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Map of Ithar
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-08-24 10:20 PM
Personally I think that everyone is making far too big of a fuss over this. The essence of the item is good; original inspiration is irrelivant to how good it is.

I think we need to take focus off why it's not good and instead focus on how it can be used properly. Go to Comment
In the House of the Yellow Priest
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-09-26 06:39 PM
Hey, I think that's perfectly alright. I remember seeing this before, way back when I didn't have an account, and by the time I got one, I forgot about it. I always liked this adventure, and now that I'm better versed in certain lores, I find it to be quite good. A nice thriller, though it might be a bit short if a GM doesn't add in extra stuff; e.g. filler.

As to what that filler might be, I'm clueless.

4/5 - Great job! Go to Comment
Crystal Lute
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-04-11 08:31 PM
Not bad, not bad at all. A bit cliche' with the "owner loving item obsessively", but 'tis creative about it, and a very interesting item. This would be good for bards obviously, but if not carefully controlled it might become a problem with overpowerment...But a good GM shouldn't have any problems with that sort of thing.

4/5 - Good item, good description Go to Comment
Karlek's Blade of Stolen Souls
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-04-19 09:14 PM
Comments and votes are goooooood! Vote people vote! Vote people vote!

Anyway, I recall reading this a long while back, and I still see it as being a quite useful item for a GM to add into a plot or scenario. I'm seeing a necromancer using this to slowly take down better and better opponents, capturing each in turn, until he has the best swordsman-zombie in the world. What a lieutenant to have, eh? Then the PCs have to fight the zombie-lieutenant, and pray that they don't get captured themselves.

Man, I love the potential of some of these old submissions... Go to Comment
Sadaren
Locations  (Other)   (Regional)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-12-12 10:08 PM
Oldies but moldies. Quite frankly, I find this to be a fairly good sub. Seriously. Idea => A few interesting twists => usable in both low and high campaigns => Good Submission. Go to Comment
Father Max
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-04-23 07:12 PM
I dislike the fact that any time someone hears about a religious crusade or extreme zeal, they immediately associate it with Christianity. Other religions have been just as zealous and just as warlike, some very much more so.

Rant aside, I really like this submission. He's the sort of person that does good, but the Church can't support him openly due to alienating others. There are more of these people than you might think. Go to Comment
Animated Gauntlet of Thunder
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-04-23 07:18 PM
Took me a bit to find it after reading Father Max, but 'tis interesting. I think it could be fleshed out a bit more. Go to Comment
The Valley of Undead
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-09-23 06:36 PM
"The Orcish Occupation took more than three hundred years." This right here was my favorite part. It blindsided me, and makes the entire submission utterly reek of realism. A simple, expedient solution is adopted "for the duration", and ends up changing the entire society when the duration is about 4-5 generations.

Excellent! Go to Comment
When the moon fell...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2006-01-04 09:30 AM
Well, I think that the Capn. and MoonHunter happened to read a different version of this than what I am...As it is, it seems quite established, with plot hooks galore, yet not extremely specific to a setting. I like it. 4/5

Remember, long doesn't always mean better, and short doesn't always mean bad. Go to Comment
The Devil's footsteps
Items  (Other)   (Combat)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-04-23 07:00 PM
I can actually find a use for this... Go to Comment
The Box That Cannot Be Opened
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-10-14 09:25 PM
The Box That Cannot Be Opened
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-07 11:35 AM
Bump for the newcomers who never saw this excellent piece. Go to Comment
Arrow of Personal Hell
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-06-18 05:40 PM
Actually Strolen, we could leave this item alone and make another arrow that would do the effect you suggested. Arrows of Madness perhaps?

P.S. Yes, I know it's an old topic. MEH! Leave meh be! Go to Comment
Arrow of Personal Hell
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-06-21 02:44 PM
So I've been told by Moonie whenever I do so. ^^ Go to Comment
Arrow of Personal Hell
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-06-22 10:41 AM
*blinks, then nods* Aye. Will (not) do. Go to Comment
The Old Kingdom
Locations  (Plains)   (Regional)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-06 08:25 PM
I rather like this one, and intend to use it to flesh out Tyren. Hope you don't mind! Go to Comment
The Prism Of The Adamant Magistrate
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2006-03-12 11:48 AM
Wow, this is an old one. I remember reading it a while back, and I agree with Strolen in that the creator definitely needs a way to get out if entrapped in his own prison. Holding vote is 3.5/5 until/unless modified. Good idea, just needs a bit more work. Go to Comment
Yitsmal
Locations  (Desert)   (City)
Chaosmark's comment on 2006-12-25 05:06 PM
A decent location, easy enough to plop down wherever needed. Go to Comment
Corvis
Locations  (Regional)   (Plains)
Chaosmark's comment on 2005-11-07 07:58 PM
I got quite a kick out of this background. Quite amusing to see the direct results of Corvus' works. Go to Comment
Masque of Confusion
Plots  (Event)   (Multi-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2007-07-14 06:42 PM
Gah! Reading this plot reminds me of an old movie about this bookie for a mobster, who was dating this girl who claimed to be his daughter, but actually wasn't, and so he went to the mobster to ask her hand in marriage, but then the mobster's actual daughter and he were like, "Who are you?" and things went nuts, and then it came out that the not-daughter actually WAS the mobsters daughter, and it all was a huge mess until the movie ended, when things finally came together.

If anyone happens to remember that movie, I'd say it's a good one to watch for how this plot should feel when played out. Nice job ephe!

Edit: I finally remembered the movie. It's Oscar, the 1991 comedy film starring Silvester Stallone. Amazingly halarious movie. Go to Comment
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