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The Devoted Children of Midnight
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-04-13 11:33 AM
The submission is In-Work Private. You can't access it. It'll work once I make the sub public. (I don't have it that way currently because I don't like spamming the main page with edit notifications, which is what happens to In Work Public submissions.) Go to Comment
The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-18 03:09 AM

Ink Lizards


Dog-sized creatures with thick, scaly skin, long claws and double-rows of razor teeth. They charge to bring down their prey, biting through calf or thigh with their terrifyingly strong jaws, though occasionally they'll hammer a large creature with their long tail to knock them over. Once their victims are downed, the creatures claw and bite without mercy, tearing out large chunks of sweet, delicious flesh to devour. Their bite is poisonous, quickly leading to paralysis and sepsis, presuming the prey lives that long.

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The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-18 02:36 AM

The Ebony Octopus


It creeps from shadow to shadow, finding entry through the smallest of openings. Shadowy tendrils snake from around corners and beneath grates, grabbing ankles and dragging victims screaming into the darkness. What happens next is best left unsaid.

Notably, these tendrils seem immune to the normal corrosive effect of light upon the denizens of the Primal Shadows, retaining their form and power despite direct illumination. This makes them a huge threat against the unwary, who naturally assume that being in the light protects them from the dangers lurking in the lightless reaches. Only the core body itself is vulnerable to radiance, though trapping it long enough to fully destroy it is quite difficult; much like it's waterborn compatriot, the Ebony Octopus is hard to pin down.

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The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-18 01:57 AM


Fell creatures near the top of the food chain, shadowbeasts are a hairsbreadth away from being shadow incarnate. Their form is extremely fluid, shifting and changing as actual shadows do, becoming larger or smaller as needed. If seen with dim light (full daylight would annihilate it), it will appear as an amorphous mass of shadows, clinging to and creeping along the ground.

Cunning predators, they prefer to ambush their prey and drag it off into the darkness, enshrouding it with their caustic shadows before tearing it apart to release the essence of life within.

Like all creatures of this plane, light is a potent weapon against a shadowbeast. Enough light will kill it, as will sufficient application of magical damage. Physical weaponry, however, is next to useless in fending one off. Torchbearers should be cautious, however, for a shadowbeast will make it's first priority the removal of light and any who carry it.

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The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-18 02:25 AM

The Onyx Serpent


A great creature of black, stony skin, whose slithering across the ground sounds like the grinding of mill stones. It has piercing eyes of gold and teeth that glow with a ghostly pale light, with a hiss that sounds like crumbling mountainsides. It's size belies it's speed, however, and this snake eshews venom, preferring instead to crush and swallow prey whole.

The hide is an organic obsidian composite harder than any known rock, easily capable of deflecting both blade and spell. Of the various fauna that exist in the Hell of Primal Shadows, this is the one that all others fear. You do not confront it, you sidestep it and pray it finds something tastier to go after.

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The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-29 11:49 PM
One winds up here the same way they end up in any hell: They kick the bucket and are sentenced to eternal doom, or someone opens a portal and they walk/fly/are thrown through..

It's place in the greater cosmos is as a repository for damned souls. My concept of the geographic region of hyper-reality generally referred to as "the Hells" is that it also functions as a prison for the demons and dark gods that seem to inevitably reside therein. Which also explains nicely their constant desire to escape and wreck havoc on the mortal plane. Go to Comment
The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-07-12 09:44 PM
For those wanting a bit more combat information, click here. Go to Comment
The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2012-12-15 05:56 PM

Aphotic Worms

Every ecosystem has its parasites; the Hell of Primal Shadows is no different.

Living, writhing shadows, Aphotic Worms clump together and swarm unsuspecting creatures, wriggling and sliding their way into any orifice they can. Once they've infested their target, they take full control over its actions, using their new host to hunt and kill prey. Non-sentient, the worms will flee a host when it has been rendered unconscious, immobile, or dead.

Their danger lies in numbers and hosts. The worms themselves are easily killed with the smallest of lights.

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The Hell of Primal Shadows
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Chaosmark's comment on 2013-09-21 11:12 PM
An excellent point. Some visual description was needed, because PCs will presumably have light and thus they'll see bits and pieces of these demons. However, since darkness is intricately bound to how these should be presented, perhaps the addition of a "lightless" description for each would be in order. Go to Comment
30 Genies
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-18 09:56 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Generating Fear: Disappearing Pursuit
Articles  (At Table)   (Gaming - Genre)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-08 06:49 PM
Because it's long moved past it's origins in Cryptography. ( Go to Comment
Altar of Grilling
Items  (Tools)   (Villanous)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-04 11:28 AM

This is the perfect Garage Sale From Hell item. It captures the ideals of the codex perfectly, and is itself a unique and useable item.

Well done.

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A Treatise on the Styles of Casting
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-02-25 10:49 PM

I'd like to note that, while not required, it should be extremely hard, if not impossible, for a mage to use more than one style at once. Otherwise it opens the field to powergaming of a nasty type. Perhaps the shape of the energy used in each style interferes with that of the others, or some similar reason.

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A Treatise on the Styles of Casting
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-03-07 12:17 AM
I laughed pretty hard at #4. Go to Comment
St. Cled's Path
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-02-25 10:46 PM

Ooo, pilgrimages! I like the vibe of this one. The little story snippets are a good touch, for when your PCs are wondering, "Why the heck do we have to stop here on this pilgrimage?" And in each, there's something still there that can be involved in a subplot.

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A Field Guide to Werewolves
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-02-25 10:36 PM

Frame story! I like it and the distinction between blood-born and bitten lycanthropes.

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David Branch, Cult Leader
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-02-25 10:56 AM

I like how this one turned out. The character makes good, solid sense. His capabilities match his backstory, and so do his flaws. I especially appreciate that he's not an idiot, and recognizes the treachery of Azoxul.

Overall, a rather effective cult leader.

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Emotional Program Break or EPB
Items  (Computers)   (Sentient)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-02-24 08:00 PM

Of note is the careful distinction between 'feelings' and 'emotions'. This is the former, not the latter. Took me a moment to catch that.

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Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-05-03 08:48 PM
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30 Steampunk Books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Chaosmark's comment on 2012-02-04 01:45 PM
Update: Out with ye!

Thanks to Dragonlordmax, Mourngrymm and Roack for their assistance finishing off the list. Go to Comment
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