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Adepts of the Doxology
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-26 09:32 AM


A well-written wizard-warrior post. I get a war gaming vibe from the whole thing, and I love the image of robe-clad desert warriors waving their flails at opponents. Bonus half-point for bronze, that cast-off metal which looks cool and needs to be used more.


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On Violent Deaths and Ghosts
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2011-04-27 07:35 AM


Nice little summary of revenants and such. It works well as a stub, but I'd love to see it fleshed out more.


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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-29 06:56 AM
As if I *needed* a reason to own a croc, now I have dozens more. Love it. Go to Comment
The Friends
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-19 09:31 AM
This is a good take on the "power behind the scenes" sort of organization. Go to Comment
30 Halfling Holidays
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-10 08:50 AM


Love it! The world's in the details, so to speak, and you've handled them well.


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30 Bad Things
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Game Mastering)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 01:25 PM


As others have said, very functional and straightforward.


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Animated Doorknob
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-03 11:29 AM
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Cantara, the Voice of the Dragon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 01:46 PM
She's nice and creepy, but very human. Val's right, there's some great imagery here, and you really get a feel for who she is emotionally. I think it's great. Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-08 11:30 PM
Any suggestions/edits before I submit? Go to Comment
Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-20 06:50 PM
Okay then, fully submitted.

Full disclosure, I heavily borrowed the idea for the fiddle from the Tuvan igil: http://www.alashensemble.com/instruments.htm Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2009-05-31 12:49 AM
Any suggestions before I submit? Go to Comment
The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Dozus's comment on 2010-06-09 10:58 PM
When I first created this sub, it was part of a quest, but it was still "In Work." I guess I got the XP then, but since I just now promoted it to a full-fledged sub, it doesn't classify it as a quest sub, but it didn't change the XP.

At least, that's the only explanation I can come up with. Go to Comment
30 Army Officers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2010-05-14 09:48 AM
As Maggot said, a realistic and believable 30. Surely helpful, too, as stock soldiers are always useful in a campaign. Go to Comment
Emperor Whale
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-11 08:50 AM


How interesting! I like non-humanoid aquatic intelligence in fantasy settings, and every game needs more whales specifically.


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MoonHunter's Top Tips for 2009
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - In General)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-18 02:51 PM
I miss these. We need a 2013 list. Go to Comment
Veloran´s XXXX
Items  (Potion)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2010-03-15 12:21 PM
Fine as a stub, though. Kind of a color background to your average "+4 Str" potion.

If one felt up to it, I suppose plenty *more* background could be added to make it a full-fledged post so Cheka can vote on it. But I think it's a lovely stub as-is. Go to Comment
Veloran´s XXXX
Items  (Potion)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2010-03-15 02:40 PM
Swell! I look forward to the full submission. Go to Comment
The Glades
Locations  (Establishment)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Dozus's comment on 2011-05-03 08:28 AM


Has some potential to be a neat little spot. Come back, Kassy!


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100 Unique Town/City Properties
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-03 05:27 AM
I do agree. It's a list that could be purely practical and boring, but it's practical and interesting, and finely written. The kudosiest or kudos to Redgre for this one. Go to Comment
Lockzennite's Lance
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2010-01-18 10:00 PM
A rather curious item. I definitely like the idea of a giant key, as both a symbol and a tool. I'd like to hear more about it, though: interesting times it's been used, how a player might come across it in-game. I'd *love* to hear more about these Lockzennites. Go to Comment
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