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The Time Knights
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-22 01:09 PM
I disagree.
Who are the renegade elements and why are they dangerous? Just because they can't be predicted? Where did the Time Knights come from? Who is the "High Duke" (I know it's a big secret, but some explanation would be nice)?
They are waaaaay waaaay powerful. Essentially, you say that these Time Knights know everything that can happen, can heal any wound that occurs to them, and can teleport to anywhere. Way too powerful.

I'm gonna' put this right out there for everybody to know- I don't like submissions involving time travel, time control, time manipulation, and the like. Go to Comment
The Hands of the Master
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-22 01:09 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
30+ Kings
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-22 01:51 AM
Great work. I find this much more useful than the other 30s. Go to Comment
Calendars in Éran
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Historical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-22 01:11 PM
I like Ore Measure and Hjurkans (Hjurkans seems particularly interesting and realistic to me).
How do Isan years differ from others? Are they measured differently? What are they connected to? Go to Comment
Tablatura Ni' Shockra, the Book of Surprises
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Combat)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-19 01:37 AM
It seems okay. Just okay.
The story behind it and all that is good... But where did the Shadow of Fists come from? Is their motivation money? Saving the townsfolk? Ending the war? Stability? Hatred of wizards? What is it about for them?
Skip the stats and the dice numbers and all that business, we are a non-system site.

Also, for such a well-named and described item, the actual trap of it (a bear trap?) seems kind of... I dunno', mundane. Ridiculous, even. Sure, the wizard now has no hands and is bleeding; but I think it would be more interesting if the book somehow trapped the wizard's soul or something of that nature. I dunno', maybe I'm just full of bad ideas.

Anyway... Go to Comment
Time-Wine
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-19 07:03 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Nak Hsuuuu
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-14 12:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Pathkeepers of the Eternal Pattern
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-11 01:27 AM
Mani Path-Hider
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-07 04:07 PM
Ooh... Good idea Go to Comment
The Beastmen of The Six Lands
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-05 03:37 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Beastmen of The Six Lands
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-07 04:18 PM
I have to say that overall, it isn't hugely unique or groundbreaking; it doesn't excite me with how interesting it is. But when you really read it, interesting details like the Laniard and the Great One make it better than it's base, which feels rather generic to me. Go to Comment
The Sleeping King
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-05 03:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Merideth the Great
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-05 03:33 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Markus the Black
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-04 12:23 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Knuckle Roller
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Defining)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-04 12:20 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Hraun
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Other)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-04 12:19 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Hraun
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Other)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-04 01:02 AM
"hunting down any upstart hraun or koori that try to take too large a claim to their world"

Did I miss what a "koori" is? Go to Comment
Looking for Bethany
Plots  (Event)   (Side-Quest)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-31 12:40 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Fountain of Goats
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-31 01:58 AM
OMG FOUNTAIN OF GOATS Go to Comment
The Red Ghost and the Crypt of the Ebony Princess
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-31 01:56 AM
Good job Go to Comment
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