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30 Sheaths
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2016-05-26 11:43 AM
I'm just impressed you could think up thirty different and distinct sheathes. Like Val said, some are a bit of a stretch, but it's a noble effort. Go to Comment
On Violent Deaths and Ghosts
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-27 08:35 AM


Nice little summary of revenants and such. It works well as a stub, but I'd love to see it fleshed out more.


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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-29 07:56 AM
As if I *needed* a reason to own a croc, now I have dozens more. Love it. Go to Comment
The Friends
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-19 10:31 AM
This is a good take on the "power behind the scenes" sort of organization. Go to Comment
Code 7777SOHAT
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Dozus's comment on 2016-11-01 07:39 AM
This seems kinda, I dunno, bland? Like the standard sort of quest-giving source for a modern/cyberpunk setting. The dark web is full of such things, or so I'm given to understand.

The intro sentences are strong: "The hacker had breached the final firewall and was typing code into the command prompt: code/7777SOHAT. Images flashed up on screen and he gazed in terror at what he saw." Kind of led me to believe this would be a cyberhorror kind of sub, something you'd see a good creepy pasta about. Maybe taking it in that direction would be cool? A sort of haunted website that someone stumbles upon, discovers what they think is a dangerous but profitable job, but it turns out to be far darker than they anticipated? I dunno, I'm kind of just riffing here, but you get the idea.

In short, it's a pretty standard concept that has the potential for a unique twist. Go to Comment
30 Halfling Holidays
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 09:50 AM


Love it! The world's in the details, so to speak, and you've handled them well.


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30 Bad Things
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 02:25 PM


As others have said, very functional and straightforward.


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Animated Doorknob
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-03 12:29 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 02:46 PM
She's nice and creepy, but very human. Val's right, there's some great imagery here, and you really get a feel for who she is emotionally. I think it's great. Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 12:30 AM
Any suggestions/edits before I submit? Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-20 07:50 PM
Okay then, fully submitted.

Full disclosure, I heavily borrowed the idea for the fiddle from the Tuvan igil: http://www.alashensemble.com/instruments.htm Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2009-05-31 01:49 AM
Any suggestions before I submit? Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 11:58 PM
When I first created this sub, it was part of a quest, but it was still "In Work." I guess I got the XP then, but since I just now promoted it to a full-fledged sub, it doesn't classify it as a quest sub, but it didn't change the XP.

At least, that's the only explanation I can come up with. Go to Comment
30 Army Officers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2010-05-14 10:48 AM
As Maggot said, a realistic and believable 30. Surely helpful, too, as stock soldiers are always useful in a campaign. Go to Comment
Emperor Whale
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-11 09:50 AM


How interesting! I like non-humanoid aquatic intelligence in fantasy settings, and every game needs more whales specifically.


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Boulderkin
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2016-12-08 06:41 AM
Hilarious. I keep picturing the Pokemon Graveler. I also keep picturing a group of boulderkin pointlessly picking each other up and rearranging one another for hours on end. Go to Comment
Hill Turtles
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2016-02-29 11:26 AM
This would be super inconvenient if you're a colonist unfamiliar with hill turtles and try to build a village on top of one. Go to Comment
MoonHunter's Top Tips for 2009
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-18 03:51 PM
I miss these. We need a 2013 list. Go to Comment
Veloran´s XXXX
Items  (Potion)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2010-03-15 01:21 PM
Fine as a stub, though. Kind of a color background to your average "+4 Str" potion.

If one felt up to it, I suppose plenty *more* background could be added to make it a full-fledged post so Cheka can vote on it. But I think it's a lovely stub as-is. Go to Comment
Veloran´s XXXX
Items  (Potion)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2010-03-15 03:40 PM
Swell! I look forward to the full submission. Go to Comment
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BBQ World?

       By: Redgre

"The world has an immovable dark red sun in the centre of the sky that produces very little light. The heat is totally unbearable and the aroma of delicious cooking meat is in the air. To look around it appears as though you are surrounded by giant black mountains with no vegetation anywhere. The ground is soft and an oily liquid flows into your footprints. Travelling reveals nothing else."

Any character without some resistance to fire or heat is slowly being cooked. The ground if you haven't guessed it is the cooked meat.

I've wanted this world to be part of a dimensional hopping "chase". I thought maybe to populate this world with giant carnivorous beetles or perhaps this could be a "Nirvana" for deceased or living (but dimension travelling) fire dragons.

Perhaps I've just been grilling a little too much meat or perhaps there are some great ideas out there on how to spruce up the place. Any suggestions?

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