Strolen\s Citadel content. 
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-09 11:24 PM
And here's the actual vote. Go to Comment
Chungwa Wolf
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-09 11:45 PM
I love the visual I get with this creature. I'm curious about the poison. Is it just a result of their "magically tainted prey," or a natural development of physiology like a komodo dragon's bite, or what? Go to Comment
Daymen Scarb
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-07 10:36 PM
The poor fellow! You actually feel for him, while at the same time being amused. Reminds me of a Groucho Marx-type scamp, except he's a sorcerer. Major props. Go to Comment
Alamras' Laboratory
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-07 10:41 PM
An interesting location, if anything. I keep feeling like the "moving building" thing has been done before, but I can't put my finger on what, and even if I could, this is still written uniquely enough to warrant favor. So well done. Go to Comment
The Magic of Food
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-03-04 01:37 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Underground)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-30 05:29 AM
In my mind, the comic image is a, well, comic-like image of them. I imagine them to look narrower, with thinner limbs and not such a large face, but something generally similar. They don't actually do any mining, they just exist in mineral-rich caves. Go to Comment
Ring of Heaven
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-29 08:02 AM
I can see this as a nice guarantor against tomb robbing among wealthy wizards and the like. Like Echo, I too would like to hear a bit more story to go with the fantastic mechanics. Are there any examples of this happening to a grave robber or the like? Go to Comment
Zhalinth Deshar
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-29 08:05 AM
Kinda neat! Reminds me of various sci-fi versions where androids download a different personality, or have to recover lost memory data. Translates great into the fantasy setting. Go to Comment
Larry the Sock Puppet
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-08-10 11:35 PM
Very cool! I always knew that there's a reason I cling to all the toys of my childhood, despite the best efforts of my wife. You never know what might come in handy (or enchanted). Go to Comment
Apox, Sunderer of Vautu
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2009-03-10 04:49 PM
I'll chalk it up to dumb luck. Overlord Pogrom wanted to send a message to the rest of the Modoals that the Vautuans were here, and thus he needed a messenger. Among the many that were separated from their families, Pogrom thought that the one-armed man would be the least likely to fight given his condition, thus unlikely to get himself killed. He ordered Shimm's family captured and killed in front of the man, if only to increase his agony. Shimm's submission was a fortunate surprise. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-31 05:56 AM
I really like this. I don't have a problem with nonintelligent creatures using magic, if that's how magic is in a universe. It seems an eminently practical evolutionary development. Go to Comment
30 Exotic Birds
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-07 08:15 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tooky Bird
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-05-04 10:10 PM
How mildly troublesome. :) A good first sub, Aramax, I look forward to more from you. Go to Comment
The Grey Skull
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-09 12:06 AM
I really like this guy. He's as old as he is lovable, and I sometimes prefer the gentleman villain to the darkly evil ones. Go to Comment
Candle Beetles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-08 01:27 PM
Practical, in terms of gaming. Like the others, I'd like to see them fleshed out a little more, but it's a great idea. Go to Comment
Dr. Tadani
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 02:30 PM

Kind of your typical mad doctor, if a little lacking in motivation. I like some of the details though, and it's a well-written sub.

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NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-27 10:01 PM
I like the idea of a Thoron explorer. You don't much see the curious, exploratory side of non-organic lifeforms. Favoring the story behind his name, I'd be curious to explore that more, perhaps hear some more tales of extravagant physics from the crystal scout. I also echo Moon's interest in the growth of Embraced-A-Star's social skills. An intriguing character indeed. Go to Comment
Mulavian Arrow Bags
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-24 09:24 PM
Simple and neat. I might like to see extra details, but that's just me. A solid item overall. Go to Comment
Unique Gems
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-04 03:57 PM
How practical! Great sub, Stephie. I'll make sure to add some myself. Go to Comment
Ven Cred
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-02 09:30 PM
So far, it seems like an eccentric retelling of a classic vampire. I like the personal aspects, but I'm more interested in the "To be continued" part. Why should I be more interested in Cred than the average "Undead with wanderlust searching for a lost love" story? What makes him stand out? I think this has great potential, and I'd love to see what you can accomplish with him, Cloud. Go to Comment
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The Village Maiden

       By: Wulfhere

A girl living in an isolated hamlet is cursed: So beautiful and sweet-natured that no man can resist loving her, but she has never met the man she could love in return.

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