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The Prince of the Endless Corridor
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-06 08:47 PM
As I read more and more of your works, I realize that you really do have a Lovecraftian mind and creativity. Most of your stuff could go in a CoC campaign. Go to Comment
The Labyrinth
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-11 05:46 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tact
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-10 07:26 PM
I myself find this to be a decent idea as of the moment. Were it to be fleshed out more, with more than just the basic idea of the plot, I'd be more apt to give it a better vote. Go to Comment
Ifrid
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-11 10:38 AM
In the interest of helping a newer member, I'm going to post and vote upon this. Hopefully my advice will be taken to heart.

1) Run the post through a spell checker. Yes, it takes an extra 30 seconds, however, it can make a post that much more readable.

2) Work on your grammar. Some of the tenses are mixed and jumbled, and that alone will take a full point off your rating.

3) While I think that he has potential as a character, at the moment he just seems...Lifeless. He's there, he has the big bad weapon, and he has the special abilities. What he doesn't really seem to have is anything more than a superficial background. What, for example, are the Lost Treasures of the Dragonwright? What is the Church of the Black Rose? What the heck is the Dragonwright anyway? These are things that you might know, but we have no clue who or what they are. Explain explain explain. Go to Comment
The handy small shield
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-09-05 08:42 PM
Dang. Ooooooold sub. I think I see some moss growing over in that corner... Go to Comment
Deck of Fate
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-07 03:53 PM
I read this a long time ago, yet I still like it for the sheer effort put into it. Great job! Go to Comment
Magebane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-06-30 09:16 PM
Indeed. A BH that actually seems intelligent and thoughtful. Rock on. Hopefully they join up (or already have in the past 2 years). Go to Comment
Gathering of Gypsies
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-20 12:06 AM
This would itself be a good sub-adventure for PC's. Hired guards anyone? Go to Comment
Cold's Will
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-09-08 11:34 AM
Ooooold school. Dang. Still good to have and use. Go to Comment
Useless quest
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-09-22 08:20 PM
Old. Rusty. Niiiiiifty. Yet, I think there could be more. As is, it's rough. Which, honestly, makes sense considering how old it is. I still think that it could be made more of though. Go to Comment
Shrieker
Plots  (Hired)   (Mini-Campaign)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-04-19 09:29 PM
Fluff. Woo. Go to Comment
Sabotage
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2006-12-30 04:04 PM
When I say old school... Go to Comment
Kalorsan
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-06-22 05:16 PM
Hmm...Interesting concept, yet it seems unfinished. Almost as if you had to leave in the middle of writing it. Or are you just leaving the ending open to the GM's imagination? How about these verses inshrined in ancient lore? What do they portend?

As it is now, 2/5. Go to Comment
Vespae
Plots  (Nature)   (Multi-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-24 09:50 PM
Interesting thought. 'tis quite amazing how creative people can be when they get a small, simple thought going. 4/5 Go to Comment
Snowflake
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Travelers)
Chaosmark's comment on 2009-01-28 08:10 PM
Censeo ergo sum. I vote therefore I am. This submission is proof that not ALL of the original submissions were that bad. Go to Comment
Golden Trouble
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-10 07:07 PM
Well, now...that last guy wasn't quite as civil about it as some would be, but I must admit, this is a very good scenario, if not just something to flesh out the world by having the PCs meet the poor guy. I certainly know that the poor players would go insane were this to happen to them...*pokes Ancient Gamer* Don't be getting any ideas from this one, worthy of the Hall it may be. Go to Comment
The Blue Books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2006-12-18 10:56 PM
Wow, old school. Could use some work, but hey, we all can use some work now and then. Go to Comment
Ruby of Par
Items  (Jewelry)   (Combat)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-01-20 04:53 PM
An interesting concept, yet as with most of the 'starter' submissions, it could use a bit more work. Perhaps someone can make a plot to go with this and link them? Go to Comment
Found Lost
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-09-08 10:36 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Itching Dust
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-08-28 10:00 PM
Well, my thought is that this might work interestingly well as an item of use to thieves. Am I right? Honestly, even though it's not really fleshed out, it still CAN be used. After all, just toss a handful at a guard and soon enough afterwards he'll have to stop the chase from sheer agony.

Or it could be set as a trap against intruders. C'mon people, use your brains! Go to Comment
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