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Blood Doll
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
Demagogue's comment on 2008-12-15 01:43 PM
I'm a big fan of vampire culture. Nice job. Go to Comment
The True Lords
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Demagogue's comment on 2008-12-16 07:42 PM
Dang. Really well written, a dark and interesting concept. Go to Comment
Malitazum one-eyed
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Swamp)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-24 09:04 PM
I really like this character, he made me laugh when I read about his random commands and projects, like an ADD child. A history would make this sub better, but its already very good. The idea of gods being tangible and flawed appeals to me, even if this enormous croc cannot be killed by the PC's. Go to Comment
The Beekeeper's Hat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Demagogue's comment on 2008-02-04 02:09 AM
An interesting item, with a clever backstory. Go to Comment
30 Swords
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Demagogue's comment on 2008-02-03 02:01 AM
I love it, especially the last one. I love giving treasure more interesting properties than just a +1 sword of whacking. Go to Comment
Handvermin
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Demagogue's comment on 2008-01-19 12:05 AM
Creepy, creepy, creepy! I Iike it, a very humble yet savage creature. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-11 09:02 PM
Great work, Ouroboros, this is a truly dark piece that really reveals the spirt of the Witherdowns. You set up the mood perfectly, then reveal the gruesome truth. Awesome. Go to Comment
The Cruor Adficio Poxviridae Macrovirus
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-11-07 03:55 PM
This sub was inspired by manfred's new take on vampires, which I enjoyed, but decided that an alternative explanation of vampires with a biological basis was needed. All of the biological information is accurate to my knowledge, but if it happens to be incorrect or too technical to understand, please let me know. Go to Comment
The Cruor Adficio Poxviridae Macrovirus
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-10 01:53 PM
Updated: I changed the data on retroviruses. Thanks for pointing that out, Ouroboros, I don't know how I missed it. There is another term for this kind of virus, but I cannot recall what it is. Go to Comment
The Altar Of R'gu
Dungeons  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-07 10:08 PM
I was in ecstasy reading it. Freakin' awesome. Go to Comment
The Scarecrow
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-02 09:44 PM
Creepy but cool. My main question would be: Why does the scarecrow need the spirits of nature trapped inside it? Does it re-enforce the Scarecrow's structure? It seems that the spirit enhanced-scarecrow would act very similarly to a non-spirit enhanced scarecrow, because the witch controls the creature from afar regardless. Now that I am thinking about it though, I guess the witch could be controlling the nature spirits rather than the body itself. Either way, I'm a little confused. Go to Comment
Aquurian Caravan Beetle
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-11-29 06:21 PM
Its a good idea, but I'm not sure how the nomads are any more protected against the elements while riding the beetle's back, which would be the primary issue in a desert notorious for its sandstorms. But then again, perhaps I am misunderstanding the use of the beetles. Go to Comment
Aquurian Caravan Beetle
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-02 09:46 PM
Much improved, good job on the added detail. Go to Comment
The Anklar Blades
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-11-20 10:32 PM
Oh man that's awesome. My players are natural packrats and this item will be a great adventure-starter, because they would rather fight to the death than give up a single item that they won. Excellent backstory. Go to Comment
Morbid, The Lich Artiste
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Artistic/Performance)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-11-12 02:17 PM
My world doesn't have a large chunk of legislation on anything. The closest approximation I can think of would be The Lord of the Rings, only Sauron won, then died. Basically, the primary population is evil, at least for the time being, which makes for a very chaotic social structure. Liches are accepted on whether or not they can survive. This allows Morbid to take liberties in his creative process that would usually draw an army of crusaders to his door. Go to Comment
Harmless potions
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-11-10 01:57 PM
What you have here is good, but I would like more choices. Are you going to add more options? Go to Comment
True Vampires
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-11-07 12:58 AM
Excellent idea, your take is very original. I do plan to submit another piece presenting an alternative hypothesis, thanks for inspiring me! Go to Comment
Durmenthir, Demon-God of Contracts
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-09-19 11:19 PM
This is an excellent all-around submission, hence the 5/5 vote, and the transition from demon to mortal to god is superbly described. If I had to poke one hole in this, I would ask what originally motivated a creature born of chaos to turn so far against his nature? Otherwise, it's great. Go to Comment
The Matakos
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Mountains)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-03-06 06:39 PM
Maybe this monster is merely misunderstood. Having the intellect of a child, but the muscle development of a monster, it is simply trying to make its way in the world. It would be very interesting for the PC's to go on a monster hunt, only to find the great beast playing a game with itself. Go to Comment
The Rephatians
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Local)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-05-10 11:29 PM
I'll vote on this when it is more complete, but so far I like it. Go to Comment
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