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30 Neko Augmens
NPCs  (Extras)   (Artistic/Performance)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-05 01:38 PM
More cat people than I could ever have come up with Nyan Girl made me laugh. Go to Comment
Escape From the Tower
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Dozus's comment on 2013-03-11 11:49 AM
Very thorough. Go to Comment
Deepbend Maximum Security Prison
Locations  (Fortification)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2012-04-20 01:08 PM


A very clever detention center. I like the thought you've put into how it would operate.


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The Legend of Jaroth, The Dragon's Shadow
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Travelers)
Dozus's comment on 2012-10-29 07:26 PM
Yep, definitely needs some cohesiveness to bring this idea together. I think the flesh is actually there, just needs some bones on it. Go to Comment
Emotional Program Break or EPB
Items  (Computers)   (Sentient)
Dozus's comment on 2014-02-03 09:10 PM
This is an interesting idea, but it's real hard to explore in 100 words. I like the format for some things, but this idea seems too complex for such a short sub. Go to Comment
30 Flies
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2014-03-07 04:43 PM
And they said it couldn't be done! This is great stuff. Go to Comment
Turtle Lotus
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Water)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-05 04:51 AM
Love it. As exotic as mounts get. Go to Comment
Bodach the Straw Man
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 01:38 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Hemangini Tree
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 10:26 AM
Put that sucker over a lead-rich vein and you've got a natural musket ball manufactory. Go to Comment
Sivvers
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Space)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-23 07:05 AM


Oh, I like this one. They are on face a space zombie, but the depth and characterization make it something different entirely.


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The Shaolangan religion
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-25 11:04 AM


Very nice idea! Quite believable and, as axlerowes pointed out, we get everything we need to know in 100 words.


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The Tale of Koboldi
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-18 06:21 AM
I don't think it's bad, really. I just don't quite know what to do with it. For one, my Kobaldi is a little rusty, so interpreting what it all means requires some inferencing. For another, I like to have something to hang my gaming hat on - a plot or some other thing that suggests how I can implement it into a game or storyline.

As is, I think it does better as a stub. But I think it does have potential to be subbified with a little more scaffolding and support. Go to Comment
Ming-Na Xiang
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-13 09:10 AM


Very nice. I like the "chop suey" kung fu feel blended with the CthuluTech.


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Ve'laan
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2013-08-01 09:58 AM
Ooh, that hadn't occurred to me. My presumption was only water - fresh or salt - would keep it from "rusting", but I don't see why other fluids wouldn't work. Go to Comment
The Tyrant of the Mind
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 01:13 PM


A fine foundation. I can envision a lot springing from this.


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100 Word Submission
Articles  (Fiction)   (Citadel Help)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 12:15 PM


A fine idea. Reading this makes me think about how I actually vote on subs. I think writing subs like this is a challenge for some (read: me), as some (I) tend to springboard from "fluff" to "stuff". A worthy challenge.


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The Red Fortress
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 01:14 PM


Striking imagery.


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The Glade
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 01:15 PM


Like Robot Wars, but with fantasy sentients. It's a good thing.


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Rockytop Freehold
Locations  (Fortification)   (Mountains)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 01:18 PM


This seems more like a stub than a sub, not because of its length but its genericalness. Nothing really sets it apart from any other acropolis.


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The Forestal Crown
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2012-01-10 01:20 PM


Eminently useful.


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