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The Red Fortress
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 02:14 PM

Striking imagery.

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The Glade
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 02:15 PM

Like Robot Wars, but with fantasy sentients. It's a good thing.

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Rockytop Freehold
Locations  (Fortification)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 02:18 PM

This seems more like a stub than a sub, not because of its length but its genericalness. Nothing really sets it apart from any other acropolis.

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The Forestal Crown
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 02:20 PM

Eminently useful.

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The Invisible Trebuchet
Plots  (Crisis)   (Side-Quest)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 02:23 PM

I like the plot. I'm picturing the Usurper as a Dick Dastardly, wringing gloved hands as boulders seem to appear from nowhere in the town.

How does one aim an invisible trebuchet?

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falling empires
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Dozus's comment on 2008-04-16 06:36 PM
Welcome to the Citadel, Brutus! Thanks for your subs.

Just a heads up about our little operation. There's a few things we always want to see in subs: playability, detailed descriptions, reasonable backstories, good grammar. Punctuation and grammar is a *must* with us. I suggest running your sub through a spellchecker before you post it (there's one on the submission page, if you don't feel like using your word processor). I'd like to talk to you about your content, but honestly I'm afraid I can't read it due to lack of punctuation and spelling :) Start by running that sucker through a spellchecker, and we'll go from there.

A great example of a a plot can be found in Manfred's "To Die For Love." Perhaps that will give you a good idea on how a plot sub should look.

Again, welcome to the Citadel! Hope to see more from you, and to comment on your completed sub soon! Go to Comment
Random Castle History Tables
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2012-12-07 06:20 PM
Great idea. It reminds me of reading randomly generated history in Dwarf Fortress. A really easy way to generate the background for a place. Go to Comment
The Skald of Seven Shapes
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Dozus's comment on 2015-03-12 10:25 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Gods of Tirexia
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-10-14 09:28 AM
In like with what Echo and Val said, in a lot of ways this is a slightly more elaborate divine template for a pantheon rather than a fully fleshed out one. But as is, I find it both useful and creative. Go to Comment
Gideon's Mercy
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-30 08:19 AM

The healing/merciful weapon has been done before, but this is a lovely twist on it that brings freshness to the idea.

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Dirge Mace
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2008-10-07 10:44 PM
Steampunk mace! (Well, more complicated than that, but that's the image I get) I love it! Imaginative, well-written, well explained, great imagery. Overall an excellent job. Go to Comment
Spectre's Scabbard
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-11 12:51 PM
A simple, great idea. Go to Comment
Carapace Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 03:36 PM
I think I expected this to be made from an actual carapace. From reading the sub, I gather it's supposed to be nonmechanized armor in an era of mechanized armors? That makes it kind of neat, and the details work well. Go to Comment
The World Forge
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-22 02:37 PM
Haven't seen a creation story/plane quite like this. Great atmosphere. Go to Comment
The Moadi-Bird
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-27 02:13 PM
Seek not the Moadi indeed. Go to Comment
The Black Circus of Mortuel
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-28 07:36 AM
Very nicely done, a well-earned HoH.

On an unrelated note, the "Fate smiles at us; so smile back at fate" Mantra of the Mortuelians remind me of the hackers' motto of "For the lulz". Go to Comment
Rings of Mutual Exclusion
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-07 03:07 PM
Ditto. These are awesome. Go to Comment
30 Alchemists
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2011-07-09 11:14 PM

One of the most thorough of the 30s, for sure. I love the detail.

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Cartogramancy - The Magic of Maps
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-02 10:09 AM

Still working out the details here, but I wanted to get what I had out there for your perusal. Suggestions on spells, equipment, noted notables, and RP hooks are all welcome.

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Cartogramancy - The Magic of Maps
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 08:45 AM
Cool idea, added it.

In theory, any map created by a cartogramancer can be used for appropriate spells for as long as it lasts. Rather than time be the limitation on an instantly created map, I made it accuracy. Go to Comment
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