This seems kinda, I dunno, bland? Like the standard sort of quest-giving source for a modern/cyberpunk setting. The dark web is full of such things, or so I'm given to understand.
The intro sentences are strong: "The hacker had breached the final firewall and was typing code into the command prompt: code/7777SOHAT. Images flashed up on screen and he gazed in terror at what he saw." Kind of led me to believe this would be a cyberhorror kind of sub, something you'd see a good creepy pasta about. Maybe taking it in that direction would be cool? A sort of haunted website that someone stumbles upon, discovers what they think is a dangerous but profitable job, but it turns out to be far darker than they anticipated? I dunno, I'm kind of just riffing here, but you get the idea.
In short, it's a pretty standard concept that has the potential for a unique twist. Go to Comment
When I first created this sub, it was part of a quest, but it was still "In Work." I guess I got the XP then, but since I just now promoted it to a full-fledged sub, it doesn't classify it as a quest sub, but it didn't change the XP.
At least, that's the only explanation I can come up with. Go to Comment
Magic is the lifeforce of all living creatures, and it is from it that all life is made - in areas with lots of undead, magic might actually be missing or weak, which puts a whole new spin on how dangerous the undead are. Even simple zombies can be troublesome if you're relying on mages and you hit a pocket of undead making a low-magic zone...
Ideas ( System ) | February 27, 2003 |