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30 Dimensional Fatigue Events
Plots  (Crisis)   (Encounter)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-15 10:31 PM
Definitely a bunch of excellent plot points. Shove these on a random encounter table and you've got a near-endless supply of material for a "mop-up squad" of PCs.

Sidenote: I noticed something that seems like it should've been removed -- "Note to self: phase merge article, man-woman merged into single entity, human plant hybrid, human animal hybrid, force cyborg" Go to Comment
Devouring Fire
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-11 07:21 PM
Bits and pieces of this seem slightly unpolished compared to your normal work, but that doesn't detract significantly from the overall piece. I enjoy the idea, and can see a number of uses almost immediately for these.

Excellent work! Go to Comment
Demonic Pipe Organ
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Puzzles)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-12 08:51 PM
My only real comments on this were cosmetic, and already given in flashchat. Here, have a vote. Go to Comment
The Tower of NON
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-10 09:48 PM
Not sure that I can add anything extra to the comments already made. Go to Comment
Dimensional Tap Reactor
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-08 12:40 PM
Interesting description, interesting setting info, high hopes for the future, then the GM note which explains the unseen dangers. This seems solid, but applying it seems a bit difficult outside the classic "the reactor is melting down, onoes!" and "the experiment went horribly, horribly wrong" plots. Go to Comment
Dimensional Tap Reactor
Items  (Tools)   (Cursed)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-08 04:01 PM
Doooo eeeeeet. Go to Comment
Dwarven Calendar
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-08 11:12 PM
This is definitely different, and helps add some true strangeness to dwarves as a race. Instead of being short grumpy humans, things like this calendar paint a picture of a truly independent race.

As a sidenote, I'm still seeing some contradiction with the timespans you're specifying. You state that:
"The first rune, is the big cycle. The big cycle turns 24 times in 1 dwarven year, and represents the months. On the 25th turn, a new year begins.
The second rune, is the small cycle. The small cycle turns 24 times, before the big cycle turns once.
The small cycle represents the weeks, each week has 24 ief (days and nights)."

But then immediately after you state that:
"1 Dwarven month = 24 ief
1 Dwarven year = 576 ief"

This is a direct contradiction. Either the small cycle is weeks, and there are 24 weeks in a month, or the small cycle is days, and there are 24 days in a month.

Other than that, however, this is a good solid post. Kudos for the work you've put into it! Go to Comment
Zombie Servants of the Ch'thra
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-12 08:50 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cosmic Era: Doom Bestiary
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-08 12:37 PM
"... and a number have demonstrated parapsychic powers, because having an armored tank body and plasma cannons just wasn't enough."

That right there made the entire sub for me. I approve.

This is a very handy list, though in practice I would probably have random attribute tables for the Imps and Spider Demons, if not the others. Go to Comment
Lover's Downfall
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-08-29 08:16 AM
Yeah, this one isn't getting any more complete. Have at it! Go to Comment
30 Items You Need
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-08-04 03:37 PM
I always like hearing creative uses of things. A "bag o' tricks" character is always fun to play. The updated descriptions really help flesh this out. I'll update my vote when more of it has been fleshed out. Go to Comment
The Tarxan
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Other)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-08 12:27 PM
I really like this. The medical examiner write-up really allows a detailed description without being a plain info-dump. While inspired by a character from somewhere else, I see plenty of potential for these Tarxan to be useful in a large number of settings.

Also, bonus points for that encounter table. Usability is a plus. Go to Comment
The Leonamuth
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-05-19 08:29 AM
Most sane individuals would prefer not. Go to Comment
The Leonamuth
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-05-19 08:32 AM
I always loved the idea of Corpsefall. It always had that, "Ooo, this place is different!" vibe, one it shares with the Hell of Dry Bones.

This particular sub is an excellent extension of the Corpsefall ecosystem. In a world with Boneslugs, another giant predator makes sense, and helps round out the system a bit more. Go to Comment
Oscv-02 Baleful Eye
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-06-04 10:44 PM
Standard sci-fi fare, but with a nice little bit of flavor for the geeks in the audience. Go to Comment
Akasha
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-04-10 01:29 PM
At the moment, there are only 4 other submissions within this setting, two of which are irrelevant. I did, however, link to both of the relevant subs, and will add some further cross-linking to help.

In particular, you'll be wanting to take a look at Melders. I don't have much more than that yet, but as this sub shows, I like the setting and want to keep expanding it, so more shall be forthcoming.

Also, I fully agree that they should generally be relegated to the background. Some things just end up that way, and divine creatures of any kind tend to fall heavily into that category.
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Angel BioModification
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-03-18 10:06 AM
This is a good piece of setting fluff, much like most of the other Cosmic Era subs. Things like this show that you're really thinking through your setting and making it all fit together.

Lana makes me sad though. Go to Comment
30 Programs from the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Chaosmark's comment on 2013-04-08 05:52 PM
This definitely helps give a solid feel for the social mores and interests of Arcologies in the Cosmic Era. I feel like I understand the average sheeple of that time period much more after reading this. Go to Comment
Fields of Flesh
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-12-21 12:34 PM
Hot damn! I loved the poem at the beginning, and was really getting creeped out at the descriptions of the landscape. The middle section, describing the town and the interactions therein, was less energetic, but that's just an issue with resting-points in general. I especially like the second half, and the fact that the entire plot is seeded with extra ways to benefit from fighting smarter, not harder. The alternate ending was nice, and a good way to round it all out for those parties that wish to always have happy endings.

All in all, I was quite happy with this. My one possible complaint is that there wasn't much example given of altered wildlife, which doesn't jive with how thoughtful you were with the rest of the ecology. Go to Comment
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