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The Guild Game
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-24 04:17 PM
Two dozens PCs, disappearing royals, and a talking postal panda? This sounds awesome. Go to Comment
Barathra
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-06 08:05 AM
Wow. There's so much here, and the presentation is lovely.

I'd love to see a write up on Devourers. What happens when they die? Do they go into Congeria as well?

The whole cycle - life in Atheus, to afterlife in Barathra, to magic in Congeria - is wonderful. It's like the Law of Conservation of Energy, but with souls.

Excellent work. Go to Comment
Fort Hard
Locations  (Fortification)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-04 05:53 AM
This is an interesting little trap (get it?). If one exits through the trap door, are they restored to their proper size, or do they remain tiny? Go to Comment
What Is A Dwarf
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 03:32 PM
Great atmospheric piece. I'd love to see more like it. Go to Comment
The Needwain
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 07:34 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Key, Quill, and Seal
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 10:32 AM
I like the sense of mythos you have with these items. They seem like something Sir Gawain might hear about on a quest, or stories that were passed down through the ages.

I'd love to see some more plothooks here, but it binds well to your Ahkti myth. Go to Comment
Fena, the Demon Goddess
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 01:08 PM
A very interesting progression. I like the duality here, and the idea of binding evil to do good. Excellent work. Go to Comment
Ahkti: The Great Ancestor
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 10:28 AM
The evolution of Ahkti is great, showing the changes over the eras. I agree with Val re: religious practice. The basic theology of Ahkti is here, but I wonder what rites and rituals were carried through the ages, or how they were changed over time as well. Still, it's a very fine base. Go to Comment
The Prophet John
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 05:12 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Kingmakers: Final Update/Autopsy
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-05 01:13 PM
Sorry to hear Kingmakers go. But it is good to be so self-reflective on what happened. Go to Comment
Lunism
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2014-01-22 05:00 PM
As others said, this is a thoroughly believable faith with naturalistic sources. Well thought out, too. Go to Comment
30 Items You Need
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-03-04 12:45 PM
Extremely practical, yet also descriptive and creative. Well done. Go to Comment
The Helmet Of BEES!
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 03:35 PM
This is great! It's just ridiculous enough to work. Go to Comment
W
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2013-04-19 07:50 AM
Sort of feels like the setup of one of those cerebral Twilight Zone episodes that stay in a single shot until the final scene when something crazy happens. I'm curious as to how they all ended up in jail, particularly the clergy (harboring criminals in sanctuary? religion persecuted?). Go to Comment
Npc Generator Pirates
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Dozus's comment on 2014-09-08 03:49 PM
So cool. And useful. And rad. And pirates! Go to Comment
Npc History Generator
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2013-04-17 02:27 PM
43. Kidnapped by rivals
44. Converted to a different faith
45. Became patron of scientific works
46. Married a political rival's relative
47. Banished significant ethnic group from territory
48. Scandalized by false accusations
49. Foiled assassination attempted
50. Divorced from spouse
51. Produced illegitimate children
52. Crushed popular rebellion
53. Seized control of rival territory Go to Comment
Perpetual War and the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-27 11:04 AM
Whoa. Unexpected twist.

I like pairing these various elements of fascism, alien invasion, and post-human cognition. It reminds me of a number of various books I've read before, but none putting together quite this combination of ideas. It's delightfully complex. Go to Comment
Perpetual War and the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-28 06:44 AM
I think I disagree with you. As the article suggests, the number of intelligences who are aware of the alien threat are limited to tiny handful. That group, while having a hand in some of the events of the Era, doesn't appear to have direct or total control. And given that they're superintelligent AIs, most of the events in the Cosmic Era happened before their existence. Thus the chaotic and existential portions of the Cosmic Era existed without the interference of the intelligences that were aware of the extraterrestrials. All they do is nudge things a bit. I think to suggest they're the entire architects of global affairs in the Cosmic Era is equating them to the Machines of the Matrix, when they're more akin to a super CIA/KGB in the Cold War: moving things behind the scenes while humanity takes its course. Go to Comment
The Kingmakers: Machias NPCs #1
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-25 07:09 AM
I like the details outlining the high barons. The somewhat imperious title of "Dragon" is pretty rad too - I like the implications of not only a bodyguard, but a personal assistant and killer. You've left some to the imagination with that position, but I like the ambiguity and the implications it has.

The other various personalities round it out well. Go to Comment
Valadaar, Hand of Ashantar
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-23 06:23 PM
Excellent quest idea! Go to Comment
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