive explanation. I like that it scientifically (fictionally) has a certain logic to it and makes sense. For some reason, it also seems very "standard" for me, like it wouldn't stand out in a crowd of FTL drives. But I guess I'm not much of a techie. :) I like it overall, however. Go to Comment
The Unclean Ones
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-02 10:34 PM
Great concept. Reminds me of ancient Greek rites: the dead had to be buried with coins over their eyes to pay the boatman on the River Styx. Without the money, they spend their afterlife as phantoms lamenting their improper burial. Sophocles' tragedy "Antigone" is based partly on the whole concept. Adding a level of physicality to it - literally having the dead rise from the grave demanding their proper rites - is an excellent addition. Go to Comment
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Traitor Weapon

       By: Cheka Man

A magical weapon which the third time it is used will turn on it\'s owner, killing or badly wounding him or her.

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