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Arwin Lightfoot
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-05-13 09:05 PM
Different people, different elves.
She's entitled to have a different height for her elf than you, Tea. Go to Comment
Vinet Magos
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-22 05:52 PM
Thank you, anonymous.
Just what I was going to say. Your characters seem very one-dimensional because they have no defects.

Don't get discouraged, though. I didn't have that great a start, either.

By the way, you didn't have to say 'her mother' ever time, you could've just said 'she': "one day when her mother left to go get some magical items her mother never returned. Now at the age of 20 she searches for her mother and for the person who kidnapped her." Go to Comment
Vinet Magos
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-22 07:54 PM
Kay. Like I said, don't get discouraged. Just go with it.
(For more info on the topic of not getting discouraged, see the plot entitled "Desert of Death".) Go to Comment
Yuna Holystone
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-22 05:48 PM
Slow down, turbogenics.
Drop the controller.
Step away from Final Fantasy X.

Now, where are the defects in this character? The character is nothing but good things. It's somewhat unrealistic in this way. Perhaps just something, like a weakness to pain, or an intense fear of bugbears, or something like that...

Interesting start though, Holystone. Go to Comment
Yuna Holystone
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-07-01 12:37 PM
Klorgh.
This person obviously misunderstood the difference between video game RPGs and table-top RPGs. Go to Comment
RainBow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-19 05:29 PM
An interesting idea, but I don't play D&D. What do the various colored arrows do ("as per prismatic wall", which I assume is a D&D spell)? Go to Comment
RainBow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-19 05:29 PM
An interesting idea, but I don't play D&D. What do the various colored arrows do ("as per prismatic wall", which I assume is a D&D spell)? Go to Comment
The Armor of Glorious Returns
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-07-10 02:50 AM
This is a "rules-less" site. We try not to confine things to D&D or Palladium or any kind of rules systems. Go to Comment
The Armor of Glorious Returns
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-04-10 10:12 PM
I've got a better name for the item, since we were looking for one:
The Armor of Glorious Returns Go to Comment
Desert of Death
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-13 07:09 PM
That's the whole point. Besides, if the players were intending to cross the desert, they should have been ready for it. I never said it was an easy task. Go to Comment
Desert of Death
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-13 07:59 PM
Doesn't that seem like the way. The first plot in a series I make, and everyone likes it. But the second one fails utterly. It makes me sad.... Go to Comment
Desert of Death
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-14 05:25 PM
Heavy, man, heavy.
Oh well. I hope I can come up with something good for the third installment, "Beyond Daemonland". Go to Comment
Desert of Death
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-15 05:47 PM
Right.
Perhaps the Elephant God is not evil, but is dying because of the loss of the elephants or something like that. Go to Comment
Desert of Death
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-07-23 12:32 AM
Well, there you go. Go to Comment
Desert of Death
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-11-05 11:12 PM
I'm twenty-three. Go to Comment
We Generals Three
Plots  (Travel)   (Single-Storyline)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-01-21 06:02 PM
Not that it all really matters. It is less of a plot than a disturbing little interlude in the course of a larger adventure into Daemonland. Go to Comment
The king
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-08-02 03:18 PM
Way to give him some help, Anonymous.

Geez. Go to Comment
The king
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-08 10:39 PM
It's more of an idea, but it can be improved.

The cliche "Evil for Evil's Sake" kinda guy is just boring. Leave evil for evil's sake to Demons, who are it's epitome.

Nice start though, terra Nova. Go to Comment
Eris's Pool
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-07 05:19 PM
Ahah!
The plot progresses!
First, the PCs think that it's just the ogres pissing in the stream. But they learn from a local wizard that running water eliminates pollution. Then, they discover that the ogres have dammed up the stream, for some reason.... Go to Comment
Randolphina the Mighty
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-22 07:52 PM
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