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30 Poisons
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 10:24 AM
I wonder if it would be more effective as a general skin-changing drug, one that produces a random shade. Maybe adding side-effects would make it more poison and less potion. Go to Comment
Adepts of the Doxology
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-26 09:32 AM


A well-written wizard-warrior post. I get a war gaming vibe from the whole thing, and I love the image of robe-clad desert warriors waving their flails at opponents. Bonus half-point for bronze, that cast-off metal which looks cool and needs to be used more.


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On Violent Deaths and Ghosts
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-27 07:35 AM


Nice little summary of revenants and such. It works well as a stub, but I'd love to see it fleshed out more.


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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-29 06:56 AM
As if I *needed* a reason to own a croc, now I have dozens more. Love it. Go to Comment
The Friends
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-19 09:31 AM
This is a good take on the "power behind the scenes" sort of organization. Go to Comment
30 Halfling Holidays
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 08:50 AM


Love it! The world's in the details, so to speak, and you've handled them well.


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30 Bad Things
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 01:25 PM


As others have said, very functional and straightforward.


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Animated Doorknob
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-03 11:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 01:46 PM
She's nice and creepy, but very human. Val's right, there's some great imagery here, and you really get a feel for who she is emotionally. I think it's great. Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-08 11:30 PM
Any suggestions/edits before I submit? Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-20 06:50 PM
Okay then, fully submitted.

Full disclosure, I heavily borrowed the idea for the fiddle from the Tuvan igil: http://www.alashensemble.com/instruments.htm Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2009-05-31 12:49 AM
Any suggestions before I submit? Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 10:58 PM
When I first created this sub, it was part of a quest, but it was still "In Work." I guess I got the XP then, but since I just now promoted it to a full-fledged sub, it doesn't classify it as a quest sub, but it didn't change the XP.

At least, that's the only explanation I can come up with. Go to Comment
30 Army Officers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2010-05-14 09:48 AM
As Maggot said, a realistic and believable 30. Surely helpful, too, as stock soldiers are always useful in a campaign. Go to Comment
Emperor Whale
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-11 08:50 AM


How interesting! I like non-humanoid aquatic intelligence in fantasy settings, and every game needs more whales specifically.


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MoonHunter's Top Tips for 2009
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-18 02:51 PM
I miss these. We need a 2013 list. Go to Comment
Veloran´s XXXX
Items  (Potion)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2010-03-15 12:21 PM
Fine as a stub, though. Kind of a color background to your average "+4 Str" potion.

If one felt up to it, I suppose plenty *more* background could be added to make it a full-fledged post so Cheka can vote on it. But I think it's a lovely stub as-is. Go to Comment
Veloran´s XXXX
Items  (Potion)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2010-03-15 02:40 PM
Swell! I look forward to the full submission. Go to Comment
The Glades
Locations  (Establishment)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 08:28 AM


Has some potential to be a neat little spot. Come back, Kassy!


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100 Unique Town/City Properties
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-03 05:27 AM
I do agree. It's a list that could be purely practical and boring, but it's practical and interesting, and finely written. The kudosiest or kudos to Redgre for this one. Go to Comment
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