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The Calm Alleys
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
B9anders's comment on 2006-08-20 08:15 AM
I kinda like the idea of a lawless but civilised area of town. It could use a few twists and plot hooks, but it does have an angle. Go to Comment
The Order of The Lost
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
B9anders's comment on 2009-05-08 11:30 AM
Excellent hook, but would like to see some more. Why does it have pull at the court? Is the undead a state threat?

They're knights, but odd knights so how are they received by the common people? Are they met with scorn among other knights? Go to Comment
The Guild of Magic
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
B9anders's comment on 2009-05-08 08:11 AM
Nice example of a worldspanning order and their role. Would have liked to know more about the structure of the organisation. Is there a central headquarter or is it more of a network of equal regional bases? How are decisions made? Is there a grand master or a council?

A few details on things like the binding vows (which suggests they have a restraining role on wizardry) and perhaps also different factions with the guild would be nice extra touches. Go to Comment
Chimera Oil
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
B9anders's comment on 2006-05-25 04:49 AM
I like it. How rare is it, any special and unique ingredients needed? Ways of keeping it moist obviously should be high on the agenda of any alchemist. Go to Comment
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