jejeje... If only I have more time... Im working in a big plot, of a few thousand years long, and im trying to get all the pieces together.
The War of Titans is a confrontation between humans and dragons. With time, these dragoons began to be called Titans by the survivors. Today nobody know about dragons, and nobody has seen any Titan. They are history, legend.
And the idea is that Dragons do not forget... Go to Comment
what if the witch is the mother of Erik?
What if the witch is a demoness?
Erik could have to choice betwen his mortal blood and his demonic legacy...
It could be a great tragedy... the prelude of an antagonist...
Now I like it more... :)
PD: sorry for my bad english Go to Comment
It was not my intention to be derisive. If I sounded that way, Im sorry. Im not good in english, so I make some mistakes.
And about the plot. I did not like it, seemed very simple. But, as I said in a previous commentary, now that I read it better it seems that I hurried when judging it.
PD: Im VERY sorry for my bad english. Go to Comment