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Awake
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-20 04:14 PM
5/5 Nicest fluff yet for CE, Cunningham, LOL. Go to Comment
Triple Chaos, The Stolen World
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Mountains)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-19 11:04 AM
Yea , it was a little less funny than I thought it was. Go to Comment
Mikate (mee-kah-TAY)
Articles  (Fiction)   (Players)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-14 06:16 AM
4/5 a little too much on the 'travelogue" side for my tastes but well written and presented, nicely done. Go to Comment
Tannia Castle-the Outer Limits
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 07:49 AM
I am really torn on how to vote on this, on one hand it is a well thought out but basic city description, on the other it has a few neat ideas tucked away in it. I am left with the feeling that it needs more, Society maybe some notable locations and individuals. Also even I , the king of bad grammar noticed a few flaws. I think you have spent too much time on this to leave it as is, it is worth turning into something great. With holding vote. Go to Comment
Praesidium Qetesh
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 08:57 AM
4.5/ 5 Like this a lot, this is a very very natural outgrowth of human sexuallity with the tech at hand and men's image of it, fits seamlessly into CE, Great work. Go to Comment
Pennsylvannia 'Penny' Brown
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 04:25 PM
4/5 which is below average Scras but LOL inspector Gadget, it's well written but maybe I just don't get the joke. Still better than average. Go to Comment
The Five Metal Dragons
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 10:27 AM
4.5, love the continued depth of the CE and it's growth. Did this have any impact on the other AIs of other nations? Go to Comment
The Five Metal Dragons
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 09:45 AM
I think my question warrants a sub or at least a lengthy idea scroll added to this one, I think you might be overlooking or underestimating how this would effect CE, especially the Atlantic, just a thought. Go to Comment
The Five Metal Dragons
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 10:08 AM
The more I think about this, we are talking about an event thta would rival The Russian Revolution in it magnitude(I think that is an apt analogy) This has huge( for lack of a better word) geo-political shock waves, literally changing the balance of power in the entire solar system Go to Comment
Avacyia, Bishop of Time, The Stolen World
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 05:29 AM
Not a clue as she is concentraiting Go to Comment
Avacyia, Bishop of Time, The Stolen World
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 10:54 AM
Did drastic fix on this (WWSD) Go to Comment
Intelligence Ops in the Cosmic Era
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 10:52 AM
4/5 Nice overview with a little extra with Xword thingy, covers some good basics well Go to Comment
Inappropriate Tech
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 10:59 AM
3.5/5 Little bit of pervy fun, good CE fluff Go to Comment
Codex of Cosmic Era Ideas and Seeds
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 11:07 AM
4/5 Shear random CE prevents this from getting a higher score, but even as a semi finished piece deserves a 4, Several nice concepts are kind of thrown away here, but still nice CE add Go to Comment
Jester
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 11:11 AM
4.5/5 Very nice CE take on Batman's Joker, well done Go to Comment
The Andromeda Council
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 11:20 AM
5/5 Just plain: NICE!! avoiding the common pitfalls of HAL and yet a slightly flawed system Nicely Done!!!!!!Will HOH and re read to consider golden Go to Comment
The Andromeda Council
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-15 07:11 AM
I see a nice opportunity for a "Trump" like individual , who does not want to play ball with the AI, lots of good intreage possibilities, ending in some wetwork. Go to Comment
30 Sceptres
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 11:30 AM
4.5/5 Very Nice VERY Very Close to a 5 for me but there are about 3-4 duds in a mix with PURE GOLD!!!!!!! Go to Comment
Phantom Warriors of The Stolen World
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (World Wide)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 06:59 AM
I work backwards into concepts, I come up with neat ideas then go out of my way to justify them, in some cases this will not work well.In other cases, like this. many interesting concept fall from it. What would this do to society? I am going to explore this in the "Kaiim " city sub I have planned. It will be a central hub of the Stolen World. Maybe we can collab on that one Scras. Go to Comment
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 08:11 AM
The hex is not metagame, I went to the Stevie Wonder school of Art and Mapmaking, I use crude drawings on lined paper for my maps, PCs never see them. Go to Comment
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When The Wind Blows

       By: Murometz

One day a a wind begins to blow out of the West. The next day it gets stronger. And stronger still the next few days. Eventually (and fortunately), the speed of the wind tops out at a steady fifty miles an hour, but continues to blow. Soon an entire kingdom is wondering why it's not abating. The weather mages deem it unnatural but can't seem to banish or control it. The priests of various faiths claim it's divine. The End-Of-Days crowd is having a field day with their predictions of doom. No one knows why the gale persists. When inquiring with neighboring kingdoms, it seems they too suffer from a persistent western mistral. Eventually the populace begins to adapt to living with a twenty four hour a day wind. Always from the West, and perpetual. What could be causing this? A raging Elemental king? a curse from the gods? an unearthed artifact? Or has Nature itself gone haywire?

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