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30 Pirates
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Criminal/Espionage)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-20 04:48 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Great White Dragon
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-17 09:08 PM
And?
Why does this dragon have healing powers? Where did it come from, how was it born or who made it or whatever? Where did it come from? What are its habits? Are there legends that surround it? So on so on.

You need more. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-16 11:36 AM
Gaian Worm
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 01:40 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Kada
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 02:17 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Princesses
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Political)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 11:02 AM
Pretty amusing. :) Go to Comment
30 Necromancers
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 11:01 AM
The Enori
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 12:52 AM
There is very, VERY little detail. It is an interesting idea, but what else is there to it?
How as the Enori's "innocence faded"? Why do people want to catch it so bad? Is it divine? It's unique, so where did it come from? Go to Comment
Daltorz of the inferno
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 12:50 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Headsman
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-13 08:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Incomplete Enchantments of Agarn
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-12 05:46 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Daltorz
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-13 08:10 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lutazum the Tortoise
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-13 10:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Donnerwunsch
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-13 11:00 PM
Hot damn. Go to Comment
30 Manuscripts
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-07 10:06 PM
Though I'm not a fan of the particular submissions of mine which you chose... SOme of my earlier, shittier work. Go to Comment
Church's Devil
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-06 04:59 PM
Reminds me of Frankenstein's monster, in a way. Go to Comment
Gurad Sorgon
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-04 07:26 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Astral Sea
Systems  (Transportation)   (Specific)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-03 12:42 AM
Not a big fan of transdimensional travel, but it's mostly for the reasons you have outlined, Scras- the boringness and cliche of the whole "planar" set-up.
This, I think, fits in better with the whole idea of fantasy. Go to Comment
Shirion the Indescribable
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-02 01:26 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Fjostrez
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-31 10:59 PM
I'd clean up some of the hanging plotlines and clarify some setting notes (for instance, short notes on who King Demitrius is, and what Fell-Kin is).
It's a nice historical blade, but the powers are pure cliche. Go to Comment
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