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30 Members Of The Players Cult
NPCs  (Extras)   (Religious)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-22 01:36 PM
Update: Fixed up the formatting a bit, and went over it again for spelling/grammatical errors. Go to Comment
30 Members Of The Players Cult
NPCs  (Extras)   (Religious)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-22 10:59 PM
Thanks for that, Moonlake. I went ahead and tagged the piece as "Modern" to help give other people a heads-up about it, as well. Go to Comment
Friars Weed
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Swamp)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-21 08:27 PM
Actually, caesar has it right:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corps

If offering corrections, you should probably double-check yourself first -- I've almost made the same kind of mistake a dozen times, but Google usually saves me the embarrassment. Go to Comment
Friars Weed
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Swamp)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-21 08:25 PM
Not really my thing, but this is very well done. The quality of the write-up almost demands that it be used somewhere. I would guess that swamp residents are somewhat familiar with the flower and its effects (unless the flower is an invading species or other unnatural occurrence). They probably would have an antidote or some cautionary advice to give to the PCs. Then it's fair game to use against them. Go to Comment
Helstone Treasures
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Villanous)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-19 02:35 PM
This was very clever -- it artfully showcased another author's work, while expanding it in a creative and useful way. I hadn't read Scras' Gems of the Underworld yet, and I may never have found it without this piece, so thank you! The only minor suggestion I will make is to preserve the order of gemstones that Scras laid out in his piece, for easy reference. Here you have Xerle and Faridat come after Pirozeh, which was kind of confusing. I'd also put the inks last (or first). Well done! Go to Comment
The Forgotten Brand
Plots  (Crisis)   (Encounter)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-22 02:12 PM
Was the baby intended as some sort of weird sacrifice to the water table, or was it put there for its own protection? I wonder. Very nice hook, Cassy! Go to Comment
Etherleaf
Items  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-22 02:00 PM
Do the plants disappear after they are harvested, or only before they are picked? Aside from that tiny missing detail, I can see a bunch of places to go with this. Barring any sinister plans, my bet is that the plants are tied to some sort of cosmic event that occurs only every dozen years or so. Perhaps they need a certain kind of cosmic ray or energy to grow. Go to Comment
Dwarven Sapper
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-16 07:06 PM
Not sure they're given a choice to join, Cheka. It sounds like Black Bess, at least, had a whole other life that she was taken away from. Maybe that's where her anger comes from. This is a really nifty concept, and it's refreshing to see some more "classic fantasy" stuff from you, Scras. I especially liked how you were careful to fit this into the dwarves' established value systems and make it work. Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-13 11:37 AM
Does the stuff disappear once chewed up, or only once swallowed? I like SE's idea of being able to chew something up to "mold" it into a new form, then spit it back out.

*NPC insults party*
*PC casually grabs the bastard's favorite tankard and chews it up. Spit out a solid lump of metal a few seconds later*
*NPC and henchmen flee the scene* Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-20 12:38 PM
Do you add this to the summary box or to the main sub? At the top, or at the bottom? Go to Comment
Creeders Magic Dentures
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-20 06:33 PM
That is freaking cool. I updated all my Weavers Guild subs with the icon and it makes them so much easier to identify in a list. Thanks for revealing the secret of Real Ultimate Power! Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-11 10:24 AM
Update: Rearranged the information a little to make it group better. Added the bit about Restoration. Added Plot Hooks. Started the Creature Dex -- I really hope others add to it! Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-11 10:32 AM
1) Grilins

Physical Description: Something like a blue, 5-tailed squirrel with suckers on its toes instead of claws.

Grilins are docile, friendly and extremely sociable little critters. The perfect starter pet for many young children. They don't have claws, can barely bite, and like to snuggle. The only catch is their speed and extreme climbing ability -- these things can go straight up a sheer wall (thanks to those tiny suckers) and often escape their owners if they don't have their Pet Cube handy. For this reason, wild populations of Grilins are becoming established in metropolises around the galaxy. They may become as ubiquitous as the old-Earth pigeon, in time. Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-11 10:44 AM
2) Scalecats

Physical Description: Warm-blooded feline-esque creatures the size of large dogs, with snake-skin scales instead of fur.

The perfect choice for a person with fur allergies, the scalecat's original name is unpronounceable to most humans (hence, the monicker). Scalecats are loyal, fierce guardians who have a problematic territorial streak. They don't like lots of physical activity, however, and can most commonly be found lounging on its owner's bed or couch, with a watchful eye on the door. Firm training is a must, due to their size. De-clawing is recommended for owners without natural armor. Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-11 03:13 PM
Update: Fixed a few minor spelling and grammatical errors. Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-12 10:30 AM
Pretty much, yeah. Any tiny to medium sized critter, at least. Pet Cubes have to be locked down before they are sold, to prevent exactly that kind of abuse (If you can't tell, I'm shamelessly stealing the idea of a PokeBall, and seeing what it would look like in a more serious setting). Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-13 02:53 PM
6) Bitti-flecks

Physical Description: A glowing, fish-like creature about the size of a human fingernail.

A popular choice due to its considerable intelligence and weak psychic abilities, bitti-flecks are kept in a clear, anaerobic, viscous fluid composed of organic and silicate matter. They do best in contained systems and require only occasional fluid-cycling, so bitti-fleck jewelry and other accessories are coming into vogue. Bitti-flecks project a soothing aura that many species find desirable. If kept in a tank with other bitti-flecks, they will put on fantastic pulsing light shows that often mimic symbols, logos or even words that they have recently seen (especially those on passing neon signs). Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-13 06:26 PM
7) Lammaaaars (aka "Stickies")

Physical Description: Palm-length organisms that somewhat resemble a fuzzy cucumber, covered with hundreds of short, sticky tentacles.

Lammaaaars are most often found in spaceports or other locations with low gravity, conditions that are hard on many other pets. Their nickname arises from their tendency to . . . stick. To everything. They readily adhere to skin, walls, luggage, equipment and especially to other stickies. They are fairly easy to remove, but can be an annoyance to owners with fur or long hair. Stickies love vibration, and will emit a pleasant purring sound if jostled gently. Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-15 03:23 PM
Thanks! I'd like to expand the Creature Dex to 30+ critters, so that I can add the 30 freetext to it at some point. Go to Comment
Petdex
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-16 12:03 PM
9) Guanarian Paradicite

Physical Description: A pale, foot-long worm-like creature.

Often prescribed as therapy for people with terminal depression or other mental issues, the "paradise parasite" provides constant, life-long companionship. Once embedded in the owner's body, it will attach itself to the spinal column and begin reading the host's thoughts and feelings. After a few weeks, it will have learned enough of its host's language that it will begin striking up mental conversations with him/her. Paradicites are curious, gentle, compassionate and genuinely concerned with the welfare of their hosts. Besides providing a lonely owner with someone to talk to, they can help regulate hormone flow throughout the host's body, often bringing a level of emotional stability that the owner has never experienced. Go to Comment
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