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Cartogramancy - The Magic of Maps
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2014-04-03 09:08 AM
Update: Reformatted for your reading pleasure. Go to Comment
CSS Demonstration Sub
Articles  (Resource)   (Citadel Help)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-16 07:47 AM


Awesomesauce. Makes me want to go back and reformat all my past subs to make them organized.


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Incarnate Ascension
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-09 09:48 AM


Wow, complex. I'll need to take some time to read and think through this before I vote.



Might I suggest you combine this with the more "artisitc" Shattering sub? I feel like both are lacking something, and the something would seem to be each other. This is highly functional with little artistic flair, and the other is all style with little substance. Don't get me wrong, I think the ideas presented here are really interesting, but I think you leave something to be desired in terms of organization.


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The Undead Knights of Knonii
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-06 08:47 AM


I don't think this is the first army of unbodied armor, but it's surely the most well explained. It's interesting how directly involved the gods are in this one too, gives it a very mythological flavor. Well done!


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Romero Coultier
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-26 08:27 AM
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The Shattering
Plots  (Event)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 02:31 PM


Very atospheric, you've done well in setting the stage. I look forward to more!


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Inns, Taverns, and Pubs
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-29 11:33 AM


Even so, I like the variety presented here. They work very well as color background, something to flavor the "The party finds themselves at an inn..." sort of events. The names alone are worth a vote for me - how could I not include a place called "The Mace and Whore" in a plot?


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The Vattic Trap
Dungeons  (Other)   (Traps)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-29 03:38 PM


Quite a torture device. Though I like it, I have to play devil's advocate and ask: why all the scary dreams? If you've already got someone caught in a metal box with multiple sets of claws, why bother with the added torture of nightmares?



I guess what I'm saying is, I like the concept, but I'd like to see a little more with the background.


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53 or More Cantrips
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-28 11:37 AM


54. Teldus' Double Joint - A spell that temporarily reverses all the joints of the caster's target. Elbows, knees, fingers, etc. will all bend the opposite direction. Mostly for street performers and show magicians, it can be handy in escaping some restraints.



55. Tenshal's Press - Compresses small objects to be perfectly flat and one millimeter thick. Object weight remains unaffected and the cantrip is only temporary - typically, the larger and heavier an object, the shorter the time it remains compressed. Used by merchant-mages for packing many goods into a small cart, it can be disruptive as the spell starts to wear off and the enchanted items expand to their original size.



56. Viator's Favorable Winds - This cantrip causes a gentle to moderate breeze to blow at the caster's back for several hours. It also negates the effects of counter winds, so long as they are weaker than the magical breeze. Favored by those travelling by foot or sloop. 


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30 Poisons
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 11:24 AM
I wonder if it would be more effective as a general skin-changing drug, one that produces a random shade. Maybe adding side-effects would make it more poison and less potion. Go to Comment
Adepts of the Doxology
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-26 10:32 AM


A well-written wizard-warrior post. I get a war gaming vibe from the whole thing, and I love the image of robe-clad desert warriors waving their flails at opponents. Bonus half-point for bronze, that cast-off metal which looks cool and needs to be used more.


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30 Sheaths
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2016-05-26 11:43 AM
I'm just impressed you could think up thirty different and distinct sheathes. Like Val said, some are a bit of a stretch, but it's a noble effort. Go to Comment
On Violent Deaths and Ghosts
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-27 08:35 AM


Nice little summary of revenants and such. It works well as a stub, but I'd love to see it fleshed out more.


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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-29 07:56 AM
As if I *needed* a reason to own a croc, now I have dozens more. Love it. Go to Comment
The Friends
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-19 10:31 AM
This is a good take on the "power behind the scenes" sort of organization. Go to Comment
30 Halfling Holidays
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 09:50 AM


Love it! The world's in the details, so to speak, and you've handled them well.


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30 Bad Things
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 02:25 PM


As others have said, very functional and straightforward.


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Animated Doorknob
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-03 12:29 PM
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Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 02:46 PM
She's nice and creepy, but very human. Val's right, there's some great imagery here, and you really get a feel for who she is emotionally. I think it's great. Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 12:30 AM
Any suggestions/edits before I submit? Go to Comment
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