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Lover's Downfall
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-08-29 03:15 PM
Perhaps it could be a bit more in appearance than simply a "Masterwork Violin"; perhaps the strings of the violin are bone white, or for something more subtle it perhaps the violin always feel cold, not ice cold, just a little cold. Go to Comment
Oscv 02 Baleful Eye
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-08-29 03:25 PM
The transition to the quote is rough, and at first I was unaware it even was a quote; if I were you I'd put the quote in quotations, or italicise it, just so the reader knows they're reading a quote.
Other than that, it's a pretty interesting idea, I especially enjoy how it tracks ships, with countless telescopes and radars crammed into it. Go to Comment
Key, Quill, and Seal
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-08-22 01:45 PM
Cool ideas, though I'd like some more detail on the puzzle of the seal; and what makes it so difficult to solve. Go to Comment
Sila'Khrysath - The Great Sand Wyrm.
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Desert)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-08-24 11:54 AM
This is amazing, the story really adds to this as well. I'll definitely remember this for a desert encounter. Go to Comment
Sila'Khrysath - The Great Sand Wyrm.
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Desert)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-08-24 12:01 PM
Well, instead of focusing on the noise, you could instead focus on the glow, and perhaps the air becomes increasingly hot and humid as the energy level increases; hair stands up on peoples heads, metal conducting items might pull some sparks of energy from Sila'Khrysath's maw ect. Go to Comment
Lady Delores Briggs
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 08:06 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lady Delores Briggs
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 01:12 PM
Awesome, I'm going to try and see if I can get this as a side encounter somehow. Go to Comment
Lady Delores Briggs
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 01:12 PM
Plot Hook
The player characters are contracted to steal the sceptre of shrinking (such an item could be very useful, or at least fetch a high price), so they have to pose as nobles and attend one of the 'games'. Go to Comment
30 Prisons
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-08-29 04:48 PM
These types of documents are always useful, well done! Go to Comment
Tumble Melon Tree
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 12:02 PM
This is great, a fun non-combat encounter! Go to Comment
Tumble Melon Tree
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 08:06 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Treemen
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 11:44 AM
love stuff like this Go to Comment
The Minotauri
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-08-31 11:01 AM
An eldritch horror! With Ll’hhrau, who seems like some sort of mad God. Very cool. Go to Comment
Remaking the Undead
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-09-02 04:53 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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