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30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 11:27 AM
My computer skills are that primative......thanx Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 05:40 PM
No , I'm sorry. My spell check stoped working and I'm too much an IDIOT to figure out how to fix it. I have a new chrome book and it doesn't show me the squiggly lines that it used to.I'd be greatful for some help in this matter and again I am sorry. Go to Comment
30 Lost Worlds for Supers or Modern Horror
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-10 09:58 AM
I am both honored and ashamed, Muro and Echo both have pitched in to fix my gemmer and spelling, I am sorry I presented a good idea in a terribly sloppy way. I'm not submitting anything new untill I figure out spell check on my new chrome book. I'm am thankful and sorry, I feel like I misused this site. again sorry Go to Comment
Direct Neural Programming Psychosis
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Specific)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 09:17 AM
4.5/5 Ver Nice!, great stuff that I never thought of in quite this way. Go to Comment
Direct Neural Programming Psychosis
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Specific)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 09:19 AM
Matrix Apoc. Zombies

What if this took years to manifest. Nearly the whole planet could start to unravel, could go Walking Dead, 28 Days Later or Serenity. Great start for an Apocolypse and best idea for a zombie plague ever! Go to Comment
AI as NPCs
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Cyberspace)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-01 08:10 AM
4/5 but half point for 'infomorph' so 4.5/5, one thing I would disagree with is reproduction. interaction with humans who have such a strong need to reproduce should lead to the same drine in a higher functioning infomorph Go to Comment
The Rainbow Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-06 08:06 AM
I was thinking it would be nice w/ a couple of epic level powers that define it a little better maybe high death stuff, an epic defence(parry?) perhaps a little special effects that suround user(storm?) I get that you are going for mystery, but I dont think a little more specific on abilities could hurt. Don't get me wrong it IS good , I just feel a little definition would go a long way w/ this Go to Comment
The Rainbow Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-01 08:17 AM
Good artifact level item, prob go into some add'l specifics on it ,rather than make it an overall paragon of a sword, but nice 4/5 Go to Comment
On LGBT Characters
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-01 08:38 AM
3.5/5 Male insecurity of male homosexuals is going to be the last hurtle our sociaty needs to jump over. I am secure enough in my self identity to say I'm still a little squemish around efemenate men. It's not really the gay thing I have a problem with. Just can't wrap my head around if your attracted to men,and you don't want Charles Bronson, you want Rue Paul.Makes me scratch my head. Go to Comment
The Last Submission About Voting and Commenting
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Citadel Help)
Aramax's comment on 2015-08-29 06:59 PM
The last word 5/5 Go to Comment
The Immortal Worms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 09:24 AM
4.5/5 Excellant take on the ubiquitus rot grub. You took a mildly good idea and breathed total life into it! I don't know what everybody else saw in it but this is great! Go to Comment
Response Set
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Aramax's comment on 2015-08-26 11:28 AM
subs under the catagory of 'normal' are ready for viewing and voting,There are other
catagories for subs if this is 'Under Construction" Go to Comment
Response Set
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 09:27 AM
4/5 Great thinking fodder for the novice to moderately skilled GM, while I don't see me using it, it def should apeal to the 'Tables and crunch ' kind of DM.Well presented Go to Comment
KiKi
NPCs  (Extras)   (Technical)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-08 09:30 AM
Very Nice 4.5/5 Would love to see more of these Scras!!!!!!! Go to Comment
Johnny's Sling
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Aramax's comment on 2015-08-21 06:30 PM
Um.....no Go to Comment
Carry-All
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Aramax's comment on 2015-09-01 08:59 AM
4/5 prob would go for a higher vote but without a combat role these craft are almost but not quite fluff. Linited use in gaming also gets it a slightly lower vote(pretty much just usable asa "victim" in need of rescue) Prob should have been attached to a more usefull sub. That being said there is a lot of room for rping potential in this and does fillin the CE nicely Go to Comment
The Celestial Dragon Suit
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Aramax's comment on 2015-08-17 02:11 PM
The Nine Rivers Dance
Lost to history, there are many myths surrounding it. The truth is if this forgotten dance is found it could have a profound effect on the provinces war capabilities. The Dance causes the closest major river to reverse course, enabling warships to very rapidly go up river.It was also once used to evacuate a port city from a supernatural event. The river will turn to sea water for 3 days, the length of the reversal. Go to Comment
The Celestial Dragon Suit
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Aramax's comment on 2015-08-17 02:26 PM
The Jade Dance Troop
7 young virgins are gathered every third spring to learn the Dragon Dances. Onlookers are amazed at how well the untrained dancers perform.They are kept secluded and pampered but are paraded around on public holidays, but they are never dancing out of costume. A smell of opium surrounds the girls and they often don't seem aware of their surroundins,yet in costume they are supurb.

The Reallity
The Jade is a front. The true dancers are well paid and live around the city. They are mostly 35-50 year old men. The troup is so no one can kill or bribe the true dancers. It is a closely held secret Go to Comment
The Celestial Dragon Suit
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Aramax's comment on 2015-08-25 10:19 AM
Still 2 days till HoH and counting............ Go to Comment
The Celestial Dragon Suit
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Aramax's comment on 2015-08-17 01:34 PM
5/5 Will HoH when time comes. I try and think of an extra dance or 2 Go to Comment
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