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The Prism Of The Adamant Magistrate
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2006-03-12 11:48 AM
Wow, this is an old one. I remember reading it a while back, and I agree with Strolen in that the creator definitely needs a way to get out if entrapped in his own prison. Holding vote is 3.5/5 until/unless modified. Good idea, just needs a bit more work. Go to Comment
Yitsmal
Locations  (Desert)   (City)
Chaosmark's comment on 2006-12-25 05:06 PM
A decent location, easy enough to plop down wherever needed. Go to Comment
Corvis
Locations  (Regional)   (Plains)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-07 07:58 PM
I got quite a kick out of this background. Quite amusing to see the direct results of Corvus' works. Go to Comment
Masque of Confusion
Plots  (Event)   (Multi-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-07-14 06:42 PM
Gah! Reading this plot reminds me of an old movie about this bookie for a mobster, who was dating this girl who claimed to be his daughter, but actually wasn't, and so he went to the mobster to ask her hand in marriage, but then the mobster's actual daughter and he were like, "Who are you?" and things went nuts, and then it came out that the not-daughter actually WAS the mobsters daughter, and it all was a huge mess until the movie ended, when things finally came together.

If anyone happens to remember that movie, I'd say it's a good one to watch for how this plot should feel when played out. Nice job ephe!

Edit: I finally remembered the movie. It's Oscar, the 1991 comedy film starring Silvester Stallone. Amazingly halarious movie. Go to Comment
Muzzled Mouse
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-25 02:01 PM
Without being entirely aware of your thaumatech rune system, I'm not entirely sure such a system would allow runes inscribed on the leather to affect the capabilities of the rat. Perhaps more expensive versions have the runes for enhanced teeth tattooed on the rat's skin instead? (tattooing a rat would be a bit hard to do, thus more expensive) Go to Comment
A World of Mystery
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-09-12 04:29 PM
While the author of this isn't around anymore, it's still an example of a submission that, while definitely not uber-quality, has enough to be inserted into a campaign or world with relative ease. Point in fact, it seems to me that we should be less harsh on submissions that don't have massive gobs of content, and consider whether they are, like this one, self-contained. Go to Comment
Eris's Pool
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-04-19 09:42 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Twisting of the Land
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-09-02 04:37 PM
Well, actually, if you read the Chimera Oil item he linked to, it says just a few drops makes the skin soft as clay. 30 gallons of the stuff into the water system will cause some serious funkiness. *nods* Go to Comment
The Five Glow Lights of the Great Library
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Sentient)
Chaosmark's comment on 2011-11-26 05:00 PM


I wasn't ever a huge fan of the Orbs of Corvus, but these are decently interesting in their own right, without the other Orbs or the frame story for them as a whole.


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Beast Weed
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-06 04:50 PM
I remember this one from before the move. I always thought it had potential, and might incorporate it into my world. Go to Comment
Felia
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-02-16 09:51 PM
Not much needs be said. It's a good submission. Go to Comment
The Prince of the Endless Corridor
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-06 08:47 PM
As I read more and more of your works, I realize that you really do have a Lovecraftian mind and creativity. Most of your stuff could go in a CoC campaign. Go to Comment
The Labyrinth
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-11 05:46 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tact
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-10 07:26 PM
I myself find this to be a decent idea as of the moment. Were it to be fleshed out more, with more than just the basic idea of the plot, I'd be more apt to give it a better vote. Go to Comment
Ifrid
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-11 10:38 AM
In the interest of helping a newer member, I'm going to post and vote upon this. Hopefully my advice will be taken to heart.

1) Run the post through a spell checker. Yes, it takes an extra 30 seconds, however, it can make a post that much more readable.

2) Work on your grammar. Some of the tenses are mixed and jumbled, and that alone will take a full point off your rating.

3) While I think that he has potential as a character, at the moment he just seems...Lifeless. He's there, he has the big bad weapon, and he has the special abilities. What he doesn't really seem to have is anything more than a superficial background. What, for example, are the Lost Treasures of the Dragonwright? What is the Church of the Black Rose? What the heck is the Dragonwright anyway? These are things that you might know, but we have no clue who or what they are. Explain explain explain. Go to Comment
The handy small shield
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-09-05 08:42 PM
Dang. Ooooooold sub. I think I see some moss growing over in that corner... Go to Comment
Deck of Fate
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-07 03:53 PM
I read this a long time ago, yet I still like it for the sheer effort put into it. Great job! Go to Comment
Magebane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-06-30 09:16 PM
Indeed. A BH that actually seems intelligent and thoughtful. Rock on. Hopefully they join up (or already have in the past 2 years). Go to Comment
Gathering of Gypsies
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-20 12:06 AM
This would itself be a good sub-adventure for PC's. Hired guards anyone? Go to Comment
Cold's Will
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-09-08 11:34 AM
Ooooold school. Dang. Still good to have and use. Go to Comment
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