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30 Poisons
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 11:24 AM
I wonder if it would be more effective as a general skin-changing drug, one that produces a random shade. Maybe adding side-effects would make it more poison and less potion. Go to Comment
Adepts of the Doxology
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-26 10:32 AM


A well-written wizard-warrior post. I get a war gaming vibe from the whole thing, and I love the image of robe-clad desert warriors waving their flails at opponents. Bonus half-point for bronze, that cast-off metal which looks cool and needs to be used more.


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30 Sheaths
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2016-05-26 11:43 AM
I'm just impressed you could think up thirty different and distinct sheathes. Like Val said, some are a bit of a stretch, but it's a noble effort. Go to Comment
On Violent Deaths and Ghosts
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-27 08:35 AM


Nice little summary of revenants and such. It works well as a stub, but I'd love to see it fleshed out more.


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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-29 07:56 AM
As if I *needed* a reason to own a croc, now I have dozens more. Love it. Go to Comment
The Friends
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-19 10:31 AM
This is a good take on the "power behind the scenes" sort of organization. Go to Comment
Code 7777SOHAT
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Dozus's comment on 2016-11-01 07:39 AM
This seems kinda, I dunno, bland? Like the standard sort of quest-giving source for a modern/cyberpunk setting. The dark web is full of such things, or so I'm given to understand.

The intro sentences are strong: "The hacker had breached the final firewall and was typing code into the command prompt: code/7777SOHAT. Images flashed up on screen and he gazed in terror at what he saw." Kind of led me to believe this would be a cyberhorror kind of sub, something you'd see a good creepy pasta about. Maybe taking it in that direction would be cool? A sort of haunted website that someone stumbles upon, discovers what they think is a dangerous but profitable job, but it turns out to be far darker than they anticipated? I dunno, I'm kind of just riffing here, but you get the idea.

In short, it's a pretty standard concept that has the potential for a unique twist. Go to Comment
30 Halfling Holidays
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 09:50 AM


Love it! The world's in the details, so to speak, and you've handled them well.


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30 Bad Things
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 02:25 PM


As others have said, very functional and straightforward.


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Animated Doorknob
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-03 12:29 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 02:46 PM
She's nice and creepy, but very human. Val's right, there's some great imagery here, and you really get a feel for who she is emotionally. I think it's great. Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 12:30 AM
Any suggestions/edits before I submit? Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-20 07:50 PM
Okay then, fully submitted.

Full disclosure, I heavily borrowed the idea for the fiddle from the Tuvan igil: http://www.alashensemble.com/instruments.htm Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2009-05-31 01:49 AM
Any suggestions before I submit? Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 11:58 PM
When I first created this sub, it was part of a quest, but it was still "In Work." I guess I got the XP then, but since I just now promoted it to a full-fledged sub, it doesn't classify it as a quest sub, but it didn't change the XP.

At least, that's the only explanation I can come up with. Go to Comment
30 Army Officers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2010-05-14 10:48 AM
As Maggot said, a realistic and believable 30. Surely helpful, too, as stock soldiers are always useful in a campaign. Go to Comment
Emperor Whale
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-11 09:50 AM


How interesting! I like non-humanoid aquatic intelligence in fantasy settings, and every game needs more whales specifically.


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Boulderkin
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2016-12-08 06:41 AM
Hilarious. I keep picturing the Pokemon Graveler. I also keep picturing a group of boulderkin pointlessly picking each other up and rearranging one another for hours on end. Go to Comment
Hill Turtles
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2016-02-29 11:26 AM
This would be super inconvenient if you're a colonist unfamiliar with hill turtles and try to build a village on top of one. Go to Comment
MoonHunter's Top Tips for 2009
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-18 03:51 PM
I miss these. We need a 2013 list. Go to Comment
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