Oh... wow. Big comment.
Thankee much dear. I will look into adding your sugestions whenever I get off my lazy rump. Go to Comment

Not intended to have magic origins, no. I'll go back in and clarify that. Thank you much Go to Comment

Heh... intended to be fantasy, yes. I based it off of reality, it can indeed be bent. There are chemicals that exist that mess with the brain in strange ways, yet I don't know enough about them to inculde it in this particular species.

I'll get to editing, then. Thank you kindly for the welcome Go to Comment