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30 Divine Concepts
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-24 08:30 AM
Fleshed out a few last night. 9, 11, 17, and 22 still need explanations (I'd offer some, but I'm not sure what they're all about). Go to Comment
Blood Doll
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
Dozus's comment on 2008-12-10 02:55 PM
Reminds me of bloodpets and the sort from various vampire genres, but with considerably more character. Kudos. Go to Comment
Mnogos, the historian of spirits
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-26 03:41 PM
Really great. I can see him being consulted by PCs to learn about secrets in a place that only a minor god would know.

On a somewhat related note, I first road the tagline as "A traveling scholar, digging up the roots of *tomatoes* that he encounters." Which in itself would be... curious. Go to Comment
Land Battleship
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 11:52 AM

Love the alternate history stuff here. Classic steampunk well fleshed.

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Professor Christoffen's Boiler Boots
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-08 01:31 PM
Steampunk boots of leaping. It's got some pizazz, I like it. Go to Comment
East Point
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-06 11:50 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-09 11:23 PM
I would actually be rather disturbed to run into a field full of these, especially given my penchant for blowing the heads off of their non-sentient kin. I would almost say it's *too* fantastic for my tastes, but that sounds ridiculous, so I won't say it. A lovely little color creature.

Also, the word "Plantkin" sounds adorable. It is the new nickname of my houseplant. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-09 11:24 PM
And here's the actual vote. Go to Comment
Chungwa Wolf
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-09 11:45 PM
I love the visual I get with this creature. I'm curious about the poison. Is it just a result of their "magically tainted prey," or a natural development of physiology like a komodo dragon's bite, or what? Go to Comment
Daymen Scarb
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-07 10:36 PM
The poor fellow! You actually feel for him, while at the same time being amused. Reminds me of a Groucho Marx-type scamp, except he's a sorcerer. Major props. Go to Comment
Alamras' Laboratory
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-07 10:41 PM
An interesting location, if anything. I keep feeling like the "moving building" thing has been done before, but I can't put my finger on what, and even if I could, this is still written uniquely enough to warrant favor. So well done. Go to Comment
The Magic of Food
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-03-04 01:37 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Underground)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-30 05:29 AM
In my mind, the comic image is a, well, comic-like image of them. I imagine them to look narrower, with thinner limbs and not such a large face, but something generally similar. They don't actually do any mining, they just exist in mineral-rich caves. Go to Comment
Ring of Heaven
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-29 08:02 AM
I can see this as a nice guarantor against tomb robbing among wealthy wizards and the like. Like Echo, I too would like to hear a bit more story to go with the fantastic mechanics. Are there any examples of this happening to a grave robber or the like? Go to Comment
Zhalinth Deshar
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-29 08:05 AM
Kinda neat! Reminds me of various sci-fi versions where androids download a different personality, or have to recover lost memory data. Translates great into the fantasy setting. Go to Comment
Larry the Sock Puppet
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-08-10 11:35 PM
Very cool! I always knew that there's a reason I cling to all the toys of my childhood, despite the best efforts of my wife. You never know what might come in handy (or enchanted). Go to Comment
Apox, Sunderer of Vautu
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2009-03-10 04:49 PM
I'll chalk it up to dumb luck. Overlord Pogrom wanted to send a message to the rest of the Modoals that the Vautuans were here, and thus he needed a messenger. Among the many that were separated from their families, Pogrom thought that the one-armed man would be the least likely to fight given his condition, thus unlikely to get himself killed. He ordered Shimm's family captured and killed in front of the man, if only to increase his agony. Shimm's submission was a fortunate surprise. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-31 05:56 AM
I really like this. I don't have a problem with nonintelligent creatures using magic, if that's how magic is in a universe. It seems an eminently practical evolutionary development. Go to Comment
30 Exotic Birds
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-07 08:15 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tooky Bird
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-05-04 10:10 PM
How mildly troublesome. :) A good first sub, Aramax, I look forward to more from you. Go to Comment
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