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Akasha
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-04-10 01:29 PM
At the moment, there are only 4 other submissions within this setting, two of which are irrelevant. I did, however, link to both of the relevant subs, and will add some further cross-linking to help.

In particular, you'll be wanting to take a look at Melders. I don't have much more than that yet, but as this sub shows, I like the setting and want to keep expanding it, so more shall be forthcoming.

Also, I fully agree that they should generally be relegated to the background. Some things just end up that way, and divine creatures of any kind tend to fall heavily into that category.
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Angel BioModification
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-03-18 10:06 AM
This is a good piece of setting fluff, much like most of the other Cosmic Era subs. Things like this show that you're really thinking through your setting and making it all fit together.

Lana makes me sad though. Go to Comment
30 Programs from the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-04-08 05:52 PM
This definitely helps give a solid feel for the social mores and interests of Arcologies in the Cosmic Era. I feel like I understand the average sheeple of that time period much more after reading this. Go to Comment
Fields of Flesh
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-12-21 12:34 PM
Hot damn! I loved the poem at the beginning, and was really getting creeped out at the descriptions of the landscape. The middle section, describing the town and the interactions therein, was less energetic, but that's just an issue with resting-points in general. I especially like the second half, and the fact that the entire plot is seeded with extra ways to benefit from fighting smarter, not harder. The alternate ending was nice, and a good way to round it all out for those parties that wish to always have happy endings.

All in all, I was quite happy with this. My one possible complaint is that there wasn't much example given of altered wildlife, which doesn't jive with how thoughtful you were with the rest of the ecology. Go to Comment
30 Pieces of Horse Brass
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-12-14 04:38 PM
A solid list, with some good ideas for personal-spells as well. Some of those would be just as useful for regular people. Go to Comment
Non-Euclidean Architecture: Part 2
Systems  (Architectural)   (Specific)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-12-02 10:40 PM
I love these two subs. Both are well-written, and make a very difficult subject (that we all seem to love the concept of) accessible and usable to average GMs. I love that you include lots of solid examples of ways that these concepts can be used.

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Duty Shrines
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-11-25 10:26 PM
Excellent! It's like the secretive old master who takes on a single apprentice and teaches them The Ancient Arts over the course of a few months in a brutal training montage, but concentrated into an ancient artifact that slumbers, awaiting the day when a student passes by.

I highly approve of this. Go to Comment
Common Horrors of the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-10-24 06:59 PM
I'm going to echo Dozus here. I like the detail you've gone into about all of them, but I most especially like the arcanotech:

"They are much like Alice in Wonderland, as in their book 1+1 no longer equals 2, but is rather a massive sliding parabolic curve of possible answers."

That line right there sold it to me. Go to Comment
Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-10-21 11:19 PM
This submission is dedicated to a girl that I hardly knew, yet had a profound impact on a lot of people that I love dearly. She died far too young, and reminded me of just how terrible a toll death extracts from those who survive. Until the day when death is a bad memory, may this token of remembrance burn on in the darkness. Go to Comment
Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-10-25 05:02 PM
Update: Updated based on suggestions. Go to Comment
Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-10-25 05:31 PM
I've modified the submission to cover a few of these points, which are excellent.

Cela is not an undead (except, perhaps, philosophically), which I thought had been handled by "She was able to snatch the girls soul from the Void of Souls and bind it to her body long enough for Cela to heal from her mortal wounds", but I can understand if that wasn't entirely clear.

As for her mother, that's something entirely up to the GM who wants to use Cela. It could be that she quietly passed away, or that she was hunted down by religious authorities, or is still out there, providing support and a "home base" for her daughter's quest.

The rest all were included in the update, but for redundancies sake:
* The children are also color-drained. Nothing comes for free, and subverting the course of nature as thoroughly as this is bound to leave a mark.
* Wording within the narrative was modified to be slightly less jarring. You were correct here, and I had just gotten used to it after reading and re-reading that passage. This is why writers have editors.
* I've given a smidge of direction for her goals in the journal excerpt, but honestly this is something that a GM has to decide for themselves, since it's heavily contingent on the campaign world and what is possible. Go to Comment
Chrome
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-10-22 06:15 PM
Why yes, I can totally see this happening in any non-apocalyptic future. Energy drinks are one of those unique expressions of modern society that nobody really saw coming, but have completely ingrained themselves into our collective psyche. Any near-future sci-fi without the equivalent is missing an important supporting piece of flavor.

Very nicely done! I can't think of a single thing that I'd like improved on this submission, which means it gets one of my rare 5's. Go to Comment
Levels of Engagement
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-10-22 06:31 PM
I like the breakdown.

Something to keep in mind with cyber warfare as we know it today is that, while it's somewhat like submarines fighting, it's also automated to an extremely high degree. You set up scripts and toolkits to attack vulnerabilities and defend against known exploits much more than you actually run manual commands in a terminal. The processor is a thousand times faster than you'll ever be with human wetware in the control-loop.

So while you'll have operators doing some very high-level decision-making and in-the-trenches vulnerability-decisions, almost all of your actual fighting is probably going to be done at light-speed between two computers duking it out. We're just too damn slow to keep up. Go to Comment
Othamm, the God of Completion
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-10-25 11:08 PM
I'm thinking that, depending on the amount of power that Othamm can exert through a priest, this would be an excellent source of support casters, boosting and aiding their allies in whatever tasks they might be performing. The warrior moves his weapon with crystal clarity, the carpenter hits a nail with the perfect economy of effort, the chef cooks a dozen masterpieces at once with precision timing. And of course, given that Othamm helps those who help themselves, any given priest would still be able to physically help even once their metaphysical assistance is gone. An extra pair of hands is always useful.

Overall, an interesting bit of flavor to add to the world. It provides some nice verisimilitude, since people have always named their deities and prayed to them for blessings. Showing that little extra bit of work always makes the world a larger, more varied place for the PCs to live in. Go to Comment
Exitium
Locations  (Ruins)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-09-29 10:36 PM
I like this. It reads like a Lovecraft story, with the slow descent into madness and horror, and yet it still provides all the detail one needs to take this place and run with it. Go to Comment
Murderblaze
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-09-29 07:21 AM
Honestly, I'm not entirely sure if I played up the undead aspect of his nature sufficiently. But then, it's rather hard to take a creature known for resurrection and make it undead. Thoughts are appreciated. Go to Comment
Murderblaze
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-03-16 11:59 AM
I guess I've got some refining to do. Go to Comment
101 Useless or Trivial Super/Mutant Powers
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-09-29 10:24 PM
"Worst. Superpower. Ever."

Coming up with these are always fun. Then trying to figure out how the heck to use them is even more so. Go to Comment
Undead Beard Fleas
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-09-29 04:12 PM
I'm not much of a dwarf fan, but I can appreciate the horror and terror that these little critters bring. They're subtle in their danger, but no less deadly for their subtlety. I approve. Go to Comment
Shivenhusk the Unliving Refuse
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-09-23 06:25 PM
Shivenhusk seems very much like an end-of-campaign boss to defeat. His writeup obviously has enough flesh to be spawning hordes of writhing, disgusting, slimy plot hooks, and I'd like to see some of those, to better allow his use. Go to Comment
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