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Hak-Hakunin
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-25 04:44 PM
Another fine submission from AG. Go to Comment
Nethernimbus
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-25 04:43 PM
Pretty damn good. Go to Comment
Ylithain, the Drowned Queen
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Swamp)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-24 01:29 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Gorgoddon
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-25 04:47 PM
Mother Kalas... Kali? Go to Comment
Gorgoddon
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-26 07:11 PM
Haha, no, I just thought, "gee, that death mother sounds like Kali.. Wait a second..." Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-24 01:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Abadra Siege Barrel
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-22 12:58 AM
Heheheh, good idea... Go to Comment
Miguel's Blade/The Sword of the Usurper
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-22 12:58 AM
My main issue with this is stylistic, it is the names. They are, frankly, in my opinion, terrible.
But I somewhat enjoy the social status quirk (given that social status is a big part of my settings), and the sun connection is interesting, though not revolutionary. Go to Comment
Compall Fowle
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-22 12:56 AM
Agreed. I have no suggestions to make. Go to Comment
The Cutsman
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-20 09:59 PM
I turn it over to the harsh light of day.
I apologize, Cutsman, prepare to be ridiculed. Go to Comment
The Cutsman
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-20 10:35 PM
Yeah, I was worrying that it might be a tad unwieldy, but as they say, the die is cast. Go to Comment
The Cutsman
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-20 10:36 PM
"Aah, the betrayer is betrayed by the creature he was going to use to do the betrayal!"

Hahaha, I like that. :D Go to Comment
The Cutsman
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-22 01:01 AM
I'm trying to strike the right balance between making magic seem bizarre, mystical, and ritualistic and making it seem alchemistic, scientific, sort of like technobabble is used in the modern age. Go to Comment
The Cutsman
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-25 04:49 PM
I beg to differ, though only on one point- in the "first" golem story (though not the very first story of an artificial being), the Hebrew one, the golem does not, in fact, turn against its creator.
But anyway, whatever. Go to Comment
30 More Princesses
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Political)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-19 04:48 PM
Lookin' good so far :) Go to Comment
Apple Tree of Selilion
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-19 04:46 PM
Good job. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-18 09:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-19 05:15 PM
I like it, it's a bit "high fantasy" for me, in that everything is ensorcelled (and that magic seems to be pretty common).
ON the other hand, I love the setting details... It seems almost steampunk in a way, and I like the details about the free cities and the Hegemony, and the spell names are great.

However, the description seems a bit short.. I'm not sure what other details you could put into it, besides perhaps a more detailed description of the thing, and perhaps notes about its crew, but it ends quite abruptly.

In any case, it's a good submission. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-20 04:54 PM
It was my pleasure. Go to Comment
30 Pirates
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Criminal/Espionage)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-20 04:48 PM
I, for my part, did not contribute to such an inflated average. It is good Scras work (as all Scras work is), and is very good for a 30, but it isn't leaping over that bar to become 5 material Go to Comment
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