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Normandy Class
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-26 05:00 AM
4/5 Nice background fluff for CE w nice crunch, didnt crunch the numbers but seems a bit small for all it does? Nice Go to Comment
Liathghorm Salmon, or the Salmon of Knowledge
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-26 05:12 AM
5/5 I didnt want to like this. I hate fish, hate, em, amazing sub will HoH Go to Comment
Selan, the Travellers
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-26 05:19 AM
4/5 very nice logical flow of an idea from ST lore. Would have preferred to see a little more specifics of say the origin race, but its a minor quibble. Go to Comment
Billy Feldsham
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-26 05:22 AM
4/5 Very nice minor character with super cool ability Go to Comment
Planar Cosmology of The Stolen World
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-24 08:37 AM
Lol are you following Stolen or did the misspell just GLARE at you? LOL Go to Comment
Goldeveki's Chimera
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-20 05:45 AM
4.5/5 Nice, really like the unicorn bit that is tuff to figure out, and the multitude of heads thing is nice, with hydra seemly like it is overarching DNA. Go to Comment
Awake
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-20 04:14 PM
5/5 Nicest fluff yet for CE, Cunningham, LOL. Go to Comment
Triple Chaos, The Stolen World
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Mountains)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-19 11:04 AM
Yea , it was a little less funny than I thought it was. Go to Comment
Mikate (mee-kah-TAY)
Articles  (Fiction)   (Players)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-14 06:16 AM
4/5 a little too much on the 'travelogue" side for my tastes but well written and presented, nicely done. Go to Comment
Tannia Castle-the Outer Limits
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 07:49 AM
I am really torn on how to vote on this, on one hand it is a well thought out but basic city description, on the other it has a few neat ideas tucked away in it. I am left with the feeling that it needs more, Society maybe some notable locations and individuals. Also even I , the king of bad grammar noticed a few flaws. I think you have spent too much time on this to leave it as is, it is worth turning into something great. With holding vote. Go to Comment
Praesidium Qetesh
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 08:57 AM
4.5/ 5 Like this a lot, this is a very very natural outgrowth of human sexuallity with the tech at hand and men's image of it, fits seamlessly into CE, Great work. Go to Comment
Pennsylvannia 'Penny' Brown
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 04:25 PM
4/5 which is below average Scras but LOL inspector Gadget, it's well written but maybe I just don't get the joke. Still better than average. Go to Comment
The Five Metal Dragons
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 10:27 AM
4.5, love the continued depth of the CE and it's growth. Did this have any impact on the other AIs of other nations? Go to Comment
The Five Metal Dragons
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 09:45 AM
I think my question warrants a sub or at least a lengthy idea scroll added to this one, I think you might be overlooking or underestimating how this would effect CE, especially the Atlantic, just a thought. Go to Comment
The Five Metal Dragons
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-13 10:08 AM
The more I think about this, we are talking about an event thta would rival The Russian Revolution in it magnitude(I think that is an apt analogy) This has huge( for lack of a better word) geo-political shock waves, literally changing the balance of power in the entire solar system Go to Comment
Avacyia, Bishop of Time, The Stolen World
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 05:29 AM
Not a clue as she is concentraiting Go to Comment
Avacyia, Bishop of Time, The Stolen World
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-12 10:54 AM
Did drastic fix on this (WWSD) Go to Comment
Intelligence Ops in the Cosmic Era
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Trans World)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 10:52 AM
4/5 Nice overview with a little extra with Xword thingy, covers some good basics well Go to Comment
Inappropriate Tech
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 10:59 AM
3.5/5 Little bit of pervy fun, good CE fluff Go to Comment
Codex of Cosmic Era Ideas and Seeds
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
Aramax's comment on 2017-02-11 11:07 AM
4/5 Shear random CE prevents this from getting a higher score, but even as a semi finished piece deserves a 4, Several nice concepts are kind of thrown away here, but still nice CE add Go to Comment
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