I am really torn on how to vote on this, on one hand it is a well thought out but basic city description, on the other it has a few neat ideas tucked away in it. I am left with the feeling that it needs more, Society maybe some notable locations and individuals. Also even I , the king of bad grammar noticed a few flaws. I think you have spent too much time on this to leave it as is, it is worth turning into something great. With holding vote. Go to Comment
I think my question warrants a sub or at least a lengthy idea scroll added to this one, I think you might be overlooking or underestimating how this would effect CE, especially the Atlantic, just a thought. Go to Comment
The more I think about this, we are talking about an event thta would rival The Russian Revolution in it magnitude(I think that is an apt analogy) This has huge( for lack of a better word) geo-political shock waves, literally changing the balance of power in the entire solar system Go to Comment
Shadows, Mirrors and Flames. Three things we have all seen and not given much thought to. What if in each of these things you could find entire alternate planes of existance? Shadows move but what they are shadowing does not. Mirrors show us what others can easily see. Flames dance and twirl inviting you to dance only to scorch you when you get close. These three things hold much mystery. What if you could harness their powers? Heh...
Ideas ( System ) | November 28, 2003 |