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Ring of Heaven
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-29 08:02 AM
I can see this as a nice guarantor against tomb robbing among wealthy wizards and the like. Like Echo, I too would like to hear a bit more story to go with the fantastic mechanics. Are there any examples of this happening to a grave robber or the like? Go to Comment
Zhalinth Deshar
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Dozus's comment on 2008-09-29 08:05 AM
Kinda neat! Reminds me of various sci-fi versions where androids download a different personality, or have to recover lost memory data. Translates great into the fantasy setting. Go to Comment
Larry the Sock Puppet
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-08-10 11:35 PM
Very cool! I always knew that there's a reason I cling to all the toys of my childhood, despite the best efforts of my wife. You never know what might come in handy (or enchanted). Go to Comment
Apox, Sunderer of Vautu
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2009-03-10 04:49 PM
I'll chalk it up to dumb luck. Overlord Pogrom wanted to send a message to the rest of the Modoals that the Vautuans were here, and thus he needed a messenger. Among the many that were separated from their families, Pogrom thought that the one-armed man would be the least likely to fight given his condition, thus unlikely to get himself killed. He ordered Shimm's family captured and killed in front of the man, if only to increase his agony. Shimm's submission was a fortunate surprise. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-31 05:56 AM
I really like this. I don't have a problem with nonintelligent creatures using magic, if that's how magic is in a universe. It seems an eminently practical evolutionary development. Go to Comment
30 Exotic Birds
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-07 08:15 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tooky Bird
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-05-04 10:10 PM
How mildly troublesome. :) A good first sub, Aramax, I look forward to more from you. Go to Comment
The Grey Skull
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-09 12:06 AM
I really like this guy. He's as old as he is lovable, and I sometimes prefer the gentleman villain to the darkly evil ones. Go to Comment
Candle Beetles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-08 01:27 PM
Practical, in terms of gaming. Like the others, I'd like to see them fleshed out a little more, but it's a great idea. Go to Comment
Dr. Tadani
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 02:30 PM

Kind of your typical mad doctor, if a little lacking in motivation. I like some of the details though, and it's a well-written sub.

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NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-27 10:01 PM
I like the idea of a Thoron explorer. You don't much see the curious, exploratory side of non-organic lifeforms. Favoring the story behind his name, I'd be curious to explore that more, perhaps hear some more tales of extravagant physics from the crystal scout. I also echo Moon's interest in the growth of Embraced-A-Star's social skills. An intriguing character indeed. Go to Comment
Mulavian Arrow Bags
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-24 09:24 PM
Simple and neat. I might like to see extra details, but that's just me. A solid item overall. Go to Comment
Unique Gems
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-04 03:57 PM
How practical! Great sub, Stephie. I'll make sure to add some myself. Go to Comment
Ven Cred
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-02 09:30 PM
So far, it seems like an eccentric retelling of a classic vampire. I like the personal aspects, but I'm more interested in the "To be continued" part. Why should I be more interested in Cred than the average "Undead with wanderlust searching for a lost love" story? What makes him stand out? I think this has great potential, and I'd love to see what you can accomplish with him, Cloud. Go to Comment
The Dung Goblins of Dabazook Island
Society/ Organizations  (Agricultural)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-26 01:36 PM
Anything I should add/explore before making it a full-fledged sub? Go to Comment
The Dung Goblins of Dabazook Island
Society/ Organizations  (Agricultural)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-27 09:18 AM
Updated: Fungus data & roleplay hooks added. Be free, sub, and run wild! Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-25 06:23 PM
The visual I get in my head of these guys is phenomenal: white bone wrapped in green and brown, colorful flowers bursting from eye sockets and in between ribs. Big thumbs up. Go to Comment
101 Post Apocalyptic Cults
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-11 10:19 PM
Ha! Love it! An excellent interpretation of a variety of potential cults. Well done. Go to Comment
White Rock - A fishing village
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-11 11:02 PM

An immigrant of Kition, Adeo arrived years ago as a young man seeking fortune away from his small village. His dream: become a rich merchant, sailing up and down the great rivers of the land, dealing in spices and rich fabrics.

That was twenty years ago. Adeo has since resigned himself to running a small fishing business, trapped in the heritage of his fathers. His prime fishing craft, Azure Heron, is a familiar sight to most in White Rock. Adeo still dreams that it will one day be a boat of great importance; he often tells the story of the time Heron acted as a tour boat for a foreign diplomat (it's a lovely tale, even with its heavy embellishment). Aside from Azure Heron, Adeo operates a few other small fishing boats. The Kitionan likes to pride himself as having the most skilled and professional anglers on the creeks. His crew, however, is a bit of a motley one. Adeo is known to keep them close to his heart, however, and he pays and protects well his loyal mates.

Adeo himself has the demeanor of a common boat captain: slightly gruff, always moderately irritated, but generally lenient and kind. At one time he had the body of a strong longshoreman; as he reaches closer to his 50s, he has put on some weight, though there is still muscle behind it. On shore, he can usually be found going about town, lecturing his fellow anglers or bandying with friends and acquaintances. It's no secret he's after Olyssra's heart, nor is it a secret that she has repeatedly dismissed his offerings. Adeo seems to take it in stride. Go to Comment
White Rock - A fishing village
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-12 10:16 PM
Hm. It appears my reading comprehension skills are lacking. I'll retcon the whole shipping thing out Adeo's plot shortly. Sorry for causing chaos, it's a bit of a hobby of mine. Go to Comment
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