I am really torn on how to vote on this, on one hand it is a well thought out but basic city description, on the other it has a few neat ideas tucked away in it. I am left with the feeling that it needs more, Society maybe some notable locations and individuals. Also even I , the king of bad grammar noticed a few flaws. I think you have spent too much time on this to leave it as is, it is worth turning into something great. With holding vote. Go to Comment
I think my question warrants a sub or at least a lengthy idea scroll added to this one, I think you might be overlooking or underestimating how this would effect CE, especially the Atlantic, just a thought. Go to Comment
The more I think about this, we are talking about an event thta would rival The Russian Revolution in it magnitude(I think that is an apt analogy) This has huge( for lack of a better word) geo-political shock waves, literally changing the balance of power in the entire solar system Go to Comment
I work backwards into concepts, I come up with neat ideas then go out of my way to justify them, in some cases this will not work well.In other cases, like this. many interesting concept fall from it. What would this do to society? I am going to explore this in the "Kaiim " city sub I have planned. It will be a central hub of the Stolen World. Maybe we can collab on that one Scras. Go to Comment
One day a a wind begins to blow out of the West. The next day it gets stronger. And stronger still the next few days. Eventually (and fortunately), the speed of the wind tops out at a steady fifty miles an hour, but continues to blow. Soon an entire kingdom is wondering why it's not abating. The weather mages deem it unnatural but can't seem to banish or control it. The priests of various faiths claim it's divine. The End-Of-Days crowd is having a field day with their predictions of doom. No one knows why the gale persists. When inquiring with neighboring kingdoms, it seems they too suffer from a persistent western mistral. Eventually the populace begins to adapt to living with a twenty four hour a day wind. Always from the West, and perpetual. What could be causing this? A raging Elemental king? a curse from the gods? an unearthed artifact? Or has Nature itself gone haywire?