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Mad Magic
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-05 09:54 PM
A really great idea. It kind of reminds me of my cartogramancy sub, but beat it by a few years. And this idea of the mind affecting the world at death is totally unique.

I'll have to ponder an idea or two to add to this. Go to Comment
Beachcombing 101
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-02 03:38 PM
Love it! Who doesn't like to wander the beach looking for random items? A thoroughly useful scroll.

On a side note, it appears there is some error with the suggested submissions here, as they fill up about a screen-and-a-half of text. Someone wanna fix that? Go to Comment
At The Foot of the World
Plots  (Travel)   (Mini-Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-03 05:04 PM
Wooha! An excellent and thorough setting. It's got a nice vintage flavor to it, like a great classic campaign. My favorite part was the maddening fog. Good show, sir! Go to Comment
Unexpected Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-28 09:42 PM
Heh, gross. Yet effective. May this scroll be filled with such fun and lethal tools. Go to Comment
Unexpected Weapons
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2008-03-02 03:41 PM
Assassin's Sticks
These appear as ordinary jade chopsticks, the type one would find in a fine restaurant of the Orient. They're even engraved with little geometric designs. In secret, these designs hide the fact that the lower three-quarters of the sticks are removable sheathes that house long, poisoned needles. With a quick flick and a thrust, such a needle could find itself in the heart of an unwanted rival, assuming one could get close enough. Go to Comment
Sophelia the Merciful
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-25 05:11 PM
Short, sweet, and fascinating. Good show! Go to Comment
Dugfar's Drastic Dirt Displacement Device
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-23 08:04 PM
Neat! A very dwarven tool with a nice balance to it. Go to Comment
The Shark Lord
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Natural)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-23 08:02 PM
Hm. An interesting sort of pelagic were-creature. It seems almost a fairy tale, a story parents tell little children about. It also feels like it could be deeply fleshed out into something much *more* interesting. In short, I like it, but it feels rather sparse. A good idea that could bake for a bit longer. Go to Comment
Emerald of Character
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-23 07:59 PM
Pretty much ditto what everyone else said: a useful item, a bit drab and generic in its current form, but has great potential for further exploration. Welcome to the Citadel, Cloud! Keep them subs rollin'! Go to Comment
30 Peasants
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
Dozus's comment on 2008-01-10 10:26 PM
24- The Workhorse
He works hard for his wages - and doesn't do much else. Completely dedicated to his mundane life's work, he is well-built and extremely knowledgeable in his craft. Don't bother trying to get him to talk about something else, though.

25- The Scandalizer
If something happens, she's the first to know about it. Always where the news and action is, she spreads rumors like wildfire. Many find her useful, but no one really likes her: everyone's afraid that their secrets will become the entire village's if they get too close. Go to Comment
Simidon the Brave
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-18 10:37 AM
Creepy and somewhat disturbing. Very well done as well. I rarely feel for barbarians, but this one has my sympathy. I wonder if the PCs would be wise enough to not hire him, knowing his mental instability.

Oh, and kudos for the Psycho quote. Go to Comment
Frosty's Silk Hat of Sentience
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-16 10:23 PM
A must-have for the winter quest! Stays true to the story while maintaining the proper silliness. My only suggestion is that it could have been stretched out and filled in a bit more. But good overall. Go to Comment
Sanguine Dagger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-14 07:56 AM
A nice take on assassins' blades. It adds some mystique to their dark trade, but it still feels like it lacks something to make it truly unique. It would probably be fun to toss into the sidequests of a campaign, though.

Out of curiosity, are you doing a 10 in 10, or do you just happen to be on a writing streak? I've noticed the box of recent submissions is practically filled with your writings. No complaints, of course, I'm a big fan. :-D Go to Comment
30 Cheeses
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-10 09:59 PM
Dangerously cheesy! And also oddly well-thought out. The amount of time you spent on coming up with 30 unique types of cheese both amazes, confuses, and frightens me. Well done. Go to Comment
30 Cheeses
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-11 08:00 AM
Also, call me strange, but I was expecting more cheeses made from human milk. But then, I am an odd one. Go to Comment
The Gudhuhl Tribe
Society/ Organizations  (Agricultural)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-02 06:22 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Glacier's Fist
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-10 09:50 PM
If the Gavel inspired this, then I'm glad I submitted the Gavel. I like the backstory a lot, and though I agree that it's tough to fit this into a non-Kuramen setting, I don't think that's necessarily a detractor; some items, NPCs, and other elements are made to fit their setting and needn't be anywhere else. I do reflect Scras's thought that there should be another penalty or two from wielding it, perhaps something that could be a side effect of being "consecrated" with the essence of cold. One so consecrated might become eternally reliant on miserable cold to survive, or they would lose passion and ferocity forever from their minds, for example. Overall, though, I think it an intriguing piece. Go to Comment
Stamagast
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-15 08:02 AM
I've not quite seen an elemental like this before. It's extremely well done, Scras, kudos. Go to Comment
The Beekeeper's Hat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-03 09:21 PM
A good explanation and background for a fairly simple enchanted device. Nice work, Stephie. :) Go to Comment
30 Swords
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2008-02-02 11:53 PM
Yay original magic swords! Go to Comment
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