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Talon Trails
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2010-10-05 05:07 PM
There are a few small typos ("As long as any can remember these certain paths aloud one to travel . . ."), but overall this is a very useable submission. Walking into a protective field intentionally as a method of travel is a nifty idea -- I love it when magic is used successfully for something other than its intended purpose.

I can see that this was written in 2002, and perhaps the quality of the submissions on this site have increased since then, but to me this is not a 5. It's useful and colorful, but not the absolute best that this site has to offer anymore. Still . . . 4.5/5 ain't bad. Go to Comment
Helms of communication
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Dossta's comment on 2012-10-03 10:37 AM
I rather liked the downside of this one -- sounds like these would be pretty difficult to use in an ambush if you had a party of more than a few people. Too many chances for someone to blow everyone else's cover. I might introduce a few plothooks to strengthen this piece. Perhaps these come in a set of 6 and one of them is missing. Is the missing helmet being used to monitor the party's movements and communication somehow? Or perhaps all helmets are linked to a central communications hub (maybe a crystal?) for the kingdom when they are created, so that The Crown can broadcast a message to all helms at once. Unfortunately, that communications hub has been captured and the soldiers are now getting contradictory or nefarious orders from the villain. Go to Comment
Jamil's Bain
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Dossta's comment on 2012-10-03 10:57 AM
I agree that this piece could really use some fleshing out, but it's a solid idea to start with. Would love to see a quest centered around removing the curse or appeasing the dead spirit of Jamil. Go to Comment
Ole Faithful
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Dossta's comment on 2012-10-03 11:05 AM
You might consider making a bunch of these nicely generic items and putting them in the same sub together. Maybe 30 thieves' tools or something. Otherwise, I agree with those who have come before me: this item would really benefit from some fleshing out -- more background, notes on use and limitations, etc. Go to Comment
Forgotten Treasures
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Dossta's comment on 2011-04-25 12:41 PM


Found it under my new "Unvoted By" tab.  Looks like I've got quite a backlog!


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